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Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 05:23 AM · On: School Reunion
AWSOME!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 02:47 PM · On: School Reunion
Hmm now Bella knows what everyone's gift is...LOL this is so going to be a lot of fun. Ohhh the anticipation for dinner is builidind and I can't wait to read how the Cullen's take it.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
And it's great to know I'm building up your anticipation nicely!
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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 02:20 PM · On: New Arrivals
Eeeep the family is here...I wonder what Corrin is thinking....
Ohh that Bella is one devious girl...making the Cullen's eat food...LOL just wait till Alice hear's what her payback is. I am thrilled that maybe Bella's family will accept the Cullen's. This dinner is sure going to be fun...*excitedly bounces around*
Author's Response: You can see Bella's POV next... which will make everything have a lot more sense!
Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: sandy810 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:39 PM · On: School Reunion
awww!!! hurry to write it u im curiouse to know watz gonna happen next n i wanna know ru gonna involved jacob since u talked about wolf????
Author's Response: NO. There will be NO werewolves. I will explain why another time, but there won't be any members of the LaPush pack. That's in another story of mine. ;)
Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 05:14 AM · On: School Reunion
hehehe. awesome!!
update soon!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 07:26 PM · On: School Reunion
well well dinner should be VERY interesting :)
Author's Response: Dinner shall be very intriguing...
Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: singer (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 09:14 AM · On: School Reunion
I really like this story....cant wait for all the truths to come out though your edward seems a little less angsty which is nice so far.
Author's Response: Oh God, overly angsty Edward make me want to hit something. So I toned it down a little.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 07:06 AM · On: School Reunion
can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Me neither! LOL.
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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 06:22 AM · On: School Reunion
I really am enjoing htis story
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
And I've noticed what a persistent reviewer you are. Thank you once more for that.
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Reviewer: singer (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 06:15 AM · On: First Day
This is a really interesting story so far. Im hooked. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:56 AM · On: School Reunion
Wow, I couldn't imagine going through life not knowing the awesomeness that is raw cookie dough... ;-)
Author's Response: I know, I know. But I am now enlighted on the awesomeness of cookie dough!
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Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:09 PM · On: School Reunion
hehe, i love them...i cant wait
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:43 PM · On: School Reunion
Im liking the fact that Bella has family.... but not liking her sister so much..
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:34 PM · On: School Reunion
Loved the food fight
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! I like food fights, too.
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Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 06:23 PM · On: School Reunion
That was so great... and the food fight, priceless. I enjoyed every second of this chapter and look forward to see the Cullens try and stomach dinner.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Comments mean the world to me.
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Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 05:23 PM · On: School Reunion
Love this story! Such an interesting idea! I can't believe this was only chapter 8, I feel like so much has already happened/been developed/I've been following it for a while. I hope Corrin accepts the Cullens, although him not accepting them would give the story plenty of plot/drama.
I'm a little confused as to why Bella and Corrin wanted to have the Cullens over for dinner even though the Cullens don't eat. In your previous chapter when Bella was on the phone with Edward, she seemed to suddently remember something, and I assumed that that was the fact that the Cullens don't eat, but it still seems like Bella should have figured it out earlier. Are Bella and Corrin just trying to make them sufer a bit/see what the Cullens will do? Are they trying to keep up the image that they don't know the Cullens are vampires by inviting them to a meal? I can't help but not buy that Bella/Corrin simply forgot about the Cullens vampire ways.
Please don't think I'm being too critical...just thinking out loud!
I'm looking forward to the next update! This is one of my favorite stories that I'm currently following! :-)
Author's Response: Wow, your review was lovely! Thank you for leaving it!
Don't worry about being critical, I love hearing thoughts and clearing up confusion. Reason for dinner: a place and time for Corrin and Sophia to get to know the Cullens. Another reason: to see them squirm a bit. Bella had a realization on the phone that Alice-being a fortuneteller-knew about the hailstorm, and forced a sleepover to occur, against Bella's wishes. So, this thing is a little bit of payback. It gets cleared up a little more in the next chapter though.
Any more concerns? Just contact me, no worries!
From Tubby. :-)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 05:23 PM · On: School Reunion
Oh I was so looking forward to the dinner scene! But the food fight was great! LOL
Author's Response: Don't worry, the dinner is in two chapters. The next one is mainly a bonding chapter for the Swans.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 02:01 AM · On: New Arrivals
I love that!!!! Maybe she is an alien!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Everyone is an alien to a different planet, if you think about it!
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Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:49 PM · On: New Arrivals
I must say I can not wait for the next chapter!! This story is fun and different at the same time I love it and I can not wait to see where it goes. I like the fact that you include more of the cullen family I really like the interaction with emmet its great
Author's Response: Fun and different? Excellent! I want to be as unique as possible in the fandom!
Thanks very muchly for the review!
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Reviewer: lilkeykey14 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:52 PM · On: New Arrivals
it...was...GREAT! maybe corrin can be at the cullen's house with bella and they tell their story. then well...akward silence at the big table then carlisle asks if she has any gifts. then it shifts from corrin talking about heir long ago life to everyone asking bella about herself. corrin's more than happy to bella talk...i hope you have something to add to that, missy!
Author's Response: Thank you for your detailed, enthusiastic review! The Cullens won't find out at the dinner... you'll see why they have the dinner in the next chapter...
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Reviewer: edward1991 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:01 AM · On: New Arrivals
I cant wait for the dinner and when everybody find out the truth about bella and her family. I hope u do it during the dnner scene, cuz that would be shocking for the cullen family and u should have bella tell them that she already know what they are.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I already have the unveiling scene written out, and believe me, it's more shocking than you can imagine...but it won't be at the dinner.
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Reviewer: tmbilling20 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:22 AM · On: New Arrivals
This was an awesome chapter! But how come we didn't get to meet Sophia? Looking forward to that! Very interesting and excellent idea on the high pitched whistles! So does Bella know that they are catching on to her? Because I would think that she would know that they could hear it and that if they knew she heard it and had her own high pitched whistle, they would know something was up with her. I absolutely loved this chapter and am really looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Your enthusiastic review made my day! Sophia will be shown in the next chapter, don't you fret!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Reviewer: Marykate 113 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:39 PM · On: New Arrivals
Thats a good punishment. Best dinner party ever lol
Author's Response: Punishment, payback... same difference. Haha.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: New Arrivals
hehe, awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 04:16 AM · On: New Arrivals
Oh, Bella is being SO evil. She knows what they are, but she's going to make all of them eat? A lot? LMAO
Oh, the evil green eyed moster tried to come out when it came to Bella's brother did it? LOL Poor Edward.
At least they're starting to realize that Bella may not be fully human.
Author's Response: Haha, Bella is EVIL!
And yes, of course Edward got jealous. He's overly possessive in the books, so I thought I'd show some of that here.
Thanks for reviewing!
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