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Reviewer: jgonzales304 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 8
Are Jake and Bella together? I'm confused about that. I really, really, really hope that they aren't.
Anywho, I cannot wait to read more! I hope you can update as soon as you can. :)
Reviewer: mrsmitchell (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 8
I like this so far, I can't wait to see more
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awe.... his angel.
Alrighty then... let's get this show on the road.
I am hoping Bella is the one that can keep her cool and Edward is the one with the foot in mouth syndrome.
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thank god for Rose!
Will Edward ask for after school tutoring from Bella??? Will Jake find a way to foil Edwards plans???? Does Em have any idea what is really going on???
I am hoping you have some answers for my questions!
Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Gah! Very nice. I like seeing the rational side of Edward and taking care of business...or should I say Bella. Really like seeing him be the bigger man and refusing to get into it with Jake when Bella was in pain.
Right on!
Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
It's fun to see Rosalie being such a sport, especially when she is cheering on grilled meat.
Hilarious.
Yea Bella! Nice to see her stand up for herself and get in the game!
Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Bella to the rescue!!! Nicely handled!!!
Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ahh Edward...always the gentleman.
Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Jake...what a neanderthal! Ugh.
Keep going! I look forward to more.
Reviewer: kaylamarieswan (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 8
more more feed me more!
please!
=]
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying this so far. I just wanted to pop in just comment on Jake ... he's not so subtle about making sure Edward knows about his relationship with "his" Bells, huh? Bella seems to have a lot personality and wit in her own right, but she allows herself to be overrun by the boyz at least that is how it seems in these opening chapters. Can't wait to see how this develops and factors in to her relationship with Edward and hopefully the end of her relationship with Jake.
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
So sweet! And how convenient, almost as if the fates are working on Edward's behalf. :)
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
i love that u made edward a history nerd :) I am to LOL. i am going to teach middle school social studies as soon as i finish my teaching degree
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
It seems that Emmett is trying to help him out.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmmm....why would 3 weeks have passed since B&E have even spoken to each other? Considering how she was feeling about Edward after helping her with her sprained wrist, wouldn't she have sought him out at school or something to thank him for being so kind to her? Wouldn't Edward have gone to see her and inquire about her wrist? 3 weeks? 3 days I get. But 3 weeks?
In any respect, I'm thrilled that Edward is going to be branching out as a teacher now. I know this story has barely just begun, but I'm already attached to it. Please post more asap. I just can't get enough!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
hee hee hee....can't wait for fun times at bowlarama!
Great story; great chapter!
Author's Response: oh...it will be amazing. LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 7
i liked that alot more please!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update. Terrific chapter!
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm liking the story and can't wait to read more. Bella, however, is working my nerves. She's boo hooing over why Edward left, why would he stay when he thinks she and Jake are together...duh, he's not trying to over-step his bounds. She needs to wake up and grow up a bit too.
I hope that didn't come off too harsh, cause I do like the story.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
Just kick jake to the curb. I mean the guy is a giant ass! Good chapter!
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ahhhh...that's how.
Author's Response: Hee hee.
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
"in my arms"...???
How on earth did she get there?
Author's Response: Next chappie...lol.
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 7
Go on and dump Jake, Bella! DO IT!!!!!!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
kick Jake to the curb.....like right now
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 6
I have just discovered this story and am already completely in love with it. This has the makings of a great telling of the very truest of love stories. I can't wait for more. Please update asap.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it!
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