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Reviews For Re-Born
Reviewer: Kitty2002loveya (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Flight

I loved this story. I would have to say that it is my fav. I loved the bella was in this story. good job LOVED IT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you SO much and there's still one more chapter coming to wrap everything up! :D

Reviewer: montyburns (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 11:18 AM · On: The Funeral

I AM LOVING THIS STORY................GOOD JOB SHELBIE!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks mom :D I would really like you to hurry and catch up though!!! :D

Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Volterra

I'm a little confused by what Bella saw coming from Marcus. I waited to read the next chapter til I asked but I never found out what the oragne threads are. So what are they!?

I've had a hardtime dealing with everyone being ok with B/Em and E/R IT IS NOT OK!! lol But really, I dont know why anyone didnt get upset with Bella for letting her power continue



Author's Response:

I will make it a point to explain what Marcus' power is in the next and final chapter. I don't want to say in the review section. hehe.

And I know it's weird having couple like that, and Edward Rosalie was really hard for me to write, that's why there was never any specifics about their time together. Anyhow, everyone understood after they returned from Italy that Bella wasn't really in control of the first threads she made, because she didn't know she made them. And, she didn't know how to erase them until she talked to Chloe. But all will be well in the next chapter. Be prepared for a LONG one. Thanks for the review, and for the awesome rating.

:D

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Flight

O good. I thought this was the last chapter! I miss read.

 

thanks!



Author's Response:

It's alright, I do it all the time. Haha. Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Flight

Oh I love it!!!! Comletely! I agree everyone deserves a happy ending! Way to go.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I have readers who want a happy ending :D

Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:41 PM · On: The End

ahah goo thing i just didnt expect the ending to happen so fast lol



Author's Response:

haha, don't expect anything, because it's never exactly what you think :) haha. thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Flight

What happened after 19 more years?



Author's Response:

You'll find out in the final chapter :D

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Flight

Greetings! I'm glad this is back! :)

So the next chapter will be even sweeter than this one? I better brush my teeth before AND after reading!

Marcus mates again! Wow. Well I hope he is happy! That would be lovely.

And though I am relieved beyond measure that Bella cut the binding ties of the blue strings, I have to say that the plethora of adoptions doesn't work for me personally. I could maybe see one (Rosie really would make a sterling mom) but I think that for me it pushes the 'suspension of disbelief' I carry around with me in fantasy stories.

I'll bring my toothbrush to your next installment!

 



Author's Response:

I know the whole four kids being adopted thing was a little far fetched. But, Esme tried to commit sucide after losing her baby, and I knew she had to end up with a child of her own. And when I started thinking about it, Tanya lost her mother because of children, so I figured she'd have this preconceived notion about the evilness of kids. I decided that in the end, she should be shown how much joy a baby can bring into a life, immortal or not.

But bring mouthwash too, because it's going to be SO sweet :D

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Family

Ok I guess i should have waited for my last review and read this chapter LOL. But this is a good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and for the reviews and the wonderful ratings. It's nice to get a reader like you :D

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Flight

Interesting finale, nineteen years later I'm guessing they've got to figure out how to deal with the kids once they're old enough to Turn if they want it, that's a LOT of newborns to be worrying about lol



Author's Response:

Trust me, I have already thought of that, and there won't be a bunch of newborns. Haha.

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Killer

I dont like the fact that Edward had to die. That made me almost not want to read this no more, but it is just to good of a story not to read. You are doing a good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rating and for sticking with me even though I leave cliffhangers and kill off major characters. But just so you know, in NO story of mine with Edward EVER die :)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Flight

I AM SO HAPPY BEELA/EDWARD AND EMMETT/ROSE ARE BACK TOGEATHERM- I AM GOING TO MISS THIS STORY!



Author's Response:

I'm happy too, and I am SO going to miss all my readers and reviewers!!

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:36 PM · On: The End

Great start to the story. Look forward to see where this is going :)

Author's Response:

Oh my goodness. You've just begun reading and there is only one chapter left!! You must catch up! Thanks so much for taking an interest in my story?

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Flight

Haha, awesome, as always!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for a being a loyal reader and reviewer. I never tire of seeing those stars up there!!

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Flight

great update!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Flight

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sappy ending!!!



Author's Response:

is that a good thing or a bad thing? haha.

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Flight

i think a fairytale ending is absolutely perfect. i just love this story so much and i'm thrilled that everyonw reunited with no hard feelings. bella just couldn't control her gift. can't wait for the last chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for believing in me and sticking with me through this whole adventure! I hope the next (and sadly, last) chapter won't disappoint!

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 10:47 AM · On: The End

I will be anxiously awaiting that chapter.

Thank you. I actually really like my name. My mom found it in a romance book. lol

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad I have such a loyal reader :D

And that's really cool. My mom stole my name from Julia Robert's character in Steel Magnolias.

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Volterra

Hey hun, Great chapter. As always, I am never sure what is going to happen next. It is absolutley amazing and keeps me wanting more. Can't wait for an update.

Oh and good luck with the new job.

Alaina



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review and for the generous rating. It is reviews like this that keep me going and make me want to keep on writing. I should have the next chapter submitted tonight!! :D thanks for reading! OH and by the way, you have the PRETTIEST name.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Volterra

i love this story.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading, and for the wonderful rating. and I am SO glad you love the story.

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Volterra

Ahh, come on Edward and Bella need to join back together, its just not right!!!



Author's Response:

They will!! :D

Reviewer: brandybunny (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Volterra

I just found this story 2 days ago and I can't wait to find out whats next...I'M ADDICTED!!!! I love this story, I love to read the stories that are different than what the original was like =) You have a great plot and a fabulous writing style so don't EVER change mmk lol 

I am a bit confused tho for this chapter...

Did bella mean she wasn't sure if she wanted to go back to edward and to stay with emmett? or vice-versa? I thought she said her and edward had the natural red string? 



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the support. it's always nice to hear something like that from a fan :)

Bella is unsure about wanting to stay with Emmett, basically she believes her power is the only thing keeping them together, and in the next chapter, she will find herself unable to deny the natural red thread :D

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Volterra

it was good! of course I liked it.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading :D

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Volterra

I loved it! Who wouldn't love the Volturi being ripped to bits! What is left? Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

There are only two chapters left, but there is still a WHOLE lot that is going to happen. And, even though it may not seem feasible, in my story, EVERYONE is going to end up with SOMEONE :D

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Volterra

Esme is awesome! :-)



Author's Response:

I knoww right? I love her SO much. I decided she needed her 15 minutes :D

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