I would love to see an outtake with the Volturi and their crumbled empire. And I’d love to read the letter they sent out claiming the Cullen’s treason and how they described it. The way I see it. They were the ones that committed treason acting against a family for no reason other than to acquire power. They got everything they deserved actually I think they deserve more. They need to be dethroned completely.
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Author's Response:

This is so unexpected... To have a new reader, one leaving such thoughtful comments. 

I wrote this over a decade ago and with such a love for continuing the stories I

Fell in love with when they first came my way. I haven't revisited this work in a long 

Time, and I'm quite sure my writing has changed in the time since I wrote this story 

But you make me want to peek back in!

I would’ve thought Edward would’ve at least mentioned him marrying his daughter.
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Instead of the Volturi dying, I would like for them to be exposed for the fraudulent rulers that they are. I think that may be worse than death, because it could be cause for their removal if enough Vampires find out They are power hungry phonies and just want to accumulate more power to protect what they have created. Jane and Alec need to die so the powers are severely limited. Once that happens they can be ousted.
I hope the plan goes well or at least better than expected. I also hope Bella is not left somewhere to worry. She needs to be there so that the Volturi know that they can’t mess with the Cullens EVER AGAIN.
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I saw someone commented that they should have built a relationship before they kissed? I don’t think that person gets how imprinting works. It’s literally like a lightening strike. “Colpo di Fulmine” an Italian saying meaning love at first sight, literally lightening strike. There is NO RESISTING this feeling. Kissing is the first natural reaction and it is not something they could fight even if they wanted too. With Jake and Nessie it was different because she was so young when the imprinting happened, but for an adult (for all intents and purposes) imprinting is just like that. That really needs to be understood.
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I’m so glad I was correct. I did so want to see Jake “marking his territory” at their school though. That would have been fun to read. I am loving this story so much. It’s one of the BEST Post Breaking Dawn stories that I have ever read. I also mourned the ending of the books. I can’t wait for more of this. I hope that Lila can become closer with the family and seamlessly integrate into it. She should probably just move into one of the houses with them, or maybe they can build a house on the property for the Seth and Lila. A small intimate cottage with a few more luxuries than what Jacob has over tha garage. Maybe a house big enough for all three of them. The possibilities are endless!
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I am really enjoying this story. I am sad for Charlie and the Cullens because they will miss him, but they do have the means to have Charlie, Sue, Seth and even Leah come for a visit pretty much any time they want to and for as long as they need to. Just because they cannot come back to Forks, does not mean they they cannot have frequent company. Charlie can take a leave from work if he needs to and if there is a concern about money I’m sure Bella can help with that. Charlie better not be too proud to take help if he needs to so he can see his family.
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Yay! Seth imprinted!!

thanks for the warning I just went to the end of the chapter without reading

Love this story :) I hope there will be a sequel but this ending is GREAT!! I was a little disappointed that Jake and Nessie didn't have their own little endig though. On the other hand, great job! I can never say it enough I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! :)

for someone who had such traditional views on sex, especially with him and bella, why did edward consent to an overnight visit knowing how his daughter felt about jacob and sex.  I would think that knowing about the ideas behind imprinting (jacob can't really deny Nessie anything she wants), Edward would us that as a precaution and deny the request.

“Don't push me, Shaggy," That is bloody brilliant by the way!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love Rosalie.  <3

The chapters get better and better! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  I really appreciate that.

Sweet. :)