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Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 08:14 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
PLEASE DON'T ABANDON US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON :)
Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 04:38 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
hey Ironic hoping that you continue the story soon. I am definitly starting to miss my fave story. Hope life is going well for you.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:42 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Hello there Ironic - just popping by to see if you have any more to tell us. I hope that you will continue this beautiful story soon.
Best Wishes xx
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 04:17 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
awwww..... i loved it!!! but when is edward gunna tell bella he loves her? this is killing me!!!! sure, they're dating, but if he doesnt tell her soon, they won't be anymore!!!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 12:22 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Ohhhh Ironic! I am so excited - do you know why I am excited? Because last time I predicted when you were going to update and I was spot on the money. Guess what - I can feel an update coming on!
Can't wait to read it bb - almost there. Loving this fic till the end.
xxx
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 11:02 AM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Still love this story. Keep it coming on!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 11:34 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Oh noes..... this is not good at all.
I'm not sure why Bella all of a sudden believes that she is more invested than Edward in their relationship. I guess his intention on 'honoring her request' is backfiring and now she just feels neglected and unloved.......
I really hope that they work this out and Bella actually tells him what she is thinking - hopefully there won't be any need for the Nana pj's tomorrow night! xx
Reviewer: psjenkins (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 01:17 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Really hope you continue with this story and update soon if possible. Really enjoying. Thanks, Pam
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 08:09 AM · On: The Aftermath
Hot, definitely hot!
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 07:50 AM · On: This is Hard
HOLY HOT SEX IN A CONFERENCE ROOM! Loving this story, onto the next chapter!
Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:09 AM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
She needs to tell him how she feels. Then she would know for sure and she can move on or whatever. They both really need to communicate with each other. Edward is just as guilty.
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 03:22 AM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
Are these two ever going to be on the same page?
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 12:40 AM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
mmm very very good keepup the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 09:57 PM · On: It's Going to be a Long Weekend
thanks for the update, I missed it.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Frustration
Ooo - getting so very excited now as I know that there has to be an update just around the corner!!!!!!!
Loving this story xxx
Author's Response: I submitted an update, but it hasn't been posted yet.
Reviewer: manda375 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 03:02 PM · On: A Big Mistake
I love this story - waiting patiently for an update :)
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Frustration
Loved the BD scene! It fit so nicely into the scenario here.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 12:13 PM · On: Frustration
WOW THIS WAS VERY VERY GOOD KEEP UPTHE GREAT WORK AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:53 PM · On: Frustration
So how long before you complete this story? I love it but how to read something that its done.. Please update soon TY
Reviewer: AprilNicole (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 06:33 AM · On: Frustration
thank you thank you...thank you so much
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Dinner Plans
You had asked me, after my review for "frustration", what I thought about the diner scene earlier on. In looking for that, I found a perfect example of tribute to the source in your writing...
Emmett rolled his eyes. “Rose isn’t blind. You should see the two of you when you’re together. It’s like she’s an extension of you. Or you’re an extension of her. If one of you moves, the other does. It’s kinda’ freaky how in tune you two are.”
Why I think this is so nicely done is because
A: you're taking the same material from Eclipse and putting it in a different person's mouth
B: The situation isn't the same. Instead of commenting on the intensity of Bella's relationship, the tribute quote is being used to show Edward how much she cares
C: (and most importantly) You used the meaning but did very little direct wording from the source.
I'd be willing to bet you weren't even consciously doing it.
So, because you asked for it, there's my two cents on paying tribute to the source material in fan-fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you for the example. It clarifies your previous concern and helps me understand better what you like as far as canon reference and what you see as too much. I'm sure you're not the only person who feels this way, but you are the only one who reached out to me and attempted to explain your feelings. Thank you again!!
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:04 AM · On: Frustration
Loved you play on the BD "morning after". God, these two need to be less stubborn. Bella refusing to drop the teaching idea and Edward deciding to abstain for an undetermined amount of time. Let's hope this romantic getaway clears up the problems. Can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:00 AM · On: A Big Mistake
could remind me where the diner scene was, so I can re-read it again and give you a solid answer?
thx
Author's Response: Sure! Chapter 30, Reconciliation in Three Acts. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Frustration
I Much prefer to read your own creative work. You integrated BD well, but if I want to read BD, I'll go pick up BD.
Author's Response: Thank you for expressing your opinion in a thoughtful and polite manner. I had one other reader disagree with my decision to incorporate the canon scene in this chapter and she was neither thoughtful nor polite. As you can imagine, I'm much more interested in your thoughts and feelings than hers. I do have a question for you. What was your opinion of the scene from the diner? (Where Edward takes Bella to a diner for breakfast after a late night.) That scene was similar to the first scene of this chapter in that I pulled it from Twilight/Midnight Sun. If that scene didn't bother you can you tell me why? I'm trying to determind how much canon is "too much canon." Thank you for reading and reviewing. If you prefer you can answer me on my message board here at Twilighted. Best, IT
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=7258&st=0&sk=t&sd=a
Reviewer: AprilNicole (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 10:52 AM · On: I Need You
please keep writing your readers are dying over here...ill beg if i have too...i will consider me begging, Edward and Bella totally need a happy ending in this one
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