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Reviewer: aeb12484 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
The whole chapter was beyond amazing!! I can't even express how much I lvoe this story! AMAZING!! It's all sorts of angstalicious! Can not wait for chapter 4!! ^_^
Author's Response: And I can't express how much that means to me! Thanks for your continued reviews :)
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Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
So thrilled you updated! So far I love where this is going and cannot wait to find out how it all plays out!
They all seem to have such an interesting, casual relationship...and Alice is too nice...I hope she doesn't help Jasper...and oddly, I hope she does...
Look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Awe, Alice usually is the nicest character out of the bunch. She just can't help it, even if she's not getting who she wants. She'll have to get her bitch on sometime ;)
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Reviewer: dangerkitty (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
Come on! Get on with the groping already! ;) love the build up here...what I'd give to be Bella!
Author's Response: Oh yes, so much to give to be Bella ... sigh. Groping shall commence ASAP
~V
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: She Stands Under the Barlights
I think Jasper and Edward have made a deal with the devil; they are both so anxious to "get" Bella, that no they are going to have to share. And they don't want to...
Poor Bella. She has almost no idea about what's going on. I hope Alice will try and protect her. Funny that Jasper has morals when it comes to Alice. Wonder how long those morals are going to stick around...
Bella is a brave little girl going outside with scheming Edward. Terribly curious about what's going to happen next. Post again soon please!
Author's Response: Haha, yea poor naive Bella. Right now since she's new and doesn't really know J & E she's not totally keyed into what they're doing. And you're right, Jasper doesn't really want to share but no where near as much as Edward. Thanks for the review.
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Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
Really liking this story, poor Bella has no idea what she's getting into with those guys! But it is a little confusing with the switching perspectives and retreading ground, I got lost somewhere in the middle and thought it was the next day, but maybe it wasn't?? maybe label who is talking?
Author's Response: Sorry about the confusion. The switching POVs were labeled but we had a huge problem with the uploads and qjmom had to upload the chapters and maybe something got messed up tht way. I'm glad you're liking the story and thanks for reading!
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Reviewer: fan (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
hell yeah i want to know what the plan is!
Do you even have to ask?
update soon
Author's Response: Well we'll be sure to get that to you as fast as we can. Thanks for reading.
~V
Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
I like this story a lot... but Bella doesn't seem to have much of a personality. Are there really girls that are oblivious to 2 guys getting physical at the same time? Maybe I'm just out of the threesomes loop. I don't mean this as a criticism, this story is in my favorites list. It's just a little odd that she's like a chew toy, just reacting to their lemony 'ministrations'. Great storytelling though. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Haha, maybe she's a little oblivious to their intentions right now, but she won't be for much longer. We'll try to take her personality up a notch. Right now she's the knew girl, she doesn't know anybody, and she's getting a lot of attention she's not used to. Let's just say she's a little overwhelmed at the moment.
~V
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Fucking me running. What was this girl doing to me? I wanted to make her feel the same way as I did." I made her faint! There is a God and he loves me! Yes, I really want Edward and Bella together, not Bella and Jasper,, PLEASE???
" I grabbed Bella around her waist and pressed myself up against her back."I'll see you after school sweetheart. Don't keep waiting." Melting!
"Edward wrapped his arms around me and pulled me against him. "Are you sure?" His voice was low in my ear. "Because I could always carry you the rest of the way, I truly don't mind." Oh Baby, Oh Baby, wouldn't it be great to be carried by Edward?
I think the plan is for a threesome, which is probably OK with Jasper, since it is just a game to him, but I don't think Edward would like a threesome- he wants Bella to him self...After all , he is feeling protective of her..a telltale sign of deeper feelings.......Love it, Ladies!
Author's Response: Yes, I'm pretty sure we'd all loved to be carried by Edward, but I think that's number 358 on the list of things I'd like Edward to do me. I'm glad that you're picking up on little things. I love it!
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Reviewer: dee-dee (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
omg, i am in love with this new story!!! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: lady jane (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
so good so far! i cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading AND reviewing. It's pretty awesome that you've starting reading our story, even though there are only two chapters right now :)
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Reviewer: aeb12484 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad this chpater is working now! Good stuff! I am falling in love with this story! Looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^
Author's Response: You and me both. We're really glad that people like you are showing support for out little fic. Thanks so much!!
