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Reviewer: blackdragon147 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Killer
awesome book so far keep writing
Author's Response: I definitely will.
Thanks for the review and the generous rating! :D
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Killer
haha this is good, but very trippy. I like it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the trippy stuff like I do :)
Reviewer: twilightfan0223 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Killer
I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to Edward when she wakes up!
Author's Response: You won't even KNOW what happened. Haha.
Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Killer
this is a pretty cool story. im liking it. good job
Author's Response: thank you :D
and thanks for the rating :D
Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Friends
im liking it. this is a first for me. reading something that is really different from the story line. who did you see as bella and jacob,
Author's Response: thanks for the amazing rating! :D
and for Bella, I always saw Alexis Bledel (Rory from Gilmore Girls) or Emily Browning (Violet from A Series of Unfortunate Events).
for Jake, though, I'm less sure...maybe Eddie Spears :)
that's him :)
Reviewer: SOFisticated1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Killer
so obviously edward comes back b/c they didn't burn him. you should go into detail in how he becomes whole again. the store is good, definitely has my attention, but it feels like you rushed the last too chapters a bit. all is fai in R&R... lol. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the interest, and I'm definitely going to add detail to the next chapter.
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Killer
Whew...I did a lot of catch up reading today on this one.
Wow. So much happened in such a short time. I like it! Keep writing. Great chapters (since I had to read from about chapter three to this one...)
I give you a 10.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the amazing review/rating.
I'm so very glad you like it! :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Killer
I'm very disappointed that there is not another "next" button! ;)
I thought it was great! So Jacobs really dead?! That's so sad! You are messing with my emotions! I don't know if I wanted her to be with Edward or Jacob! Honestly, I don't know how you work it out because I wouldn't forgive either of them!
Author's Response: "I don't know if I wanted her to be with Edward or Jacob!"
Neither did I. And so I chose....neither. :)
Thanks for the rating!! :D
Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Killer
This is such an awesome story. I am hooked and can't wait for the next update. I am 100% Team Edward as well. I was reading your reviews and you had mentioned it was an E/B story but "E" is not Edward. I am just wondering how you could have them not end up together if you are Team Edward. (Unless you want him all for yourself, that I understand. Lol) If you can't say b/c it will give things away, I understand. Anyway, I will be waiting for an update. Thanks
Author's Response: The best what I can think to explain is this, I am Team Edward, and I run with vampires, BUT that doesn't necessarily mean I'm 'Team Bella', if you know what I mean.
I've always wondered what might have happened if things were different, and so I'm changing some things and some relationships in the process. Two things that I promise will NOT change: Carlisle/Esme, and Alice/Jasper. Those were meant to be, and even if I CAN make them change, I wouldn't.
Thanks for the insight though, and hopefully this'll keep you interested :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Third Wheel
LOL! WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO?!?!? OMG! Did they really kill Edward? OMG! I haven't read a story where he dies with Bella being a vamp!
Author's Response: Haha, I love your reviews!
The fuck? Haha, keep on reading and you'll know what happened.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Adrenaline
Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Repetition
Looking good? I'm scared! :)
Author's Response: Scared is a good emotion! Thanks for the rating!! :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Friends
I didn't hate it. But it just seems it happened to fast, but I'm sure that's not the point of the story, so you may not have wanted to dwell on it. Whatever, I loved Edward and Jacob so I'll read anything. I'm interested to see what happens when she is "re-born".
Author's Response: I read your other review and I understand your confusion. Just move your timeline up a bit, and have J/B already be good friends. It was like that in my head, so maybe it'll help you feel better about the speediness of things. :)
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Killer
still love you! :) wow- what a way to bring edward & the cullens back into the story. hoping edwards still alive.. since you have to burn vampire parts and then they're dead. *shudder* i can just imagine edwards hand crawling along the ocean floor to his body. lol.
-brownie.
