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Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Cheater
What do you mean did they, or did they not? Was this a dream? Please tell me it wasn't. I like Jake. I'm not team Jacob, but I'm not team Edward either. haha. Figure that one out! Great chapter. very well done.
Author's Response: Yeah I can't pick a team either so I'm just gonna go with Team Emmett/Alice!! :D Thanks for all the praise!!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Waking Up
Hmm, ever since I started reading fan fiction, I've been liking Edward less and less. Now he just sounds like a blubbering little boy who doesn't really know who he is which bugs the hell out of me. Hahah. Great chapter. i am loving this Bella!
Author's Response: To be perfectly honest, I fell in love with the book Edward. But just like you, the more ff I read, the less I care for him. Weird huh??
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:40 PM · On: The End
Hmm, I like how right off the bat, this story has a different outlook on things. I like it. It's refreshing. Great intro chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad the first chapter drew you in. I know it's short but they usually are!! Anyhow, I'll be responding to all your reviews just for leaving so damn many!! :D
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
HA! In the end I was smiling. And sicne I read it all the way through in one sitting, I think you can guess I liked it.
Good work and thank you for sharing. :)
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:12 PM · On: The Funeral
ok - so i think i can see were you are going now... i still do not understand why Bella is still with Em if she knows it is forced; but hey I will go with it.
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Family
what the heck
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Cheater
that seemed way too soon ... I mean, they were only simi-close before.
Author's Response: I know you already finished the story, but I'm still going to respond to all your reviews, because that's what I do! :D
1- I make things happen really fast in my story, only because I feel like we all had to wait FOREVER and a day for anything exciting to happen in the real books.
2- I'm glad my story kept you on your toes, that is always my goal :D And also, thanks for giving everything a chance and rolling with the punched by continuing to read.
3- Thanks SO much for all your reviews and sticking with it to the end. I'm also VERY glad you liked it. Add me to favorites if you like, as I should be posting another story soon :D
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
I'm glad all of my vampire children questions were answered. That's sure to make the Cullens' lived full to the brim and busy, busy, busy. I don't know how that much family could all live in one place. Yesh!
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Author's Response: About the whole huge family in one place thing, I remember reading somewhere in the books that it was easy because no one slept? So I just wrote my story based on that tidbit :)
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Flight
Another interesting and fast, fast chapter. My favorite part was what Marcus narrated. I laughed at the Sh-low, only because I once had a student named Chloe, who apparently he parents saw it in a baby book and couldnt' pronounce it, so her whole life was called Sh-low. Haha! True story, I sware.
So, the adopting? When they all reach maturity, are they going to turn them? I can't imagine being caught between the decision of watching your children some day or making them go through the three days of hell. How will they explain to their children that they aren't aging or to the public that they are 17 year olds with ten-year-old children? This is a pickle.
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Author's Response: That's hilarious! I used to have a friend named Chloe and one of our mutual friends called he Sh-Low, so I threw that in. I can't believe they didn't even know what they named their daughteR! Thanks for the smile this morning. :D
Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
Great story! Just found it and read it all! Loved Bella's power, glad she ended up with Edward, the whole children thing was pretty cool, great battle scene, so glad the Volturi is gone, glad you saved Marcus and he found happiness again with Tanya...like I said great story!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank yous so much for reading my story! I'll have another one up soon!
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
I like the little thinga t the ending. I tend to think sleeping with the same person for all of eternity would begin to get really annoying even if you love that person forever, and the Cullens, well they are just all so dang close. Love the story cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the support praise and I'll be sure to do my best and not diappoint with the next story. and if you like the idea of certain people sleeping with certain other people then I believe you'll like my next story a lot :D thanks for reading.
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Killer
I just want to make sure i followed this correctly. in the last chapter, sam said jacob would want vengance, but they would not grant it. in this one sam told billy they ripped edward apart and tossed him into the ocean. did he lie to billy? or did it happen but it wasnt finshed without the fire? did sam know that? during the fight in italy edward loses a finger, but bella pockets it, would they be able to heal back together?
did that all make sense? if he simply lied to billy then non of the other stuff would matter, but it's something i was wondering about, so if you have any thoughts, they'd be appreciated.
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Author's Response: you followed things correctly, and vampires are able to be put back together as long as none of the pieces have been burned, or at least that's what I make of the information given to us in the book. thanks for asking because I'm always more than willing to answer questions :D
hope you're liking the story :D
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
Great story! absolutely loved it. i hated that you killed jacob off, but i understood it. definitely some good twists in it though.
Author's Response: thanks so much for sticking with this story even though something happened in the beginning that you didn't agree with. I appreciate it! :D
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
The ages were hillarious!
Thanks for sharing this story w/ us!!
Author's Response: my mom laughed at that SO much :D and thanks for being a loyal reviewer and rater :D
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
yaaaaaaaaay i didnt think we were gtting another one hehe merry christmas!!
Author's Response: well I'm glad I helped contribute to your happy holiday :) thanks for reading and ALWAYS reviewing, hence the special mention in the end credits :D
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
awww another of my favourites coming to a close.
Thanks for sharing the story, it's been an interesting and entertaining ride.
Edward's closing line was very cheeky though ;)
Author's Response: And thank you for reading and sticking with this story through all the twists and turns.
It's awesome to know it was a favorite. I'll have more up soon! SO no worries :D
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Pressure
ehhhh. i cant say i like the way THAT turned out with bell and em.
Author's Response: Nothing stays the same in my story for long, though :)
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Pressure
hmmm........Bella and Emmett??......Edward and Rosalie??......well at least they're keeping it in the family
Author's Response: I like your sense of humor, and I hope you'll like how my story turns out :)
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
Great story :)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much :D
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Family
I know I probably shouldn't laugh but I thought Alice's little vision was funny.........
Author's Response: I did too. Feel free to laugh at anything in my story. I try to lace it with humor here and ther :)
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Third Wheel
no no no no........not Eddie =(
Author's Response: Don't give up hope!! Keep reading! :D
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
congratulations on getting married, I am glad you are waiting though!!! I love my husband but I wish I waited a while and had more me time while I was younger! great story!!! loved it!!
Author's Response: thanks! and I know what I need to take care of before I tie the knot so I'm going to do it, and thanks for reading my story and the wonderful rating! merry christmas! :D
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
It was perfect!! Merry Christmas!! Adding you to author alert for your next story.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! You're an awesome reviewer! :D
And my next story will probably just be a quick one shot I've been working on. But after that will be my full blown next story!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
Oh I loved it so much. I have always been one for happy ever after. Can't wait to read your next story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the enthusiasm and the encouragement. AND the very hefty rating :D thank you SO much.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Epilogue - The Truth
First, congratulations on your engagement and amazing academic mojo! Way to go!
Second, thanks for the rec and the nod. You're very sweet. :)
Okay, I wasn't thrilled at the addition of the several children, but I very much enjoyed this chapter and I absolutely LOVED the Christmas card. :)
May your holiday be bright and beautiful, just like you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading my whole story, giving me advice, and giving me amazing things to read in my down time :D Second of all, thank you for all the compliments I have received from you, and your honesty which you ALWAYS give in the nicest way.
Thirdly, I'm glad you liked the Christmas card. Me and my folks decided we'll do one next year, so that gave me the idea. And on that note, coming up with the ages took TWO hours. I had to find out (and guess a couple times) when each vampire was born a HUMAN, THEN try and figure out where the heck my story was in the future. HA! Next time I'll keep track a little better!
Have a very merry holiday, and a wonderful New Year!
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