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Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:49 PM · On: The Cave

Oh, I am leaving you so much love! That was such a great 1shot. I loved the fight they had. It's very rare to read about a fight between the two greatest lovers on earth. You did it quite well. And erotic make up sex is the BEST!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  No matter how perfect the guy is, there will be fights now and again, and honestly, what is better than make up sex?!  LoL!  ;)

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 09:48 AM · On: The Cave

that was hot. way hot.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  

Reviewer: baytownbelle1985 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:13 PM · On: The Cave

awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ;)

Reviewer: getvampy (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:34 AM · On: The Cave

Changing of panties indeed!  Good job.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:28 PM · On: The Cave

very hot!!



Author's Response:

Why thank you!!

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:12 PM · On: The Cave

Excellent!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Twitterlu (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:29 PM · On: The Cave

Very interesting story, full of wonderful details. :)  I just wouldn't like to think that Edward would ever throw Bella...still, makes for a very good story.  Good job.



Author's Response:

I know i know...it was more of a "iforgotmyownstrength" moment...ya know.  Thanks for reading!  ;)

Reviewer: Xiggy C (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:56 PM · On: The Cave

Listening to NIN Closer while writing??



Author's Response:

Yep...it was my inspiration!

Reviewer: TinaT (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:18 AM · On: The Cave

awesome



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: insanebliss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:08 AM · On: The Cave

Well Shannon my love, I've put off reviewing thig because I've been trying to think of something to say that would do your little one-shot justice. But since I really suck at these things, I guess this will have to do. This was win! Pure fucking win. And hot! *fans self* We all know rough sex is sometimes the best sex, and you woman, are the queen of writing rough sex. I absolutely loved this bb, and I am so glad that you wrote/posted it.



Author's Response:

Thanks Darlin....sorry it took so long for me to respond.  I'm glad you liked it!  Lurve ya!

Reviewer: babybott330 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:45 PM · On: The Cave

At first I wasn't sure where it was going, but then I got drawn in.Very well written, my favorite part was when he licked the left-over blood off her lips.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Ya...i can just picture that. Mm mm mmmmm.

Reviewer: green-eyed storywritter (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:55 PM · On: The Cave

Like i saiad in the chat... I love this story!



Author's Response:

Hehe...thanks for the review doll!

Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 10:11 PM · On: The Cave

Well now, that was just full of naughty bits. Tasty ones, too!! I am in awe of horny Edward. What a fucking studmuffin!



Author's Response:

Studmuffin LoL!  Haven't heard that in ages.  So cute!  Studward in full effect.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EmeraldEyes (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:45 AM · On: The Cave

I read this the other day.  I freakin love it!  I need my own cave.

*swoon*



Author's Response:

And our own Edward to go "in" it.  heh heh.  Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Halawia (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:07 PM · On: The Cave

Fuck yes they need to fight more often! I am a puddle at your feet that was so fucking hot!

Absolutely loved the one shot, now... why aren't you writing b/e smut for hal? I crave more angry sex... you do it well... pun intended ;)

Great job of course.

xx

hal



Author's Response:

Hahahaa...thanks lady.  There will be a sequel...i promise.  Angry sex is the only sex man. ;)

Reviewer: lilmissweetsin2380 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:52 PM · On: The Cave

for the love of god this is smoking hot and I love it loved it loved it....Emmet you rock!!!!

keep it rockin

~sin



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading girl!  ;)

 

Reviewer: twilighthottie69 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:07 AM · On: The Cave

that is one hot story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RebeccaKay (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:56 AM · On: The Cave

Ooooh love it! I also love the ending... so adorable! I'm glad Bella asserted her position in the relationship. And the lemon of course was... tasty.



Author's Response:

I love assertive Bella!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: myheroin (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:43 AM · On: The Cave

holy hell...thats all i can say is um yea damn woman..and yes a change of panties was needed! thanks for writting the one shot!



Author's Response:

Hey girl!  hahaha...love it!  Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: RubyRed (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:08 AM · On: The Cave

Bitch, I have no words.  You know how I feel about this one-shot.  But you will be doing a sequel?  Won't ya?  Will ya?  Do ya??

Love you hard
Rubay xox

P.s.  Gave up with panties a while ago, so consider my combats destroyed  ;o)



Author's Response:

Hahaha.  Hell yes I'm doing a sequel...for you.  Love ya toots!! 

smileys

Reviewer: FhionaBridge1504 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:16 PM · On: The Cave

Dearest Em,

Hey it's FhiB. I just had to change my panties... thanks a lot.... :) I love your one shot and I'm so glad you were talked into writing it! Me and the girls just spent the last 15 minutes talking about it on chat. We love you and we love 'the cave'!

Please continue!



Author's Response:

Awww, hi sweet girl!  Thanks so much for the review.  Sorry about the panties...well, not really. hahaha,  I think I shall continue this.  These two are way too fun! 

Free Happy Smileys

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:11 AM · On: The Cave

This was so incredibly hot.... yes, I do need to change my panties!  I love raw, primal fucking from these two.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Damn!  Is it wrong that I'm glad you had to change your panties???  Is there any other kind of fucking?? LOL!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Rosat (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:47 AM · On: The Cave

Humm yeah there go another pair . . . .

 

Love it when these two hook up ;D



Author's Response:

Hahaha!   Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:10 AM · On: The Cave

Wow



Author's Response:

scuba diving in Bali

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:32 AM · On: The Cave

That was HOT and I am very glad that Bella made her point!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Me too.

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