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Reviewer: fan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
the three point of views i like but then we only get a short insight to the story so i will kinda miss that
i would like to tell you guys to update soon but i really want a good story
so keep up the goodwork and by the way why does pup keep repeating the same reply to all reviews?
Author's Response: Thank you, we are glad to her you like the story... the multiple POV's may live on in the bonuses for the reviewers..... We really work hard to give you a good story, it really means alot that y'all are enjoying it, tahts why we write. As for my reply? Pole dances and panty flashes is my closing of sorts that began on the P&P thread. I hope that answered your questions. Thanks again for reading!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:56 PM · On: You Know That She's Watching
I just want it to be Bella and Edward.....just like 99.9% of your readers, I guess....
Author's Response: Yeah, thats kind of the general opinion...I am a bit of a rebel and a J/B fan......Thanks for reading Sheryl, I am really glad you are enjoying it!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 07:09 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
This little story of yours is amazing. I'm a huge Jasper fan, and the plot to this is freakin' hilarious. I can't wait to see what other compromising positions Jazz and Eddie can get Bella into. And that was classic Emmett all the way. I can just see the smirk on Em's face. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Glad you are gettinga kick out of it. I am a Jasper fan myself.....There will be many compromising positions and Emmett smirks to come love, no worries.
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:53 PM · On: You Know That She's Watching
that was a major tease of teasers
Author's Response: Hee Thanks darlin! And thanks so much for the beautiful banner!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:36 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
I absolutely freakin' love this story. I'd like to have me one of those Edward and Jasper sandwiches! Update soon. : )
Author's Response: Yummy...thats kinda my plan for lunch! Glad you are linking it!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
UGH!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: As soon as we can, patience my darlin! Glad you like it!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
this is turning into an awesome story. Sorry the bsnner has been delayed I was really and truely sick, but I have started on it now.
Author's Response: Well thanks! A banner? Woo! that makes me smile! Hope you are feeling better lovey and thanks for your support!!!!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: dangerkitty (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
Story is called Reinventing Bella. Check it out and let me know what you think, Pup. Very similar dance scene.
Author's Response: I can't wait!!!! Thanks for the info.
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Author's Response: I can't wait!!!! Thanks for the info.
Pole dances and panty flashes, Pups
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
OMG, the sexual tension is outrageous...... Hmmm, a threesome with Jazz? Now that would be interesting, but I am hoping that Edward puts the kabosh on that one. love the alternating POV's. now the big question is, who bags who first?
Author's Response: Ahh...a cannon fan...we'll just have to see what happens.....glad you are enjoying darlin!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
pups
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:59 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
LOL.. Go Em..The boyzs needed to wait a bit!
Author's Response: Ha! Soo many great comments about cockblocking Em!!!! The boys will be put in their places soon enough. Thanks for reading!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:53 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
oh I so need to know what the boys are going to do and Emmet is a wonderful cockblocker. :)
Author's Response: I heart cockblock Emmett. You will know soon enough lovey.
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: trip2disney (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:38 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Just found your story and I love it. Can't wait to read more. Who wouldn't want Edward and Jasper at the same time. Yum!
Heather
Author's Response: Hey Heather! Glad you are enjoying our little ditty...Thats kinda what we were going for. :-)
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:54 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
I am losing track of the chapters here! I was convinced that the one before this was the newest as there was no "next" button, but apparently THIS is the newest! :D
Awesome work!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm just gonna call you sparkles! This was posted recently. Glad you are enjoying. We will be updating again soon!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
Great work! Not exactly "amazing" or "awesome" status in my book, but right on the edge! I'm almost certain that before the story is over, however, it will be one of the best on the site!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Wow! My jaw juat dropped a bit. Thank you so much for your review. V and I are so glad people are enjoying this piece! Hopefully you will be over the edge soon.
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: lady jane (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:13 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
I soooooo cant wait fo the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks Janie! It should be up soon, V and I are hard at work.
pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:04 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Dammnnnnn!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hee. thanks babe! there will be more soon.
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:42 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
great chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks we will. :-)
pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: Kolene (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:56 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Emmitt is a wet dream waiting to happen. But in the position of Bella who the hell needs a wet dream? I like the story and the line it is following. I certainly hope you can update soon though.
Author's Response: Hee...glad you like our Em. Also? Very true. The boys are yummy...... Glad you are liking it. there will be another update soon.
pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:49 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
mmm i love this story!
Author's Response: And we love you chickie! Thanks for the kind words!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:37 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
loved it please write fast
ur amazing author
Author's Response: Amazing? Wow...if I could only blush...there will be more soon lovey....
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
The story is ok so far but the three POVs are making me dizzy.........just a suggestion, you dont have to get everyone's reaction since it causes repetition which can be boring at times. Other than that its ok so far
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:57 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
I really don't mind the different POV's, like the story first time reading it. Poor Bella being tag teamedby Edward and Jasper, good and bad things to come I'm sure... whats a girl to do?
Author's Response: What's a girl not to do? Poor Bella wornt be poor much longer. Thanks for reading darlin!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:21 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
hey, liking your writing , i like the different pov's, i m hoping bella isnt just jelly in this nut sandwich ed/jas have going on, and that she has some control , not just their toy, looking forward to your updates, seeing where you take it- hot as f*ck...
thanks
Author's Response: Hot as fuck? Thanks baby! Our Bells is just taking some tiem to get used to her surroundings....she will be rockin soon.
pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:19 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Love the Emmett cock block!!! and I enjoy the three way POV, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Heh. there will be other cockblocks along the way.....Glad you are enjoying it!!!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:52 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Another great chapter. I actually like all 3 POV. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks darlin! There will be a new update soon!
Pole dnaces and panty flashes,
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