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Reviews For The Affair
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

Sounds like a really good bunch of friends - including James. Carlisle is such a sweetie!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Not surprised over Carlisle, but Jasper? Yes, you got me!

Reviewer: lutzfan89 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 28

wow...just...wow i want to say this story was amazing. it really was. i had tears in my eyes and felt all the heartache Bella felt throughout the story. It was a wonderful story i stayed up all night to read it lol. Great work, I really enjoyed it :)

lutzfan89



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: twichipie (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 28

I loved the story i started this afternoon and just finished now, thanks so much for a great read



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Meka5 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 28

I read it and I enjoyed it a lot... lol ::)

Thanks for the good read...I like where u started the story and i like where u went with it...

I think this is one of the very good ones



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 28

fantastic story so different to all the others ive read on here, the fact you grossed me out & then taking us on a journey of bliss was superb, must let you know im reading this story because hannah81 recommended it & im reading her story at the moment called just a call away & im loving it, i tried to review after most chapters (think i only missed a few), will look fwd to ure next story, im off now to read the outakes



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you persisted even after a bit of a gross out. : ) I am also reading hannah81's story and I am tickled pink about the rec.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 27

how ironic she brought edward back into his life & im thinking she is now going to bring carlilse back into his, oh well need to read last chapter to find out



Author's Response:

Yup Bella is the glue between the two of them even when things are rough.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 24

emmett is one of my firm faves in all stories wish i could have him for myself (only as a brother figure tho as im definetley team edward all the way lol)



Author's Response:

I pretty much like all the main characters, even Jake but they all have their spots to fill and Jake is as a friend.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

nope its defo the sex, only joking lol, ure doing a great job



Author's Response:

You are a little minx aren't you? Thanks for all the reviews.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 21

who would have thought rosalie could be nice after such a short time



Author's Response:

That would be me! : )

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 19

yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



Author's Response:

Ha ha!

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 18

i quite liked that jake & nessie met i can foresee a very interesting frienship developing lol

 i also thought bella could be pregnant but that hasnt happened seeing as how its been 5 mnths im sure she would have noticed by now oh well cant win them all lol



Author's Response:

Nope there will be no throwing a baby into this mess. They lucked out because they didn't use protection and there was no reason for Bella to be on the pill. Lucky they have me to be their birth control. ; )

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

omg cant write anymore need to go to next chapter sorry



Author's Response:

Ha ha, thanks for pausing to review anyways. : )

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

that was sooooooo hot but why did he leave i wonder, is carlisle having an affair i hope so as it would make this all so much easier, oh roll on next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope it was worth the wait.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

how long will it be before carlisle picks up on the sexual tension i wonder cause im feling it already lol



Author's Response:

Oh good, cause the buildup is half the fun. ; )

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

hahahahahahahahahahaha its getting hot in ere so take off all ure clothes lol



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 28

As much as I wanted to review after I read an Edward and Bella Sex chapter, I decided to wait because this story is complete. I loved this story, although I did feel bad that Bella handled things so immaturely. I don't think if this were real that I would have handled it any differently, but since this is fiction and I am not Bella, I get the luxury of judging Bella. :)
Amazingly written story, this was such a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.
Micki

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I always like to hear that people found everyone's actions believable even if they weren't always the right ones. : )

I'm glad you enjoyed and I appreciate your review.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

please let it be numerous lemons lol even if edward is just doing itto get back at his dad & then of course falls in love with her lol



Author's Response:

Ha ha, that's cold!

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

awww bless her cotton socks, hopefully edward will featuring more in the next few chapters



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he is worth the wait. : )

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

dont you just love emmett



Author's Response:

Yes, yes I do! Thanks for reveiwing.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

i'll say it again grossing me out, im assuming from the name of the story that she will have an affair so i will continue to read & keep the sick bucket handy lol, p.s im only grossed because i like the good ole pairings of twilight as my husband & i both have parents that are married to much younger peeps & seems to be working for them



Author's Response:

Sorry, I am not very descriptive with the Carlisle and Bella's relationship because I know some people are sensitive to this pairing.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

omg, had a small feeling this was coming but omg dont think i like the thought of bella with carlisle in fact no im grossed out lol bring in edward haha



Author's Response:

But would you really want Edward and Bella already married in a story called "the Affair?"

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 28

Wow, what a story. I loved the way you end it. Very good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 28

This was a truly amazing story, and I am so glad that I waited to read it until it was completed. Something so powerful needs to be read in one sitting to acheive the full effect, and I strongly urge anybody who read it chapter by chapter as it was updated to come back and re-read it in it's entirety.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked my story and I hope you will come back and check out my next ones as I post as well.

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 28

i loved and enjoyed it thank you very much it was sad sweet and amusing like  life.



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