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Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
ok listen woman!!!!
There will be no murdering of any sort. Do you hear me?!
Can you tell us when the next chapter will be up. *crosses fingers*please tonight?
All I want to say is please hurry. I can't tell you how much I love this chapter. The words are not there, I think this is one of my favs. It shows the jealousy and passion in Bella. I just hope Edward sees it too and doesn't "kill" her or beat her to bad. I kinda like the rough dominate Edward.
Author's Response: I'm so very surprised so many of you seem to just love this chapter. I know I do, but I was sure everyone would abandon the story with this crap I'm pulling. I just like for things to get really bad before they get good, you know? ;)
The chapter is almost done, but my betas still have to take a look at it. Trust me, you want them to do that before I post it.
Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Crap!!!!! Poor Bella, feeling that way about Edward and seeing him feeling up the other woman.........that hurts!.........
“Unfortunately, no,” This makes me think that the plan is to kill Bella???? If it would be better for her to be one of Edward's "collectibles.”??
Author's Response: I'm sure you don't really want me to answer that question, right? ;)
I know, the jerk. And if you could just see the woman the way I see her in my head... THE most annoyingly perfect and hot blond you could ever imagine. Bella is insecure enough without having to watch Edward make out with THAT...
What's Edward's plan... I guess we'll find out...
Thanks for reading, Sherylb. You are an awesome reviewer, you never miss one! :)
Reviewer: cda (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 5- Desire
IT SOUNDS LIKE STOKHOLM SYNDROME IS THAT WHAT YOU WERE GOING FOR
Author's Response: I think I would actually need to do a little more research on SS to answer you... Pretty much what I was going are my own perverted fantasies about a bad Edward. He'll come around though, give him another change :)
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
That hurt. I can't wait to see what happens next. Edward is such a jerk.
Author's Response: I know, he trully is a dickhead. But I can't help root for him, he is so messed up and affraid...
Thanks for the review, and thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Great chapter! I was totally enthralled by it. I love how you did the party and Bella discovering Edward- it was very suspenseful!
I can't wait to see what happens. I try to not ever say this in my reviews because I know it annoys writers, but I'm making an exception, I'm gonna say it: PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! UPDATE SOON :)
Author's Response: Ha ha ha, it doesn't annoy me, I just wished I could update sooner. I suppose I could be writing a chapter instead of replying to the reviews, but this is such an enjoyable process for me. I love what you guys have to say and I think it's the least I could do, to reply with my thoughts on your thoughts, you know?
Anywaysssss, I'll get the chapter done as soon as I'm done here! :)
Reviewer: Karah5406 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Oh my god! I am DYING to know what happens next! I really feel for Bella, the poor girl. I want her to escape or something, I don't know. I really feel like she deserves a little power and self-dignity(at least in her eyes) back. Poor thing. I am captivated by this story. I was SO excited when I saw you had updated, did my own little happy dance. :) I am really really excited for the next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it so much, I do hope I don't disappoint! I know, Bella deserves to have Edward at her feet...
Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think! :)
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Murder? Is that not a bit harsh . . . for a lemon . . . or an Edward? This plot is toooo good for that result. I must say you certainly did catch me offguard with that little twist. Words fail me . . . except NOW I'm ready to Edward get his teeth kicked in . . . .
Author's Response: Ha ha ha, Vampyre, I knew I could get you on the Edward hating wagon! I just love my bad boy... sorry. I'm glad you were surprised, somehow I imagined everyone would see it coming, I'm glad they didn't. Thanks for reading, and thanks for all the great support :)
BTW, so now I have people telling me NOT to change the title... arrrgh! What to do???
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Edward, Edward, Edward. You are so unwise. I do not wish to kill you. Though that may be something many would wish upon you, death. No, I wish for you to feel the same as the one who has captured your heart. Yes, we all know about your affections towards Miss Isabella. Jealousy is a bitch, much like payback.
Now for my little Bella. You, my dear, should have known better. Falling for an immoral mob leader. How very child like, trying to find the good in everyone. Your lover's moral compass is nearly non existent. Of course, as he begins to realize his true feelings for you, he will try to push you away or find "distractions". Such as the young slut that attended the party on this fine evening. Now do not worry, darling. Edward will come around.
~ B
Author's Response: Dear lord B, it's like you crawled into my brain and sucked the story out! I know, my Edward is so very fucked up, he rapes and lies and cheats... all in a good day's work. But like you said, he'll come around. Poor thing, maybe he's hoping for Bella to come around... ;)
I loved your review so much, I read it over and over... :)
Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Given the choices, I'd like to murder Edward! I'd like to see Bella be able to put a complete halt to their 'rendezvous' and even stop eating dinner with Edward. Then I'd like to see Edward suffer!
Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for ;)
Hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: eddielover92 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
i cant believe edward would try and hook up with another girl in the same house that bella was in and not care.
Author's Response: Hmmmm, who told you he doesn't care? I know you hate him, as you should, BUT remember we don't know what is going through that pretty and messed-up head of his. Give him a chance?
