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Reviewer: ufmary (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 14
I vote for longer chapters, These are over so quickly :-( I want more :-)
Author's Response: Sorry, but next chapter is much longer, and saucier.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 14
It's ok it didn't happen this chapter. Something like this needs the build up. She just can't tose her old man to the side that fast. I can't believe someone didn't get what this story was about. I mean it's pretty clear. Good chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you enjoyed. The next chapter is my longest ever so I hope you will enjoy.
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ed and Bella need to get it on!
Author's Response: Well then you should enjoy the next chapter. ; )
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
I have to say, I was really hoping that Carlisle was haivng an affair with Gianna (for the obvious reason), but that was wrong and really ooc for Carlisle. I apologize for my assumptions and I promise to enjoy whatever surprise you will have in store for us next.
I'm kind of afraid of Bella having dreams about Edward and carlisle finding out about them.
Author's Response: I didn't want Carlisle to be cheating with Giana because then that justifies Bella to have an affair. I'm not letting anyone off that easy. : )
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 13
Thank goodness for the clarification in your a/n!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review and appreciation of my sarcasm. : )
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 11
I hope that you will consider doing some outtakes from Edward's pov. (their emails, initial meeting, camping trip).
Author's Response: I don't think I will do any EPOV outtakes. I kinda like you guys not knowing what he is thinking. His reasons can be many so I don't want to give them away. : ) There will be a CPOV and a EMPOV outtake though.
Thanks for all the reviews.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 9
And this is when the trouble begins...you didn't title it The Affair for nothing.
Author's Response: Ha ha, and yet I still had a reviewer that was mad at me for the B/E attraction. THe title does say it all.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
uh oh. she is in trouble....sounds like shes got it bad or at least heading that way! but can you really blame her?
Author's Response: Yup Bella is in trouble deep. Next chapter you find out just how deep.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow. It took a lot of courage for Bella to try to hit on the hot doctor. Obviously it wasn't a total fail mission. (btw, I like your version of James).
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it was about time for James to not be the bad guy for once. : )
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
Interesting story. Will it all be BPOV or can we get an occasional C or E POV?
Author's Response: The story will all be BPOV but I have done a couple of outtakes that go with later chapters. One in Emmett POV and one in CPOV. But we won't hear from Edward this time.
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
I love this! I have trouble with the fact that Bella is going to cheat on Carlisle too. Only I know she is, the title kinda gave away that mystery! I keep hoping that Carlisle cheats first. (it would make me feel better) but I am sure however you write this, it will be perfect. It has been so far.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying. I thought about getting Carlisle to cheat but that would just give justification that I didn't want her to have. However, Mike and Jessica had an affair, maybe that is the one I was talking about in the title. : ) Yeah, I'm not buying it either.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
Omg! I cannot believe that they met while she was getting a pap smear! You have a tendency to shock the heck out of me...and I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to think of the most awkward way for two people to meet and viola, the pap smear. : )
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 14
this story is getting so good......cant wait for the updates
Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter is already with the beta so it shouldn't be long.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
omg! she's married to Carlisle!!! and I bet she's about to meet Edward...oh I hope she doesn't become a cheater!
Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see. I guess I surprised you with the marraige. : )
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 14
DAMN I GUESS I HAVE TO WAIT!!!! I loved this chappie. The tension is so thick that someone is going to slip very soon. I really loved it and I can't wait for Bella and Edward to start their affair. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: All of you are making me feel so mean. But what good is it all without the buildup. Don't worry you will enjoy the next chapter, it is the longest one and it's got what you all have been waiting for.
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 14
killing me! if not now... when??? :(
Author's Response: Don't worry, it's coming. : )
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 13
Bella is in going to be in for some trouble. Jacob has even picked up on it. I wonder if she has said Edward's name in her sleep anymore.
Author's Response: Ahh , a question I will actually answer. No, Bella has not said Edward's name in her sleep. RIght after the camping trip she felt too guilty about her feelings so she would not have dreamt of Edward in that way. Even though she is still attacted to him now, she feels too guilty for even her subconsious to have him.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 13
Don't need to apologize for Bella and Edward's affair not starting while camping on her company retreat. That would have just been too much!
Ready for more when you have it...
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your comments. I thought it would be way too soon as well, but I know some people are anxious.
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 13
I DONT LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING. IM DONE READING.
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that, but I think the idea of the story is pretty clear by the title.
Reviewer: ufmary (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story, let's get Bella and Edward together!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you like. And I think you will enjoy the next chapter. : )
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 13
uh oh, bellas in trouble!!! and now Jacob knows it!
Author's Response: well Jacob is a bit of a smartie. : )
Reviewer: pinkjewel (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
i'm really enjoying your story! i think it's different and i'm liking the slow build, although i'm addicted so i wish there were longer chapters and more updates, you are keeping me on pins and needles with this tension! can't wait until the actual affair and see how everyone reacts...
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying. Sorry about the short chapters, but I update as fast as my beta can check out my chapters as the story is all done, so you know there will never be too long a wait. : )
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Another great chapter I can't wait for Christmas and maybe a little affair *hint hint* I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think you will like your Christmas present. ; )
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
Nice update.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
oh waht a tangled web they weave....
Author's Response: Indeed!
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