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Reviewer: bubbleskami (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Oh that was mean! Why did you stop?! Lol! This is pretty awesome! I hope you will update soon! ^_^
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 4: His Composition
The back and forth with Alice was the funniest bit, but the, um, struggles Bella has with self-control are also entertaining.
Reviewer: hotmama (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
OK, I love Alice - but there is nothing better than E/B tension! Love the cliff hanger - but don't leave us hanging long!
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 2: Her Precognition
Yes, Edward should get his butt up there ;). This is one of the more "interesting" difficulties of the twilight universe; can't wait to see your take on it.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
hmm the last one huh? Being pregnant...I don't have to worry about the tie of the month...but afterwards I wouldn't mind borrowing him for his services! HAHAHA!
Reviewer: SuzyQ (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Woah, what a cliffy! MORE!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
OMG! UPDATE SOON! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Mmmmmm Edward! Wow, when he loses his battle with his own self control the good times start rolling. Very sensual stuff. Sorry, Alice, not really all that interested in you right now. Tell the author that she needs to write one about you and Jasper. That would be a treat. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
I DO LOVE BOTH YOU AND ALICE
HOWEVER YOU CAN'T COMPETE WITH EDWARD
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Last chapter!?!?!?!?! Noooo lol darn darn darn haha
Hey, I gave ALice some love in last chapter....but I will gladly do it again. Love to Alice.
Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Damn, damn, damn!! Here I am, getting all hot and bothered and you STOP!!
*looks at Alice* "Alice, I miss you and you're one of my favorite characters. Can you teach me the irresistable pout to use on Abbabble?"
Update soon :)
Reviewer: Tatiana (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Great fan fic :) Alice You're a goddess lol! she's just so cute !
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Ugh! Totally unfair to leave us here! That was major HOT though! I'd be glad to die at those hands! Will ALICE come to the rescue? :-)
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Oh no! Where did you send this fab story? Love the discussion with Alice .. too cute! The emotions from Bella are fantastical! Edward ... well what can I say? Has he finally lost it?
Reviewer: kidmomx4 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Your writing is beautiful. As soon as I hit "submit," I'm going to see what else you've written on this site (I'm relatively new to this--especially the reviewing part).
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and am waiting with baited breath for the rest! (And I assume, since Alice has allowed this little encounter to happen, that I won't need tissues for the next chapter! And speaking of Alice, she should know she's irresistible and we love her!)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
WTF?!?!?! That's like the cliffie to end all cliffies!!! OMG!!!
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
omg cant wait for the next chapter ,,, alice ur awesome!! we all LOVE you ur the best ;**
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
It was a good cliff hanger. Alice is awesome, although she wouldn't of given them privacy if she thought anything bad was going to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Waiting for the vampatic chater...bad bad ba moment to stop at!!!
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Oh I am sure Alice is waiting in the wings.
Please send Edward my way tonight, i am in need too...hmmm you know.
Oh OK, he belongs to Bella. I do have to add this to the top of the list of things Mr Right knows how to do.Ok maybe not the TOP of the list..LOL
its so nice to find someone else who thinks like me...naughty!
Reviewer: catherinejoy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
UPDATE FAST !!!!! Amazing chapter ... hot hot hot ...
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
ALICE WE ALL LOVE YOU!
Reviewer: blondie1990 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Don't leave us hanging like that!
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
noooooooo badperson don't do that aargh
i hate cliffies gah
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Poor Alice. Well, I do miss her, but I enjoy some quality alone time between Edward and Bella! Can't wait to see what's next.
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