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Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 24
Too good to be true? And what would Esme do once she finds out her son is dating her husbands ex wife?
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 24
Too good to be true? And what would Esme do once she finds out her son is dating her husbands ex wife?
Author's Response: Well you will have to wait to find that out. : )
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 16
Shr cant tell him about Edward! No, that would just destroy the father and son.
Author's Response: Yeah it's a hard choice but I hope you like where I took it.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 15
I felt sick reading this. How could Bella do this?
Author's Response: TO be honest I was torn writing it. She is young and she let her emotions take control, it wasn't right. I don't condone cheating, I think it is very wrong.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 9
While i'm wary of the father and son liking the same girl, I must say that i like the way you write. I'm gonna continue reading this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I won't do any kinky stuff if that is what you are worried about. : )
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 24
ANOTHER GEAT CHAP:) I LOVE THE NOTE!!! SO WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN EM AND ROSE WAS FAST!!! BUT WHO CARES!1 PLIS UPDATE SOON:)
P.S. STILL WAITIN FOR CARLISLE TO FIND OUT ABOUT THESE 2 LOVE BIRDS....
Author's Response: Thanks fore your review. DId you check out the outtake, it was Emmett's POV from the pool hall scene. It may clear some things up on how fast things moved. : )
Reviewer: girlicious250 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 24
j` etais deja dit que je suis en amour avec ton histoire
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Author's Response: Merci
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 24
that chapter was great. Emmett and Bella were great getting that money from those guys that was priceless. I'm glad that Edward showed up and them going to find a place to go park that is great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoyed writing some fluff before the angst starts up again.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 24
Edward's note was so sweet. It's kind of weird that Bella wants to meet Esme. I can't imagine any emotion other than hate that Esme must have for her.
Author's Response: Why would Esme hate Bella? It's not like she was around when her and Carlisle split up. She doesn't know that Bella slept with Edward while married to Carlisle. So Esme might not be crazy about Bella if she met her but I can see no reason to outright hate her.
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 18
Agreed w/ you about the Carlisle not fighting for her thing. Affairs are pretty tough to get over. I think you're writing this in exactly the way I would. NICE JOB!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am trying to put myself in everyones positions and acting as I would. Except the affair, I would never do that. But I am glad that it is coming across as honest even if it is making me a little schizophrenic. : )
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 24
Love that Bella is so carefree with Edward. She doesn't have to put on any pretense of maturity like she did when she was with Carlisle.
And Edward loves her- as she loves him. That's worth everything.
Author's Response: Right you are. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 24
Good chapter! His note was so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24
"I was also sure that there was nothing on Earth that could make me change the way I felt about him." - Why do I sense trouble looming?
I love a pool-playing Bella. That's something I did a lot of in my younger years; maybe I should take it up again!
Liz
Author's Response: Yup, I do love me a good pool game as well.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 23
aw, i really liked this chapter; i loved bella's visit with charlie, i'm glad they seem to be mending eachother's faults. i especially loved bella's epiphany with regards to edward and her relantionship! i prefere her more positve attitude now...
good chapter, i look forward to more!
Author's Response: Yeah I had to get Bella in more of a positive mind set before I threw anything else at her. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 23
this was beautiful:) wonderful chapter. i hope this means that Carlisle will know soon enough about these 2 lovebirds... can't wait for more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: He will find out but not in the next chapter. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 23
Wow! Love this story!
I like the tone and the way you are putting this all together!
Author's Response: Thank you so much it really means alot to me that people are enjoying this.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 23
I liked Bella's epiphany.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 23
yay! They are going for it!
Author's Response: Yup they have some work to do but they are on their way.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 23
That was a really nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. I cringed every time I saw Bella say "that's you, that's not me" to Charlie in the movie, it was way too harsh! I'm glad she came around!
Author's Response: I know that line made me cringe too, it was effective and so I "borrowed" it. : )
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 22
i like the story, i mean sex is great, but I like your letting bella work things out!! Maybe bella and edward meeting esme and carlisle would make an explosive chapter!
Author's Response: Don't worry the truth will come out eventually. : )
Reviewer: Adi (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 23
Wonder what the note said....hmmmm. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The note will be revealed in the next chapter. : )
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 23
yes, she finally is ready to open up. I would like to see carlisle's side becuase i think he realizes Bella's father issues. please update soon.
Author's Response: Did you check out the outtake? It showed a little bit of Carlisle's thoughts on Bella. And who is to say that while he was replacing her father that she wasn't replacing his child.
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 23
oh lovely. i liked this chaper!! awsum!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 23
Good for Bella that she got some time with Charlie, and that he actually tried to be there for her this time. I'm also glad she realized she wasn't being fair to Edward. I was a bit worried when she went to his place and he wasn't there, but glad he turned up at her place. And, sometimes sweet, slow lovemaking is lots better than full-on-smut. Great way to end the chapter.
Liz
Author's Response: Thanks, I am a fan of a combination of lovemaking and smut. : )
Reviewer: girlicious250 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 22
HOHOHO
I LOVE IT
J'ADORE
J'AIME TON HISTOIRE
Author's Response: Thank you, Merci!
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