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Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 02:10 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
So far so good. I hope she cheese-grates both of their nuts (Not literally)
I hate guys like that.
Author's Response: Lol, I agree with you but hopefully they will change.
~V
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:34 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
lol I like the e/j fighting over bella. like it so far
Author's Response: Thank you much! We really hope you continue reading, we are having a blast with this.....the fighting will indeed continue for a bit longer...
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:45 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
this was a really good first chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! We really appriciate the review and hope you will continue reading!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:39 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
That was funny as hell...and unexpected what you did with the Cullen characters. Was disappointed that there wasn't more.
Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more, and soon.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:00 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Awesome! What's going to come of Bella's lunch? Hope to read more chapters
Author's Response: We think you are awesome for taking the time to read and review! I hope you know about Bella's lunch by now, the next chapter is posted.....
pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:31 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
lol loved!!!!!!!!!!!! it but i want bella and edward
Author's Response: Hehe, I can tell by your name that you'd like it to be Bella and Edward. We'll see how it turns out. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:50 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
I'm liking it-it's good.
Author's Response: Thank you! We are havinga blast writing it and hope you continue to read and enjoy!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:52 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
fierce and naughty!!! now, continue as you were....
Author's Response: LOL, I don't know why that was so funny, but my eyes teared up. Thank you :)
Reviewer: Jenisawsome (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:47 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Omg i love it!! please update soon<3
Author's Response: Thanks! We love you! And we did update! Enjoy!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: Gabesmommi123 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:19 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
this is amazing! i love it .. jasper and edward .. mmm can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Geez you guys, I'm getting like, 16 shades of scarlett over here. They are kinda yummy arn't they? Thanks for readinga nd there will be more soon!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:45 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Love the story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! We did and will be agin soon!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:04 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
I laughed so hard. Please make Jasper and Edward beg for her. I want her to play hard to get. I can't wait for an update. Great start so far.
Author's Response: We're on the same page as you. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: dangerkitty (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:30 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Gah! I don't want it to end yet! Great start - I'm looking forward to more and am putting this on alert.
Author's Response: Well thanks Miss Kitty! I hope you are enjoying chapter two...we have lots more hijinks planned, don't worry.
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:13 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Formidable! Love the man-hos!
Author's Response: Oh formidable! I kinda love that word....you got bonus points in my book! we love the man ho's too...very very much! Thanks for reviewing!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:11 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Hmm...interesting start. I am looking forward to seeing how Bella puts these guys in their places! :)
Great idea you two taking on the responsibility of writing from different characters' POVs. I'm sure that makes it easier on you. And I gotta tell ya, I am quite sick of reading fic from different POVs which sound like they're essentially the same character. I already know that won't be a problem here. :)
Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're already thinking our story is going to be different, we appreciate it.
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:41 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Is this E/B or J/B?
Its wierd because this story reminds me of another story on here, except its Bella and Rose who are the whores betting on who can bag Edward first.
Its kinda sad that when it is Bella and Rose betting on having sex with someone... they are viewed as sexy and fun. But when its Edward and Jasper trying to win a girl... they are going to get played out like assholes.
Girls can get away with doing so many things that guys cant.
Anywho... I am curious as to see where this goes.
Author's Response: I'd tell you if this is E/B or J/B but it would kinda take some of the fun out if it.
I haven't read the story you're talking about and I hope ours and the other author's story don't turn out to me similar.
It's interesting to me that you think when Bella and Rose are betting on sexy they are viewed as sexy and fun but Jasper and Edward are viewed as assholes. I think it's the total opposite. I think when B & R do it they are considered whore and when E & J do it they are just ... well sexy and fun lol.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:24 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
You go girls! I like it... send out chapter 2!
Author's Response: Ask and you shall recieve....cause we are just good like that. Enjoy chapter 2!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:08 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Awesome into! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you much darlin! I'm sure by now you have recieved the sneek peek....We hope you'll continue reading. Thanks for taking the time!
Pole Dances,
Pups
Reviewer: Basara (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:06 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
heyyy nice start ^^ wanna read more !!
and yeah the french is kind of wrong ^^
but im only saying it coz im french lol
Author's Response: Sorry about that, we tried. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:05 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Hm there is something about a foul mouthed Jasper and Edward. Looking forward to seeing how this story shapes up. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I agree with you, Jasper and Edward are amazing. Thank you.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:22 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
I like, I like, I like alot>>>please continue
Author's Response: Thank you, and there will be more.
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