Reviewer: twibot13 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2013 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

I hope you intend to complete this story as I hate cliffhangers. This is fantastic reading and I love love love it! Have just found the Twilighted site and found your stories the best that I've read. Please Please PLEASE don't stop here!!!

Reviewer: KB94 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

KEEP WRITING!! PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

Ok, my question is... why didn't they just hit alice again?, it clearly worked the last time. Go as far as taking off her head if they need to. They can surely put it back together. Clearly her vision caused by her need to save her family by creating false futures made by false decisions has serious side effects on her/edward/jasper. So why don't they just disconnect her?. (for a while)

Reviewer: anna4 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

Omg!! Cliffie much! Was in tears reading this! You are such a talented writer and it is such a pleasure and delight to read this story! Please promise there will be an update VERY soon! Is it up on ffn this story (I have no patience!) xxox Anna

Reviewer: forevercounts (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Intro to Transcendence - Sequel to A Darker Shade of Twilight

ok, now that i screamed a bit... i'll get to it, i read the first in like 2 days... i was engulffed with the story! Hard, angsty, but the love of everyone for bella was my anchor... i love these stories, the family types... but now im aching... i REALLY am, you have no idea how sad that last chapter made me... it was like... nooooo you're playing with me!!!! it hurt... it really hurt... im just holding on because i read all ur responses that u do plan to finish it... so... i am adding u to my alerts, and i HOPE u keep up ur promise... because i NEED to know what happened and what its going to happen... too much sorrow!!! agh!!! so... thank u for ur stories, they are wonderfully written and very creative... now... get to work and finish it!! ;) jeje (with lots of luv of course)

Author's Response:

I love your enthusiasm and I sincerely appreciate your support and feedback. I promise I will finish this story. I've recently started back on it and it's getting close. I'm working on it really hard. IT WILL BE COMPLETED. I don't imagine there'll be many people left to care, but as you're one of them, I can only thank you for waiting.

<3 <3 <3 Mel xoxo

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 7 - And So It Begins

Again another well don ch. No worries about the story not being done. I've written 2 stories...one is currently going on and the other...well....I kinda left it.  They are related at all one...Amends is cannon story between NM and E, then other Hamartia Rocks is a NM AU. It's been months since Amends updates and I only have 1 ch left, but it sucks. I want to write a good final chapter and it just sucks. So my readers (if they are still there) have to wait until it's...at least good enough.

Author's Response:

Well aren't you a sweetheart for understanding. I feel the same way - I don't want to post until I feel like it's good enough, or at the very least not too sucky LOL! There's more to it than that, but that is a big part of it, too. I don't think I have too many readers left at this stage either, but I have promised I will finish it, so however long it takes, I will make it happen. So thanks for hanging in there.  :-)

Cheers - M xoxo

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Party

WOW! What a good birthday twist.

I think Jake is lurking...hence the foreboding.

Author's Response:

Well it's Bella's birthday so there's just got to be dramaz a plenty! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

MWAH - M xo

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brand New

It was sweet and perfect.

Author's Response:

I wish I'd caught you before you started this. I'd have told you to hold off. I love that you enjoyed the first chapter so much but this story is incomplete (so far). I promise I will finish it, though. It's LONG overdue to update but I will be finishing it. But I apologise right now for the frustration you will have when you reach the last chapter and know that the next one won't be coming for a while. Sorry! Just know that it WILL be coming eventually. Thanks for being such a loyal reader and reviewer. I really appreciate it. 

Cheers - Mel xo

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

Alright, I say this with love but it's a shitty thing leaving this story sitting here like this.   I just found A Darker Shade of Twilight and this sequel and have spent a good part of a week binge reading them.  I know in the reviews you've said you plan to come back to it sometime so I just want to add my begging voice to theirs. :)  

Author's Response:

I completely understand your feelings about this. But it was either leave everything up while I take an eternity to finish writing the rest of Transcendence, or take both fics down.  I decided to leave them up.  Transcendence WILL be finished. Not as quickly as you'd like, but it definitely will be.  No begging required.  Thanks so much for being interested enough to read and review - I do appreciate it. Just know that this fic will be finished unlike others I'm still holding out hope for on my alerts list LOL!!! 

Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

I'm so in love with this story since ADSOT...please, keep writing, and I promise I'll keep reading and dreaming about your characters

Baci

Anna

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your great feedback.  I realise I'm incredibly overdue in posting a chapter update (what an understatement), but I DO intend to finish this story.  I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

Cheers - Mel

Reviewer: JDoskey (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

Please, please finish yuor story.  I don't care how long I have to wait (like Bella I'll wait)!

 

Jen

Author's Response:

I will finish this story - eventually. Thanks for your support - I greatly appreciate it.

Cheers Mel xoxo

Reviewer: nikkistew (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

Are you going to update?

Author's Response:

Yes, I am going to be updating, but the update process will be very slow.  Readers may prefer to keep me on alert and wait until the story is finally complete before continuing to read. Thanks for your interest.

Cheers - Mel

Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Only Human

you are an evil evil person to end it there. as alway what a wonderful chater, a little heard to read considering we are going threw a death in the family, iv been stilling away a little time inbeteen all the family that needs me to read this chapter and sadley its been about my only joy this week i thought he was never going to wake up and whill hereing about funarles i have been crying lol but as always a wonderfule story i give it a ten again...

 

things a people are always not what they seem even if you know someone compleatly and for years and years you can never turly know what there thoughts are and what there heart beats for its the heardest thing in life to lurn people are not going to be who you want them to be, but know that we can be who we want to be to make are family and world better for the rest of us... yah i am confused to but it made sense when i was typing it,,, its been a long week...

 

amy

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry you've been going through such a difficult time.  It makes me appreciate it even more that you would even bother reading let alone taking the time out to review for me.  THANK YOU.  And I agree totally about how we can never really truly "know" someone.  It's so easy to be disappointed because I think we often create this picture in our hearts and minds of who we want people to be, then it's crushing when it turns out that they aren't that at all.  But in spite of all that, your positive outlook is very inspiring.  At the end of the day, it's up to us to be true to ourselves and the people we love.  Again, thank you so much for your review.  Take care.

Mel