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Reviews For What Lies Ahead
Reviewer: amandao (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Routine

it was`AWESOME :D PPPPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE WRITE MOOORRREEE

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Routine

Ness really needs to man up and go home and face the music.  She needs to deal with her emothions/guilt and get on with her life!  Ignoring everything is just hurting her and Jake.  Man Jake has to be the most understanding and supportive person in the world!

Loved the chapter, Take care!

Dixie



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! I completely agree.  Ness has some tough things to get over and she has some decisions to make.  You'll get all of your answers in the next chapter.  I agree, Jake is very understanding and supportive.  I'm glad you loved the chapter. I hope it continues to interest you :)

Reviewer: I_heart_jacob__ (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 05:13 PM · On: The Last Night

try more details with your next lemon, but this one was very good for your first



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and for the constructive criticism.  I've since written more lemons and hopefully I'm improving with each one I write :)

Reviewer: I_heart_jacob__ (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Secrets

very good

i really like it so far

Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Routine

Time to go home and face the music, she can't continue on in this emotional limbo, she needs to face the reality of the losses and move on with her family and Jake.



Author's Response:

Thanks for rating and reviewing and rating!  I agree Ness has some big decisions to make and next chapter she will do just that in the next chapter.  It's the chapter that I'm most nervous about submitting because there's a twist that I don't think anyone will see coming.

Reviewer: RunsWitWolf74 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Routine

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for rating and reviewing!  The next chapter should be coming up soon. I'm sending it off to my betas tonight.

Reviewer: niamh4ec (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 04:12 PM · On: The Pack Mind

morrre :D 

Reviewer: RunsWitWolf74 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Makeover

This was a cute chapter and I like Blonde Nessie as much a bronze Nessie. Loved how the Miley lyrics fit exactly her life at the moment. I so can't wait for the next chapter! Cause I so loved this one. ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R.  I'm so glad that you like Blonde Ness!  It's my way of giving her the subtle change that you'll see in her if you stick around for the spin off.  You preview is coming either today or tomorrow.

Reviewer: Tysonlane (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Makeover

I can understand Ness wanting to change who she is to help with the pain, but I hope it doesn't make her lose herself. I hope she gets back to the authentic Ness. I'm glad it's making her and Jake closer though... it's delightful ;)

Saw Eclipse last weekend, yet it was great! As for the song the lyrics are nice, too bad it's Miley Cyrus though. I heard the Miley Cyrus was bashing all things Twilight.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing :) It's Ness's way of coping, but no matter what she can't run from who she is for long.  Jacob and Ness's relationship makes me warm and fuzzy inside when I write them.  I know Miley Cyrus has expressed her dislike for Twilight, but the song just fit what i needed to acomplish in the chapter.  You should receive a preview soon.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Makeover

Another great chapter. I can understand why Ness feels the way she does, I would hate knowing my friends died for me also, but she need to remember she didn't kill them the Volturi did. I hope Jake helps her realize that. So only 5 chapters left of this story and then on to the sequel? I can't wait! :)

Loved the banner by the way!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R.  I'm so glad that you're excited about the sequel! I am too!  Yes, Ness is shouldering all the pain on her own, but it's in her nature, especially since Bella is her Mom and Edward's here dad. they both have the habit as well.  You should recieve your preview tonight or tomorrow :)

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Makeover

Lovely!! So great girlie!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I glad you liked it! I'll get your preview out to you soon :)

Reviewer: kmddeprez1122 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Makeover

can't see banner, but oh well.

I love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  I'll get your preview out to you by tonight :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Cubbles108 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:30 PM · On: The Pack Mind

You have an ABSOLUTELY SUPER DOOPER OOBER psyched fan! I can't wait for Life Interrupted. You have no idea!!!!

Reviewer: JacobsGirl13 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Bad News

That was great :) Keep writing please



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Don't worry, I'm going to keep writing.  I've found that I have a knack for it, and it's fun.  After this there's a sequel and I have 2 other stories that I'm working on as well, so there is plenty of writing going on for me :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Bad News

I thought you captured her emotions very well. Ness is so lucky to have Jake :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R!  Thanks so much for saying that.  It was a very hard chapter to write.  Trying to tap into her losing 3 friends and dealing with the fact that it was "her fault" that it happened. Those were some hard emotions to conjure up!

Reviewer: Tysonlane (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Bad News

Aro would be the one to escape! Grrrr! Poor Nessie finding out about the ones they lost, that would be hard to accept and not feel guilty.

Loving all the J & N though :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  Yeah, I agree it would be hard not feeling guilty, b/c the fight started b/c she turned Nahuel down.  I'm glad you enjoy my N/J :)

Reviewer: RunsWitWolf74 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Bad News

That was a good, yet sad chapter. A few were lost and now Nessie blames herself, at least Jacob is getting her through it.

Also, love the innocence at the end

Update soon! ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R! Yes, Ness is truly E and B's daughter, willing to shoulder all the responsibility for her friends getting killed though she wasn't even there when it happened. 

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Bad News

This is great...please update ASAP



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  There should be an update soon. I'm putting it in the queue tomorrow :)

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Bad News

Love it! So emotional:)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the R&R!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nawaliy (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Bad News

that was emotional but keep up with the good work! I feel that I love this story......



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  I'm so glad to hear that you love it too!  I think there is only one other story that I love more than this one, and it's the sequel to this that me and Bsean are only seven chapters into and we love it much more than our originals already.  Thanks for the kind words!  A new chapter should be up pretty soon.

Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Bad News

LOVED IT!!! But she is definitely Edward and Bella's child, ready to take the blame for the sky being blue!!

You raised angst to a new level in this chapter, but at least Edward was honest with her. Now in true Cullen style (at least her parents style) how is she going to try and sacrifice herself for the greater good?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the R&R!  You sure have Ness pegged!  She is Bella and Edward's daughter so being self sacrificial is a part of her nature.  With only a few chapters left, it will become apparent in the end just how much she takes after her parents.  This chapter was so hard for me to write I have to admit.  It was hard trying to tap into the emotional storm she was going through.

 

Reviewer: kmddeprez1122 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Bad News

very nice :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: JacobsGirl13 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 05:35 PM · On: School

I love this series! Keep writing please!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing, and I definitely will keep writing!

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 06:51 AM · On: School

This is great but now I am sitting at the end of my seat waiting for the next chapter!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!  I'm glad you're in suspense waiting for Edward's call!  I will try to get the next chapter out soon :)

Reviewer: hellodoll (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:40 AM · On: School

thanks for another great chapter!

 

loved the lemon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rating and reviews.  Im glad ur enjoying it! ur preview is on the way.

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