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Reviewer: msaubreydrakegraham (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 22

i loved your story so much!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 22

okay i have 1 question for u did they really change bella like make her stronger and make her able to hold her breath for 20 min. that part i was confused on
neways i loved this story i loved how edward saved bella and changed her
i loved jake
u r a very good author and i look forward to readin more from u
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: itsbloomagic (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

You mentioned Kraft Dinner and KD about 12 times in this chapter. That had to be one of the funniest things I've ever read, based purely on a word or phrase being repeated. Thank you for that.

And by the way, this is a really awesome fic. :)

Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 5

And it begins... I'm so glad this story is completed and I don't have to wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

B's not s'posed to be kissing the 'mark'.

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love how 'ballsy' B is in your story!

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

oooh.... Edward's on the plane with B...

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very intresting first chapter! Excited to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

great ending. im glad bella get a happy 'normal' life ending.

Reviewer: Aiti (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice ending!

Reviewer: saniaast27 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 22

aww your stories was so sweet i totally love it........................

Reviewer: MrsDuckyFuzzles (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 22

awesome story! nice ending (Y) well done my loverrr xxx

Reviewer: roserose61 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 22

great story

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

Fabulous writing!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 15

Such a nice way to say those three little words, Bella.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 14

Well, even though Renee isn't my favorite person, I'm glad Bella tied up loose ends.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 13

I've always hated Renee.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 22

that was a wonder finale

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 12

Well, maybe Edward isn't as much of a moron as I once thought. :) He's actually kind of adorable.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 11

Okay, so Bella kills Edward's uncle, plans on killing his father, and has kidnapped Edward. If I were Edward, I would definitely be thinking about kissing her. -_-.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 10

What are they going to do in Phoenix?

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

So Bella is a bit like a vampire.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 8

Poor Edward.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love how strong Bella is, physically and emotionally.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great writing.

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