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Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
Interesting update. Glad to see that Bella is resisting her attraction to Carlisle's son and that Edward is playing his part as well.
Eager to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks. I couldn't very well just have her jump into bed with Edward, she does love her husband after all.
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 12
wow...being a sleep talker and having feelings for someone is not a good thing. It is easier to brush it off now when she is in the tent with Edward she isn't thinking at all about how it will sound if she walks up from one of those dreams with Carlisle. Great chapter can't wait to see whats next!
Author's Response: Yeah, the only thing worse than having Edward hear her call out his name would be having Carlisle hear it. Stay tuned to see if/how that may play out.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
Bella has got it bad! But then again who wouldn't. I like the way she is constantly reminder herself of her commitment to Carlisle. I'm not entirely sure she will be able to keep her resolve, but it's nice to know that she's trying.
Isn't Edward the sly little one? Touching your step-mom in an innapropriate way is very naughty (somehow I just don't believe that it was an accident).
Would love to hear Edward's POV...
Author's Response: There will be no EPOV in this story, I gotta keep you guys guessing and that is how I am going to do it. : ) I will not say whether or not it was an accident but I like to think that Bella wouldn't have felt that good had it been any one else's hand.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 12
Good chapter. I think Edward may be attracted to her also. Will we be getting an EPOV? I found interesting that Bella proposed to Carlise. There is just something off about that. I'm starting to think that he was lonely and gave up hope to ever get back with Esme. I'm not saying that he doesn't love her, but there is something to that. I could be wrong though.
Author's Response: I think you are very right about Carlisle. There will be no EPOV, this is Bella's story. Also I don't want you to know what he is thinking cause that gives some of the fun away. : ) There will be a couple of outtakes later on in the story. One Carlisle and one Emmett.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh god i love this story. I hate to say this but i'm doing a happy dance because something is going to happen and soon between these two and I can't wait. anywho great work on the story it is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your review put a big smile on my face. : )
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 12
I know from experience that tents cause you to get pregnant! :-) It's nice they're getting to know each other, but a weekend in the woods is a stupid place to do that, huh?
Author's Response: Ha ha, don't worry this tent will not cause pregnancy. : )
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 12
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh the tension is building! my, my it will be a long night indeed! i actually feel kinda sorry for bella, i know i'd have trouble keeping my hands to myself where edward is concerned...
Author's Response: I know right! Bella is between a rock and an Edward. : )
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 12
Poor poor bella. So confused. Great chapter!! I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Mike and Jessica are funny! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. I am surprised that I didn't get any questions asking me if that was "the affair" of my story. : )
Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Sorry, I hardly ever review, but I wanted to bump up your reviews. I am really enjoying this story. I don't accept cheating either, but this is fanfiction after all, so you can write whatever you want. I don't think that Carlisle and Bella are right for each other and I think that Bella is going to find that out by being with Edward.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to review. I am happy you are enjoying the story so far. : )
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh man...i am so far against cheating on spouses but man I want them to get it on so bad i can practically taste it, lol. I love the way you have written Bella she is trying so hard to be the faithful, dutiful wife and her body just keeps betraying her, i LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you. I too am very adamendly against cheating. Ironic huh. But that doesn't mean that I can't enjoy a story that takes me places that I would never go.
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
OH NO NO NO... IM NOT LIKING WHERE THIS IS GOING.
Author's Response: Well you might not like where I go but I hope you like the ride along the way.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
Sweet update. Update again soon.
Author's Response: Will do.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
this is good...Im enjoying reading it....please continue...maybe Bella should get pregnant by Edward
Author's Response: You want me to throw a baby into this mess? You will just have to wait and see.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, I think Bella is going to continue having innapropriater feelings and thoughts about Edward...It doesn't sound like she can help herself.
Author's Response: Can you blame her??
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
Nice update. Is Edward developing feelings for Bella, hence his pained expression or was he thinking of his mother when he saw them together? It is wonderful to see Carlisle and his son interacting so comfortably.
Eager for more soon.
Author's Response: Edward's pained expression comes from both the attraction he feels for Bella and the loyalty to his mother.
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
so far so good. please dont make them have an affair. that will suck. i will be very dissapointed.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review but there will be an affair at some point in this story. It is called The Affair after all.
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 10
hahahahaha jessica... oh that poor girl... write more soon!
Author's Response: poor Jessica?? I haven't heard that one before, you must have a good heart to feel sorry for her. : ) I really don't have anything against Jessica to be honest and I freakin loved her in the movie so I don't know why I am so mean to her in this story but I gotta do what I gotta do.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter but it was too short.
Author's Response: Sorry that you found it too short, but all my chapters are about the same length. It shouldn't be too long until the next one though.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 10
Good chapter! Can't wait for the rest of the camping trip.
Author's Response: Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing the camping trip so i hope you will enjoy what comes next.
Reviewer: Amber19 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow! Is E&B's affair going to start in the next chapter? I'd like to think so. Great job! ;)
Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see. : )
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 9
My guess/hope: Sexy Edward/Bella time
Author's Response: Ha ha. Well I do hope that you will enjoy the next chapter either way. : )
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
dun dun dun... stupid cliffhangars are the bain of my existance...
Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't actually want to make it a cliffhanger but the chapter was way too long so I had to split it.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
wow great chapter:) Edward and Bella alone... WITHOUT Carlisle... Hmm this should be interestin:) i really have no idea what's going to happen but i think they are just going to bond. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: you will just have to wait and see. : )
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 9
WOW, things look like they are going to get complex and life amongst Bella, husband Carlisle and stepson Edward may soon get too complicated with some interesting developments.
Eager for more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed.
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