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Reviewer: mfrancesj (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
They better not be sharing Bella like that! I want Edward and Bella together!!
previews.... does it get sent to my account or email?
Author's Response: Previews go to email through the PM. What are you willing to do for us to make it so that Edward and Bella end up together? Would you mind terribly if there is some (ok a lot) of Jasper lovin'?
Reviewer: Twilightinmyheart (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
Okay my hot bitches I already submitted a review and UH it's not on here or I'm blind and can't see it. Oh well so anywho...I'm digging this story and feening for some smut, heehee but I will be a patient little girl. I can't wait for the next chappy to go up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No, bitch, you are not blind. There was this huge debacle in which chapters and to be deleted and then revalidated and I don't know what the hell else. Oh well, it's fixed now and we get to hear from your hot ass again. And you? don't have to be patient if you don't want to. We don't mind.
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Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
Yes...as a matter of fact, I do want to know what they have planned. Please write more.
Reviewer: Jenisawsome (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love your writing, but only delima is that i dont think i like how edward and jasper are double teaming her. it seems.. just smutty lol although i LOVE lemons!! dont get me wrong:) it also seems cheesy some of the things they say.
overall im still addicted and cant wait till the next chapter!! i just wanted to give you a real honest opinion other than "i love it, post the new chapter asap!" yknow?:)
Author's Response: We appreciate your real honest opinion. I think we're going to have to change the description of the story a little bit. It's not really a crackfic, but it's not something deep and extremely serious like Vampire in the Basement, for example. They are supposed to be normal teenagers and its supposed to be humorous. I hope this helps a little.
Oh and the double teaming? Yea it's smutty and that's how we like those boys! Thanks for reviewing.
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Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 2
yay more please!!!
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 And So It Starts
great can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks Missy, hope you enjoy it!
Pole dances and panty flashes,
Pups
Reviewer: Jesse Mason (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 2
please write the rest!!!!!
Author's Response: We're writing right now! Thanks for reading!
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Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:54 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
I like this story right from the start. Great characterizations, really well drawn, really well written. I can hardly wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well thank you darlin, your compliments are making me blush....well, they would be if I had any sembelence of innocence. Thanks for taking the time. We will have more for you soon!
pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:00 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Excellent first chapter, I am hooked, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, there's already supposed to be more. Hopefully it'll be here soon!
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Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:02 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
didn't u already write ch 2 why isn't up u already wrte ch 1 i didn't see a difference wats going on we need ch 3 which i got an email from already
Author's Response: We did already write and post chapter 2. There was some sort of problem. Pups couldn't access anything and after chapter 2 got posted I couldn't do anything with chapter 1. I was told that the problem was with chapter 2, so it got deleted and resubmitted but apparently it hasn't been revalidated yet. We're just waiting ...
You got an email alert for chapter 3? I'm really confused. Sorry about all this.
~V
Reviewer: ostmx (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:59 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
it was really fun to read :D
i tried to translate the french thing onm google translate, but it didn't work that well :/ xD
Author's Response: I'm really glad you are having fun, V and I are too. Yeah, the french translation? I have no reccolection of the actual source of the totally incorrect translation. It's supposed to be something along the lines of " welcome to forks, I can't wait to get to know you, I know we will be great friends. Have fun with Mike Newton" Or something. Anyway, thanks for reviewing darlin!
Pole dances,
Pups
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:11 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
I thought you already posted the 2nd chapter a few days ago? What happen?
Author's Response: We did already write and post chapter 2. There was some sort of problem. Pups couldn't access anything and after chapter 2 got posted I couldn't do anything with chapter 1. I was told that the problem was with chapter 2, so it got deleted and resubmitted but apparently it hasn't been revalidated yet. We're just waiting ...
Sorry about all the confusion.
~V
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:09 AM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Interesting that Edward and Jasper are competing for Bella's "affections". It will be interesting to see who wins...
Author's Response: Yes, Bella's "affections" that's a good way of putting it. More will be up as soon as it gets validated. Thanks for reading.
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Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:13 PM · On: And So It Starts (Q)
Good begining...cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! More is on the way ASAP!!
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