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Reviews For Dawn of Day
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Oh holly hell, not vampmnesia?!? We could totally do without that. Where is the wolfy Jake, does she remember him. Poor Eddie, he can’t win for loosing. Waiting for an update soon.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Echo

Ahhh! She should totally go back to Edward and ask again to be changed. Why doesn't Jake mention it? I'm still moving on.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Alone

Bella just needs to go back and tell Edward. We all know he will take her back and probably change her too.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Heart

Edward is so dramatic. Bella changing-- well then.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Blood

Wow, Eddie's really going off the deep end. I wonder if Bella will be able to fix it all. Clearly she has been planning what ever it is she is doing for a while. Moving on to see what's next.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Ghost

Heartbreaking. Poor Edward. Wondering what happens next. I'm going on to next chapters.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

NO!!! How could she forget him :( That is just so sad, Please update again soon!

Reviewer: beejay89 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

OMG. I have never been sooo anxious and filled with so many mixed emotions while reading a story.

I feel sooooo disappointed that Bella doesn't remember Edward. I wished soo bad that she would come back and remember everything and be able to explain. Whyyyyyyyy!!?? I can feel Edward's anxiety, sadness and frustration. I'm just as lost as Edward is.

PLEASE update soon! And make everything happy again!! :)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

WOW - I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY - CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

poor guy cant catch a break

Reviewer: Lyrycal Rain (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Ah! Crazy!

I hate you I love you!

Cripes, you're good. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

OMG!~  Great!!!  More please!!!! this is getting very  interesting, can't wait for the next Chapter .....

Reviewer: dunnoyet (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Hey, a cliffie... Aww man, now I would have to wait for the next update. =(

But hey, this is a really great piece of work, your writing is awesome, smooth, and a nice read. I really enjoyed your story. Your idea is also rather one-of-a-kind, intriguing and just enough suspense and mystery to draw the reader in. I would really like to know the true motives behind Bella's action. Good job, I would say, definitely a 5-star work. =)

And now, back to waiting for you next chapter... *sigh*

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

I can't help but wonder about Jacob, where he is, and what happened to him while Bella was going through the change.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

So, Bella is back and seemed to have lost her memories.  How convenient!!!   And she heard all about Edward ... who told her, Jacob or Aro?

And what is Aro up to.  Did he change her because he thought that she was gifted and at the moment she is not, so he returned her. 

And where is Jacob? Looking forward to more of this story. Hope to see a stronger Edward as he deals with this situation.  Hope his family supports him and he accepts their support.  Love how Alice tried to comfort him.

Update soon.

Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Just had to ask ... new chapter in the works yet? Typing yet? No pressure or anything.

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Holy shit!  WTF is Aro doing in Forks?  Where is Jacob?  I'm glad you didn't drag out Bella's change, but you have given us more new questions to ponder...

I liked the Alice/Edward interaction.  Alice is so human-like in her emotions, for one who has no human memories.

 

So, Bella's been hearing alot about Edward?From Jake? Aro?

Great chapter, really vivid descriptions..Keep it up!

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

oh shes forgotten him.....

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

NOOOOO!!!!  I felt my gut clench at the end.  Poor Edward.  Will anybody explain to him (and us) WHY she did this???  And what the hell happened to her?  This was a great update.  I get so caught up in your stories!!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

WTF!?!?!?!  Ok seriously...I thought I had this all figured out: Bella was approached by Aro and threatened Edward's life if she didn't give in and become a vamp and join his guard.  THis?  This?  I have no idea WHAT just happened!  Did she want to change but couldn't face putting Edward through it while she changed?  And something went horribly wrong?  My God man - update soon or we'll all go crazy!!! :)

Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

OMG!! How can you leave us with this cliffhanger---you, you,,...bad vampire! This is an amazing story that I have been following since day one--please give us some relief!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Wow, well there's a twist I never expected.

 

Reviewer: Scorp112 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

AHHHHH!!! Keep it coming - so good! Can't stop reading! :)

Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

GOD I love this story and I love your awesomeness and I want you to hurry up and finish the next chapter.

...

...

Are you typing yet?

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Lost

Oh my God, what could be more heartbreaking than for his Bella not to remember?  Where is Jake?  He wouldn't let them be alone with her, would he?  And, what have they told her about Edward?  This will kill Charlie, too!!

So many implications in her return.  Will she be a vegetarian or has she already taken a human?  Does she really not remember or is she shielding from Aro?  It can't be that easy, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop....

As always, you are my one and only favorite!  I hope things are all sunshine and roses on your side of the pond!

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