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
i want to murder edward. i want to see any heavy object split his cock, his last scream lasting just long enpugh for him to see his left ball south, and his right one-north. then, i want naked bella doing it with rob pattinson while blood slowly leaves his body. ;)
please, tell bella revenge is always best served cold; although-she shoud have known that, she's not sixteen anymore; darling, if you don't kill the boy on the spot, wait 'till time is right-don't warn him with a fit! ;)
anyway, i don't mind not-sex in this chapter, but boy, i will mind if she doesn't show some backbone and make him pay for that-with cold, dead eyes would be best!
:) loving it, btw.
Author's Response: Ha ha ha ha, Lord Periperi, you've outdone yourself. I literally spit out my chai tea when I read your review! Ha ha ha ha. I'll update as soon as I can and you let me know if Bella gets what she deserves.
I'm so glad you like! :)
Reviewer: corrielag (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
I want to murder you leaving the chapter on a cliffie like that! Very mean :(
Author's Response: I know, but they are so much fun! ;) I'll update soon, I promise!
Reviewer: fuckward (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
My stomach just sank. Even though Bella and Edward are not actually a couple, its like he cheated on her. I hate it. Why the fuck did he do this?ugh...i cant stand Edward with another woman...cant stand him being like this..
Author's Response: Oh, it is, you are completely right. I think in everyone's mind he cheated on her too, whichever way you see it. I'm sorry I made your tummy hurt, things will get better... then they'll get bad... then they'll get worse... then they'll get better again. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Thanks for the update and I don't whant to murder anyone about what happen.
But I'm happy to see bella react to what happen to her and happy to have some trought from her ^^
Author's Response: I knew you'd enjoy it more than anyone else, LitG! I'm so glad you did. Yep, Bella was due some trashing of Edward's property.
As always, thanks for reading! I love having you as a reader :)
Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
loved this chapter, really give you a deeper look at things. cant wait till the next one ^_^ xxx
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. I had a blast writting about Bella destroying her room, I'm sure Edward had a cow over it! Thanks for taking the time to read and revie, makes me all tingly and happy! :)
Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 1- Imprisonment
Oh yeah, I'm all for a little strangulation here. What the heck was Edward thinking?! Pft, if he has Bella then he doesn't need "Collectibles". I hope Bells will get her chance at some payback and Edward will have to really grovel [evil grin].
I'm totally wrapped up in your story and can hardly contain myself whenever I come to the end of a chapter. It's so exciting to find an update alert for this ;)
I think, like some other readers, I will check out The Fountainhead.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Let me know what you think, it's seriously one of my favorite books. And if you happen to be into architecture by any chance, you will devour it!
Ha ha, poor Edward, he thinks he can remain unattached to Bella...
I'm so glad you are liking it so much! Thanks for letting me know! :)
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Gah...I just can't get enough. The chapters always end too soon. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I know, I'm lazy that way, my chapters ARE short, it's not just your imagination. I've noticed most authors average 5,000 words a chapter, I've never reached 3,000. Ha ha, sorry. But I'm glad you like them! Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: DDiaz1170 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
well..... yes i want to murder edward..... you know what else? i want bella to escape and make edward miserable. great chapter though it was ok with the 'no sex' thing...
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad it's him you want to murder and not me ;) I want to murder him too, but I just love to hate him. I love me a bad Edward.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: gg2full (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
omg pls post soon!!! i cant wait what he has to say for himself and how bella well now act around him. pls post soon
Author's Response: I'll post it asap, I wouldn't want to leave anyone hanging too long. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
oh man i love it this is amazing keep it coming please. and to answer your question i want bella to flip the fuck out on edward set his high and mighty ass straight like we all know only she can do.
Author's Response: He he, the high and mighty ass of Edward Cullen *sigh*
I'm so glad you are liking the story! :)
Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Ruh roh. I am itching to see what happens now!
Author's Response: Good! I'm so glad! :)
Reviewer: nseller (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
Yeah, I'd settle for murdering Edward at this point.
Author's Response: Give him a chance anyway? ;)
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 8- Jealousy
keep going!
Author's Response: I will! :)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1- Imprisonment
I did think you chose García Lorca in part because of that reason ;). But didn't think it was the only one.
Thanks for the answers and the not so much answers... the teasing, and suspense is part of what makes these exchanges so much fun.
Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody
honey, please do not bring yucky Tanya or Jacob....
tooo ordinary for such a lovely story...
i will read the book that inspired you to write this story and i hope that you will not get bored of this fiction...
I want to see/read the end of it.
maybe you can tell how many chapters are you planning to write and how often will you update? no offense but i am already checking daily for updates xoxo
Author's Response: Hi Erhea, don't worry, I totally get why you ask these questions. I really hate it when I discover a fic I love just to have the author abandon it after a couple of chapters. Ok, so for the number of chapters, the answer is 18, I think... this may change, but it's unlikely. About how often I can update, I'm trying once a week, trying! I'm working with a couple of betas so between real life, work, lack of inspiration every now and then, the beta period and the time it takes for a chapter to get uploaded here, sometimes it takes a bit longer.
No Jake or Tanya, promise ;)
Let me know what you think of The Fountainhead, it is awesome!
Thanks for reading! :)
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