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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:01 AM · On: The Funeral
WOW - great chapter! So Bella's still with Emmett, even though she's got the "red" line to Edward and all? Hmm. I LOVE that Charlie and Chloe hooked up and I can't wait to see what Esme came up with next. Florence, obviously, but beyond that I mean! Makes sense that the Volturi would get interested with SO MANY of them now living together. It's just too much of a threat. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're following along AND loving it. Thanks so much for proving to me that my story is NOT too confusing. Thanks so much for reading and the generous rating. :D
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Family
how can she be so nonchalant about Jake. Rose would kill Bella and Emmett and light a fire. how can alice see that.
Author's Response: The way I wrote this story is that Bella would not be in such good control as she was in Breaking Dawn. She is going to have newborn outbursts and her feelings are going to be explained as Jasper's fault eventually.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Killer
all i know is that jake and edward better not be dead. that's all i can say right now.
Author's Response: Not both, but one.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Third Wheel
no. don't make fly to washington. i will take out the whole pack with my bare hand if sam lets jake do anything to my precious.
Author's Response: Jake would never hurt Edward in my story. Edward hurt Jake, though? Yeah probably. ;)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Adrenaline
Noooooooo. What?
Author's Response: I got that reaction A LOT from this chapter.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Repetition
I like if Alice gets to change Bella, and Bella need to kick Edward's agnsty ass. How can some one so hot be so brooding? He is smoking when he broods though. If Bella gives him some I think he'll be better.
Author's Response: You think a lot like I do :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Friends
the end. dang that was a short chapter. I'm confused at how all of sudden he's imprinting. This will hurt him more when Edward comes. He is coming right? I want him to imprint on someone else. Leave her broken and waiting or Edward.
Author's Response: I couldn't leave her broken. I was sick of thinking of her as hurting. But really, I just kind of put a big band-aid on the whole situation.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Cheater
Okay I like it. Love it actually, but only if Edward eventually ends up with the goodies. It always comes back to Edward for me.
Author's Response: And, it'll ALWAYS come back to Edward ;)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Waking Up
go for it bella. soar you oats. edward and all his agnst and virtue...humph. you know i love him though.
Author's Response: I love Edward too, but I love Jacob just as much :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:27 AM · On: The End
I like that she's trying to be strong and move on like normal teens. That damn Edward has too much power. I know right?
Author's Response: I wanted my Bella to be as normal as possible. I like that she's an old soul, like me, but I've been through 'heartbreak' too, and it never happens the way it did in the book. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:44 AM · On: The Funeral
I loved the songs, and the reunion between Edward and Bella was better with them.
And I'm glad to see them back together and have it all explained. Now we just have to deal with the Volturi.
Author's Response: They're not exactly back together yet, but they will be.
And yes, the Volturi. They've got something coming :)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:50 AM · On: The Funeral
Wow-there were a lot of POVs in that chapter. I kind of forgot about those damn Volturi! So, E&B are back together now, right? These vamps don't all have open relationships, do they? Not that there's anything wrong with that! Now, that would be a smutty story! Curious to see what's coming.
Author's Response: No open relationships, just a lot of power confusion. Chapter after next will put everyone back together, including some yet to be introduced characters.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:01 AM · On: The Funeral
Esme to the rescue!!!
That woman doesn't get enough credit! :-)
Author's Response: Exactly. I had to give her the spotlight at least once.
Thanks for the generous rating :D
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 02:02 AM · On: The Funeral
Ok. I'm kinda confused. Bella and Edward talked about what happen with Emmett and Rosalie, but are they together now? I know he said that she was in his bed all week, but when Alice and Esme spoke of them they referred to Edward and Rosalie and Emmett and Bella. Just need this cleared up. I'm so glad that Charlie was changed.
Author's Response: Not yet, they're not. But, they will be. And I'm glad I've got another Vamp Charlie lover :D
Reviewer: JennyMo0209 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Third Wheel
omg! wow! amazing chapter!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:53 PM · On: The Funeral
Good on Esme..Supermum to the rescue!
Author's Response: I love Esme, and she needed to be a bigger part in this story. :D
Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The Funeral
E/B together ? the Volturi and three chapters left ? If you can pull all this together awesome.
Author's Response: I've already got all the outlines written, the ending is in my opinion, perfect :) thanks for reading.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:46 PM · On: The Funeral
This certainly was a lot of information and movement packed into one chapter. No one can say that you're slow in letting us know what happened though. I was hoping that this chapter would be the end of the Bella/Emmett and Edward/Rosalie pairings. The idea of Rose and Edward leaves such a horrible taste in my mouth. Once Bella realized that she had mistakenly forged the connection to Emmett, why wouldn't she drop it? The connection between Charlie and Chloe seems interesting and maybe too convenient. I wonder how Cole feels about this. I am very pleased that Esme is taking on a stronger role in the family and perhaps she will be the heroine. I'm not sure what her idea could be, but my only guess is that Bella would try to align Aro with Carlisle.
Author's Response: This chapter is the beginning of the end of the mixed up stuff. It does seem a little convenient now that I write it, but I wrote Chloe in, specifically for Charlie. Cole was originally going to show up alone, but I just couldn't stand to have EVERYONE else paired up and Charlie be single. That wasn't fair. So I made Chloe :D
Esme will in fact have a very strong role in the last chapters. And as far as ANYONE aligning WITH the Volturi, you're WAY off. :)
Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:09 PM · On: The Funeral
Wow, id be overwhelemed like alice too! So are edward and bella having an affair?
Author's Response: Seriously, Alice is my favorite character and she's totally gonna need a day at the spa here pretty soon. And I wouldn't call it an affair, considering they really are in love, and were together first.
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:02 PM · On: The Funeral
wow they are going to voltera!!! cool story! I am really liking it still, even though Bella is back with edward and not with emmett!!!
Author's Response: Not yet she isn't, but in the chapter after next, you'll see why it's going to end up that way.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:27 PM · On: The Funeral
Wow, great chapter. The Staind songs are perfect, especially It's Been Awhile. I also loved when Charlie woke up and raced over to Chole, that was very sweet. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, I need to know why the hell they are on planes to Italy. I will be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for your next update. Please hurry!!! LOL
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to listen to the music. I don't recommend it for no reason, it really does go along with the story sometimes. Thanks for reading and the incentive to write faster ;)
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:12 PM · On: The Funeral
Ughhh stupid volturi! They ruin everything!!! Great chapter hon!
Author's Response: I know but my story would be incomplete without them. But..let's just say, I'll take care of it! ;)
Thanks for the rating!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:41 PM · On: The Funeral
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for the nice rating :)
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: The Funeral
Ok, I'm back with you now. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading :D
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:55 PM · On: The Funeral
oh no! thanks for the fast update with this one !! yay
Author's Response: No problem. Only three chapters left!!
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