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Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 28
i loved the story...good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you will come back and read my next stories as well.
Reviewer: corapet (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 28
very very nice, well written and very enjoyable, thank you for your hard work
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: xconfessedx (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 26
I am so glad that he told his father. I love this story. I have been reading it all day. Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad I could inspire your day of reading. : )
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 28
I was wondering if Carlisle would ever come around. I'm glad he did. It was sweet that he just fell in love with that baby considering he didn't want any more kids. Thanks for the great story and I look forward to reading your future work.
Author's Response: Just becuase you don't want kids doesn't mean you don't want grandkids. : )
Thank you so much for reading and all your reviews.
Reviewer: jend (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 28
i started this story today, and it was so good that i read the whole thing. i like happy endings for bella and edward and was hoping it would turn out that way-glad that it did!
Author's Response: Me too, I'm such a sap. Thanks so much for reading. I am glad you enjoyed my story.
Reviewer: Adi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 28
Nice ending. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 28
i wish bella and carlisle could have talked more after the baby was born. but i loved the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The reason I left it like that is because I didn't want their conclusion to be forced. It will take many talks for them to heal, this was just the first step.
Reviewer: xconfessedx (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really am enjoying this story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I hope you will let me know how you are enjoying it along the way.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 28
great ending! everything more or less resolved!
good work! i really enjoyed reading this story and i will hope to enjoy reading some more of your stories in the future! well done on an excellent fanfiction!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews. I am happy that you enjoyed the ending. That's always the hardest part.
Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 28
great epilogue
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: lilicullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 28
I started reading this story today. I realli liked how te relationships neede to be mended and I liked the ending.
Author's Response: Wow, all in one go! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 28
I loved how realisitic you made the epilouge, you didn't have Carlisle forgive Bella so easily and have everything be picture perfect. You ended this story in the best way possible and I'm glad I was along for the ride. I look forward to your upcoming stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review along the way. I am glad you enjoyed my ending as it was hard to write. It's so easy to want to put everything right immediatly but it doesn't always work out that way.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 28
Lovely, satisfying ending to your story.
Sometimes things that are not easy are more treasured.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Endings are always hard things and I am glad it seems to be well recieved. I appreciate you taking the time to review along the way, it meant a lot to me.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story! I loved every minute of it along the way and thought the ending was perfect - Bella and Carlisle making peace.
I have put a rec in the A/N for my next update of my story 'Just A Call Away' so when that gets validated (hopefully soon) some of my readers might come on over and have a read too :) I hope they do because I enjoyed this story immensly :)
I'm looking forward to reading anything else that you write and again want to thank you for writing this - it is a story that I never got bored with (which I do often get bored in stories) and one that made me laugh adn cry.
You are awesome :) xxx
Goodbye - The Affair - you will be missed.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews. I really appreciate you taking the time to not only read and review but to rec, it makes me want to squee like a fan girl. : )
I look forward to checking out some more of your stories as well. I put a one shot in for validation so hopefully it will give you something to check out while I am on vacation.
Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow this story was really good. i will probably read it over and over, as i do with the stories on here i love the most. even though alot of parts in this story were hard to read, i still loved it so much and getting through those parts to read the next, was worth it, just like new moon:)
one thing that i didnt know i would like, but really did, is that the ending was not completely perfect. things werent amazing, but they werent horrible. atleast carlisle and bella can be okay with eachother now, and move onto becoming a family. i just really loved this story and you did a great job:)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I felt I couldn't make everything perfect because it just seemed too unrealistic but it is as happy as I could make it. Thank you for all your reviews.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 28
That was a great ending! I'm sad though that it's over.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you will come back and read my next stories too.
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thank you for the beautiful ending to this story. I thought that the birth of baby Elizabeth was the perfect way to heal Carlisle's wounded heart and bring Edward's family back together. The epilogue was totally appropriate and believable . I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you, an epilogue is always the hardest part to write. I am glad you enjoyed my story and I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 28
I like the epilogue. It was appropriate for Bella to skip Carlisle & Esme's wedding, and there were several years before Bella & Edward got married. It was enough time and distance following the end of her marriage to Carlisle. I would expect that Carlisle woudl never be fully comfortable having her as Edward's mate, and you kept it real.
The line about Alice not wanting to have a wedding because of the stress had me laughing out loud. This is quite possibly the funniest, most unexpected Alice moment I have read in fan fiction.
How apropo that baby Elizabeth was born on Christmas. The image of Carlisle holding his granddaughter brought a tear to my eye. Bella was forgiven, and everything really came full circle. I couldn't have imagined a better ending for the story.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and congratulations on the completion of your story. I have enjoyed it!
Liz
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have read too many crazy wedding Alices' that I just couldn't do that. : ) I actually didn't plan on a Christmas baby at first, it just worked into my timeline when I realized what month I wanted her to get pregnant in.
Thank you so much for all your reviews, I loved each and every one of them.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 28
Great story...so glad I read it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 27
k im not going to lie... i wanted action.. but this was perfect!!!! hopefully carlisle and edward can fix thier relationship... update soon plis!!
Author's Response: action like a fight or action like a lemon??
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 27
bold move from bella but i hope the right one
Author's Response: Well she has just been coasting along up until this point, I figured she needed to put herself out there a bit too.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 27
That was really brave of Bella to confront Carlisle, I am ashamed to admit that I avoid conflict whenever I can I would not have been so brave if I were in her place. Although I don't think I would ever cheat....but that's besides to point lol
I can't believe there is no more "next" button for me to keep reading :(
I miss this story already and I only just finished this chapter lol I loved the past 2 days knowing that I was coming home to it at the end of the night and I had it to look forward too :)
Thanks also for replying to all my reviews - it was ncie to share my journey through the story with you and I can't wait the next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews. There is only one more update left and it is with the beta now, so you won't have to wait too long.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 26
Wow, I feel emotionally drained just reading that lol and I wasn't even there...not that' it's real hahahaha
Wow, you pour so much real emotion into your writing and I can fell it while I read. You are wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It is hard sometimes to write things so emotional and I am glad it translated.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh My God! I can't believe you left it there! And we wont get an EPOV so how will I ever find out how this conversation will go?? lol Maybe you will kindly do another Carlisle outtake of this scene???? PRETTY PLEASE with a Cullen on top!!
I would imagine that Carlisle would do a lot of yelling lol
YES there is another chapter to go :) AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: As you know already you will get the just of what happened. But I cut away from that scene cause I didn't want to write it. : )
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 27
Another greate chapter. Thanks for giving me something I didn't even know that I wanted. She was smart to meet him at his workplace. He was probably more inclined to listen to what she had to say. I'm glad she went to see him. Now hurry and finish the story up so you can go on vacation. Please don't leave us hanging...
Author's Response: Don't worry the last update is with the beta so you won't be left hanging when I leave. : ) Thanks for reading.
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