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Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Terms
that was real good....r u planning on continuing?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I don’t think I’m going to write anymore, but we’ll see. Initially I was just going to write the first chapter and be done with it and it ended up turning into a two-chapter story. I like reading EPOV so I figured I’d try writing one chapter. I think it came out ok, but I’ll probably just go back and tweak this one until I stop obsessing about it.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Terms
This is really good and I am enjoying it!!!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Terms
i hope they keep the yellow Porshe in the third movie!!! they didn't even include Edward's Vanquish for the Prom (*sigh*)
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Terms
Great job capturing Edward's emotions in this chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Terms
Great update! I love Edward's POV. Does he think that Jake is the reason she doesn't want to get engaged? I'm sure it has crossed his mind. Poor guy, he wants her to stay human but he needs her to belong to him so badly!
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Resolve
I loved it and can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The rest of Terms should be approved soon, hopefully this week.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Resolve
This was great!
I've been wanting to read this particular piece about Edward for so long now, and I never found the right piece, and I'm just so glad that you wrote it. So, thank you! :)
Edward's thoughts are very in character. Which is something I'm very happy about, because I keep on finding these stories where Edward acts pretty strange.. Anyways, loved it! Can't wait for your that next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I was worried about getting Edward's character right. It's good to hear that you think it's close to what it's supposed to be.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: twilightrocks98 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Resolve
I LOVE THIS STORY I CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Resolve
This was wonderful in every way possible. I loved your approach on Edward's determination to not be far from Bella after returning from Italy. It was completely seductive and hypnotic. I only wish it wasn't a one-shot. You could do wonders with more. Your EPOV is truly addictive. Please reconsider and continue this. Perhaps by just adding additional one-shots of EPOV moments throughout ECLIPSE? Oh the possibilities!
Please, please reconsider.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I’m adding more as I go, so keep an eye on it. It’s my first time writing fanfiction so its great to see that it’s being received so well. Thanks so much for reviewing! Seriously it is really appreciated.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Resolve
Great story. Good job.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Resolve
I am already addicted! I love it.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Resolve
very well done. i like the little touches, especially emmett. i haven't read eclipse lately and one of my students has the book so it took me a minute to catch up.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Resolve
great emotion
would be fun to hear the continuation
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Resolve
I liked it. Very well-written, very Edward. It would be interesting to see how you would write the next bit - his reaction to Alice's call, his thoughts as he drives towards La Push and waits for her to appear, the debate whether to cross the line or not. I hope you'll consider doing that part as you've done such a good job with this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I appreciate the reviews!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Resolve
I adore seeing bits of the book from Edward's POV, and interestingly enough I don't think anyone has tackled this particular bit. At least that I have read before. This feels quite canon this far, so good job.
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