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Reviewer: Kurzar (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
I loved it. It fit perfectly with Breaking Dawn. It almost seems like thats what Stephine Meyers had thought about in her head while actually writing it. My rating is very high. Couldn't of had a better story.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Really nice, very hot, like I pictured what would have happened, you did a great job with your honeymoon one shot!
Reviewer: singingkat (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Good writing style...I liked how you kept this scene true to the characters. Nicely done :)
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Loved it. I loved how you kept to there characters and did not over do it. Though it would have been nice for him to orally please her first.
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
well done!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
beautiful. very "in-character". great job!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
I have read this same scene dozens of times but I must say yours was outstanding. Very very well done. I am a big fan of your style. Keep up the writing.
Reviewer: xoamyxo85 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
This is the first comment that I've ever written for someone, and I've read many stories. This story was absolutely AWESOME! I wish there was more to read! I would imagine that's how it would've been if Stephenie would've written it. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
So beautiful and beautifully written.
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Wow, great story, you should write more!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
That was beautifully descriptive. I loved it! Great job!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
great job
Reviewer: catharticone (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
I really enjoyed this! I particularly liked this line: “You make me feel like my heart’s still beating.” Awww...
Reviewer: nettie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
omg I LOVE THIS. It was so intense and amorous.
Reviewer: llynn20 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 - One Shot
Very realistic scenario and respectful of the occasion. Great visual writing style. :)
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