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Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
This was brutal, so sad and we still don't know what they want.
The chapters are kind of short compared to other fics. Which is both good bad. Good that I don't get logged out between reads, and bad that validation takes so long and then you get a shorter chapter. It is what it is, though.
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very good, but short. You know that already, but for being your first attempt at anything outside of humor, it is really very good.
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Angelina Jolie, meet Bella Swan...
Bella Swan, Angelina Jolie.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 14
please hurry back to us so we can learn more about the future escape plans
Reviewer: monimolina (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
Hi, I usually don't read incomplete stories, I wait until they're complete to read them because I get hooked and don't stop reading until I'm done. Your story however caught my eye and has been in my favorites for a while because the summary interested me. I've been waiting for it to be finished but I have to admit my curiosity got the best of me and I read it even though it is still in the works. OH MY GOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!!! It is sooooo GOOD!!!!!! Now I am royally screwed because I can't wait to see what'll happen next and can't wait for Bella to rescue Edward and have them live happily ever after... I love your story, so full of emotion and feeling, my heart breaks for Edward!!! Thank you so much for the story, you are incredibly talented. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
she seems so stiff and unfeeling, but I guess she's used to being that way since she has no real close ties to anyone...good job so far. I know this doesn't help, but some times when you're really into a story you don't want to review, you just want to hit "next"! But, I will try harder for you. LOL
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, I'll review! So far bad ass Bella is awesome. She's all about the job, but it's kinda sad that it's all she has. So far so good as far as the story goes. I'm still reading!!
Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 13
Really great chapter, its good to see another person on board trying to get Edward out! Lets hope she doesn't give anything away :)
That cliffie was meann..now I really want to know what happens haha :D Poor Edward!! At least now he has someone trying to look out for him at least.
My fic recommendations at the would be:
Cauchemar Vivant by Lunar Siren - a reallyy good story where vampires have revealed themselves and humans are at war against them :) It's soo good for action!
Also, I like How To Save a Life by unholy_obsession - sad, but amazing :) AU AH.
I don't know what type of fics you like so I'm just recommending ones that I like at the moment haha :D
Anyway, I look forward to your next update so much :) <3
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 13
Love the story, please update soon.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
Poor Adrienne - its good that bella shared oh i hope she doesnt get into trouble for helping edward
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
OH my GOD! Caius is just one sick freak!!! The Volturi just disgust me, how could people be so sadistic in what they do. Adrienne's story just breaks my heart, and now with Edward. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
Agh! How is Bella just going to sit and watch??? Ok, I have a bunch of recs for you. I am a fanfic addict and I've probably read close to 300 fics; I know what I'm talking about. LOL. Ok. Here goes:
Clipped Wings and Inked Armor by hunterhunting. Literally the best fic I have ever read. It's in progress, but it is close to completion. Don't read it if you don't like angst though. Angst is this fic's middle name.
Edward Wallbanger by feathersmmmm. Absolutely hilarious. I fell off my chair laughing at this one. WIP.
The Naked Guy Upstairs by AngryBadgerGirl. Smut-tastic. Cute and fluffy. Minor angst and a great romance story. WIP. PS: Edward is a doctor....
Master of the Unverse by Snowqueens Icedragon. This is a Domward fic but not in the way you would expect. There is ALOT of smut, but there is also a very intricate plot as well. I HIGHLY reccomend it.
On fanfiction.net: The University of Edward Masen by SebastienRobichaud is an absolute MUST READ. Don't even question me. Go. Read it now. Seriously.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 13
agh i hate cliffys well anyway good chapter
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
yes you love the cliffies but oooo i love the story
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG! You stopped there?! Are you trying to torture me!?
This was a great chapter! I'm glad Bella has help now, I just hope Adrienne is a good person and won't ruin anything.
Can't wait for the next update!! Soon? Pretty please? For me?
hehe. Good work!
-Haley
Reviewer: barrelreese_88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
ohhh please update soon! its gettin good.
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
I really like Edward's POV! This story is amazing, when I found it I quickly read all the chapters. Update soon, please.
Reviewer: barrelreese_88 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 12
Keep Writing! Its good. :)
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
Bella to the rescue! Great!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Go get 'um, Bella! Great writing! I suck at reviews but I know what I like and I'm there till the end. ;)
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1
I'm in! I want to see Bella kick some butt and save Edward for a change!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
I hope that Bella can bandage him up. He probably has alot of infections. Poor Edward. I hope he can keep his outlook hopeful. If he starts to lose hope, there really isn't much left for him to live for. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ah, his angel has come. Finally! Maybe, things will be looking up from here...
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 10
Whoa. Definitely exciting. I liked Luca, but I know he had to die. It is still sad though.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 9
Yikes. Bella is fucked indeed. And not just in the metaphorical sense either.
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