Author's Response: I totally had a dream just like that, so I changed the story plot to match. You'll see a whole lot more about that in the next chapter :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Cheater
Chapter was great and your writing is good. However, for the story it seems a little fast that she would give herself to him. I know that you said they would be OOC, but my god! From how I understood your story this is her first time seeing Jake since Edward left. Does she know about the wolf? That's how I felt before I read your notes at the bottom! Now I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Oh I didn't mean to make it seem so fast. I should probably add a note that her friendship is already blossoming with Jake and it just hasn't gotten to the part with the motorcycles, because I hated that.
But thanks for the review and the rating :)
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Killer
wha?! So it this an ExB story? Cause I know they didn't burn Eddie's body so he has a chance to come home. And the last part hints at that...
grrrr! Cliffies!
Great story tho
Author's Response: It IS an E/B story, but the 'E' is not for Edward ;)
But you're right that Edward gets to come home :D and I'm not a huge cliffhanger person, so there won't be TOO many :)
Thanks for reviewing.!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Waking Up
Loved the flashback! So is this a J/B or E/B story?
Author's Response: E/B. But the'E' is not for Edward ;)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:18 PM · On: The End
Good first chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Please read on and let me know what you think! :D
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Killer
Thank you for the teaser. I wasn't worried about Edward, because they didn't burn the pieces, but I was curious about how long it would take him the form his body again. The teaser answered that question so thank you. Can't wait to see how Bella reacts. Great chapter.
Author's Response: You won't even be able to guess how Bella takes things. It might seem too easy, but give the next two chapters a chance :)
Reviewer: minny22 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Killer
well that was a relief. I thought you killed Edward!! I forgive you. ;-)
Author's Response: I could never. I am in love with his character. Thank you for your forgiveness :)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Killer
Huh. They didn't BURN Edward, then.
Funny how Jake gets excused for ripping out Bella's throat, isn't it? The Wolves are rather hypocritical.
What DID happen to Jake?
Author's Response: You're right, no burning occurred.
And the reason I let that play out like it did was this: the wolves exist to protect human life. Jake almost took a human life. BUT, the Cullens also live to preserve it, if not directly protect it (like they do Bella). And then, to answer your question: Jake was killed. That's why Billy says what happened to Jake is "unforgivable but justifiable". Because Jake would have killed anyone who hurt Bella, even himself (I assume).
SO, hopefully that clears a couple things up.
Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Killer
Hi my dear...yes, I do still love you... I loked this chapter...I'm not very sure If I caught the forst part, I think I'll read it again maybe with my dictionary...so, OBE (=our beloved Edward) is in pieces around the ocean...it sounds a bit like the egyptian myth of Isyd and Osyrid...I like it, it's suggestive...now I'm thinking poor Jake...but I'm happy Edward is still here...
Love you, can't wait for more..
kisses
Anna
Author's Response: Thanks very much for your insightful review. I might actually use that myth in the next chapter! I'll totally credit that you gave me the idea though.
Thank you so much for your always kind reviews and all the kisses!! :D
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Killer
I thought Edward was gone, yah know?
Author's Response: Well, my dear, you thought wrong!
Thanks for reading and for the high rating, I hope I'm earning it!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Killer
I had to re-read Sam's part, and hot damn- they didn't burn the pieces! :-D
After the third wife story though, they should know better...
Thanks for updating! :-)
Author's Response: You know, I didn't think of that...
I'm gonna go back and re-read the section of New Moon with the legends, and see if I can't incorporate them a little better though :)
Thank for reading, and the nice pretty stars! (rating :P) :D
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:16 PM · On: The End
I just read the reviews and saw that your mom reads you writing and is a fan! How awesome that you can share this with her and she is supportive. My mom would never understand therefore I don't share this with her. She thinks I am crazy obsessed as it is with all things Twilight.
Anyway, I know this is not a review to your chapter (I already did one of those :)) but i just wanted you to know how great it is your mom is so supportive. Your very lucky!
Author's Response: Yeah my mom is just as hopelessly obsessed with Twilight as I am (thanks to me ;)!
But, I was a little iffy about sharing THIS with her, considering all the sex scenes, but it was totally cool being able to share all of this. Thanks for taking the time to comment about this, not many others have noticed, if any. But I know I am very lucky.
Thank you :)
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