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Reviewer: Camelisecullen (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
I my god that was intense!!!!! Are they going to have sex Next I sure hope so!!!!
Reviewer: demonicnekomaster (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
oh that was hilarious, alices text about the wedding dress, a great mood breaker
Reviewer: Moose (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
Well done, you!
Just woke up with cramps this morning-- read this and now they're gone. Thanks, girl!
Oh and your writing is beautiful. I love the musical metaphors. Any chance you'll be writing any more stories... perhaps with a more PG rating? I liked this; it was very tastefully done, but I would love to read something a bit less risque too.
In any case, thanks so much for posting this short and sweet idea of yours! I'm a writing teacher by the way...
Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Indisposition
Loved this one its one of my faves:)
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Indisposition
Please update! This story is so awesome, and I would hate to see it unfinished.
Reviewer: elz (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: His Composition
Can I tell you just how beuatifully you use music as a metaphor in describing his touch? Bravisima!
Author's Response: I can't believe how long it's been since I've visited my own story at Twilighted (got married and moved twice this year). Thank you for your kind review! I miss studying music---so of course, I had to give Edward his due as a metaphorical maestro. :)
Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
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im lovin this story
Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 4: His Composition
<3 it
Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Indisposition
im lovin it x
Reviewer: jwill112876 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tensions and New Intentions
Just stumbled across this today...but as I'm still in at chap 5, I guess I'm in it for the long haul!
Great job! Beastly/crazed Edward is my favorite! He is one hell of a man!!
Of course, every girl wants Alice as her BFF...she is the BEST ever!
:).
Reviewer: renesmeebellward (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Indisposition
This is one my favorite stories. I mean who wouldn't want their true and only love to do something like that for them it's the sweetest thing i've ever heard i love the idea I wish my boyfriend would do that i'm going to ask thanks for the idea
Reviewer: glitteratiglue (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Indisposition
EPOV - yes please? Love it girl x
Author's Response: Working on it! I am starting a new job, though, so it may get pushed to the side. However, next time I'm ---er, inspired, or indisposed, or at the mercy of my cycle--I will post some new EPOV chapters. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: glitteratiglue (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
Love the use of insuperable - Jane Eyre, *sigh* another sexy, brooding Edward. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED this story! Phew, hot - and I love how Edward was so caring while Bella had cramps. Don't we all want a boyfriend like that ;) x
Author's Response: Brownie points to you for picking out the use of that word! Huzzah for Jane Eyre. Glad you liked my story, too. Do you think I should write this from EPOV?
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
Do you plan on finishing this story!? I really hope so... I'm very picky about my fanfics, and I've really enjoyed this one so far. Please update! Or at least let us know if you're not going to finish it... which I hope is not the case,
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
So I just rad through the story and loved it, but it still says not complete. Is it or no?
And I would love to make you a better banner check out my threas ans let me know.
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683
Author's Response: Just joined the forum today! I will check out your thread as soon as they activate my account. I'd LOVE to have a better banner, thanks! You are too sweet! And by the way, I am contemplating an EPOV set to chase the BPOV verson. That's why this story is still listed as "incomplete."
Reviewer: quailingquazar (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
LOVED it!
Sorry I didnt review each part individually, but I just couldnt bare to stop reading long enough to type something!
Please keep up the great work! I was on the edge of my seat giggling like a school girl while reading this! lol
Thank you so much for sharing!
*off to the cold shower now*
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
Uh, I had missed the end of this story. So good that it came among the random ones. Delightful. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
Please write this from EPOV!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm definitely considering it. But Edward's such a damn prude, I don't think he wants me to get that far inside his head. Who knows what pervy thoughts he was having and desperately trying to hide in this situation. I will try typing up an EPOV and see if he opens up to me a little. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: His Composition
This is a good story. I like it. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: His Composition
This is a good story. I like it. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
I loved this story. It was hot and sexy and since you ended this chapter in "fin", does that mean you're finished with it? The index says that is isn't a completed work so you intend to add to it? Oh, I hope you do. This was really really good stuff. *whew!*
*hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: fnmom68 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
That was a great story! Poor Edward continues his self-loathing when it comes to his actions with Bella.
I love your conversations with Alice, too! Those were great. Can't wait to read your next story.
Reviewer: fnmom68 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her Precognition
This is really good. A breath of fresh air from normal fanfic -and so relate-able! I can completely sympathize with Bella.
Stupid, non-menstruating vampires!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
gah! update soon!!!!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Permission
I just had cramps on line with poor Bella's here and spent the whole looking for this storyto help make me feel better. Thank you. I cant wait for more please more soon
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