Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
Well, fuck me. Lucky Bella. Please, just serve me up some of Jasper and call me fed! Throw in some Edward for pudding though, please :)
I can tell tonight is going to be hot. (At least, I hope so. Don't do anything stupid, Bells.)
Edie xxx
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
Here is some ego sex, whores :)
I loved this first chapter and can't wait to read the rest. I was looking for a new read and I chose this one because I am a big Team Jasper fan, and am completely throwing myself at his 'fuck me later' grin.
Thanks for sharing with us :D I will review every chapter I read honestly because thats what I like people to do with my story, so... on with the show, bitches!
Edie xxx
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
she took that well! And excellent movie choice!
Reviewer: chishi09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Bella is one lucky girl. However, I can't help but feel that both guys will hurt her despite the warnings. What kind of games do these guys play anyway? On new girls??
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
HOT! Great chapter.
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Ok this chapter is very very very nice....
Reviewer: kshaudae (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Damnit that was hot. what i would give to be bella! okay cold shower time.
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
JEBUSS! HOT HOLY HELL!!!
I love jasper and edward together on bella there aint nothin better!!
Thank you
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Wow!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
That was HOT!!!! These boys are going to get themselves in some trouble.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
WOW
WRITE FAST
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
You are so evil... but in a good way!
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Yummy!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
I want to be in the Edwa--Jas sandwich. *pout*
Reviewer: littleangel531 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
holy hell that was awesome!
Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
And I can't wait to find out, too!
Hot. Totally hot. Completely f'n HOT.
I thank you.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Un-effin-believable, speechless here, ummm wow. I would like to know what Jasper was twitching for. Can't wait for more. Please hurry!!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
So hot, and what the heck was Jasper doing with Bella before hand when they disapeared.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
oh love this dirty little Bella
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
ok...first I thought the tag team was a little weird...but, hey it is Jasper and Edward. It turned out to be pretty flippin' hot.
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Wow. So hot. So, is one of them going to really fall in love with her? Then the real jealousy will begin....
Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume
Wow. HO-fricken-T! *cold shower with Jasper* ;)
Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:43 AM · On: You Know That She's Watching
Super hot! I'm lovin' this story. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:16 PM · On: You Know That She's Watching
wow...they sure are cocky...it would be nice to get with one of them...I am just not a whore...I hope Bella doesn't feel like one in the end.
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