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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:25 AM · On: English Alba
she has been bitten before and nothing happened to her... why would carlisle be worried about this bite?? i wonder what is going on with that... can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: You probably didn't read properly. The Cullen's don't know exactly what Bella is, and for the moment, they are giving her the benefit of the doubt that she is human. Therefore a vampire bite would be something to worry about - for a human.
Remember: different POV's have different knowledge.
Thanks for reviewing.
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:53 AM · On: English Alba
I really do love this story. I will give you a ten, I would give you a 20 rating if it went that high!
Author's Response: You warmed my heart with that comment, you really did. Thank to so much for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:40 AM · On: English Alba
Thanks for updating! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for thanking me for updating. It's a refreshing break from the incessant demands to update. :-)
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: alice-cullen-104 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:18 AM · On: English Alba
i NEED to know what happens! i love this story! it's so cute!!!!! i can't wait to see what the cullens do when they find out what bella is! write wen u can!!!!10/10
Author's Response: That's a lot of exclaimation marks!!!! And thanks for ranking me a full score; which is duly appreciated.
I am planning on uploading another chapter soon, no need to fret.
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:43 AM · On: English Alba
i like your story very much... please update ASAP
Author's Response: I'm planning on updating asap, so don't need to fret.
Thanks for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:51 AM · On: English Alba
Great story, post soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:11 AM · On: English Alba
Agh!! you cant end the chapter like that! Evil Cliffie!!!!!
update soon!!!!
Author's Response: LOL. I can end the chapter like that, and I just did! WARNING: I love cliffhangers... reading AND writing them...
Thanks for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 01:19 AM · On: English Alba
ooo love it, bella and edward are so cute together! please don't let us wait so long for an update, i'm totally hooked!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm planning on updating as soon as I can!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:50 PM · On: English Alba
Definatly my new favorite.. good work and good luck
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks for the review!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: LMCullen (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:43 PM · On: English Alba
Scary! Please do update, i am so hooked on your story
Author's Response: Don't worry, I am planning on updating as soon as I can.
Thanks for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:32 PM · On: English Alba
Started reading this and couldn't stop. I'm likeing this story very much. I've put this in my Fav list. Hope to see more chapters Please.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! If you want more, go to my FFn account, but just a heads up, I send all my beta'ed chapters here. Those ones are unchecked and are subject to change.
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: elektrik_lady (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:05 PM · On: English Alba
Yes! I liked the way he asked her to the dance. <3
Author's Response: Took me ages to figure out the sweetest way to do it.
Thanks for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: blueausten (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:16 PM · On: English Alba
i don't quite understand.Edward is suppose to over react to EVERYTHING. and he's suppose to be really careful when he's with Bella. But overall. you're really good.Keep it up. and maybe someday you can start writing your own book. Good luck!!!
Author's Response: Umm, I warned about OOCness in the summary. Edward isn't meant to be as angsty (he will be more later on) and he has a strong impression that Bella isn't human, thus he isn't as overly paranoid. Oh, she isn't his "singer" so he has more self control around her.
Thanks for reviewing! I don't think that I'll ever write a book of my own though.
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: parash13 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Stormy Night
Hey I'm looooooooovin this so far! Thanks for not giving us Dramaward here. lol
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Stormy Night
I love the slightly indestructable Bella.. I cant wait to see what the Cullens think of her when they find out.. Good work
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Stormy Night
hey, when are you gonna update. i hope you didn't abandon the story
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Stormy Night
This story is amazing!!!! update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: Wild_Mage (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:24 PM · On: First Day
omfg! i read this story on fanfiction.net! i LUV it!
Reviewer: Lemmings (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Stormy Night
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Twerd4Life1609 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Stormy Night
Im totally loving the story although if Bella was upset while she having her nightmare in the Cullen's house wouldn't that have upset her scent??
hope Im not being rude I really did enjoy so keep up the good work
Author's Response: Damn, that point you made was actually really good. Should've thought of that.
*Shhh*. Haha.
Thanks for reviewing!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Stormy Night
I'm so involved in your story! I can't wait to see what happens. The only disappointment I had is I thought that Emmett and Bella were going to wrestle. But I guess that would give her away right? Of course we want to see them kiss but I thought you ened it well. Edward being a gentleman and all; he can't pull a Mike Newton or anything. I love everything! Your next update can't come fast enough! :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Sunny Day
I'm loving your story! I love the banter between Bella and everyone. I love how you developed her character. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Falling Over
Good stuff!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:23 AM · On: First Day
That was a great first chapter! There was so much information to draw us in and the little Epov at the end was great! Can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: esfurgo (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Stormy Night
Aww, I wish they knew what she was already!! Please update soon, I can't stand the wait.
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