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Reviewer: raineyscene (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
Hello!
So I am from california visiting Amsterdam for the first time and I ended up spending my time in the hotel reading your story. I absolutely loved it and sadley it has been years since it has been updated. I NEED IT. I know you probably have a crazy life an a now 5 or 6 year old but please continue. You are so good at what you do! All I am asking is for one chapter (preferable a long one ;)) just ending the story. Give us a summary of what happened lol. This story will be on my mind during the rest of my your through Europe. Thank you. (That was singer not sarcastic lol) really. Thankyou for this, it was fantastic ;)
Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
needed more of what their relationship was... is he her boss, the cop next door... I thought it was set in Roman times... guess I'll wait and see.
Reviewer: aerochick (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
I absolutely love this story, I'm so torn over who I want Bella to be with and would love to see how the story progresses. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
please tell me your still writing and you havent dropped this fan fiction..i really like this story please continue
Reviewer: daddysgrl628 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
So I just want to let you know that I'm soooooo hooked. I've always been team B/E, but I've got to say that I really think that at this point I can't think of Bella being with anyone other than Jasper. I really think their purely sexual relationship should be given the chance to evolve into something more. I definitely feel bad for Alice, but at the same time I think that her and Jasper have had their time and they both need to move on. I really hope you change your mind and make this a BELLAXJASPER story. Sorry...just wishful thinking. Once again, AMAZING STORY! I hope you update soon :)
Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
i really like this story more please! and soon!
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Wow! Still feel bad for Alice. And, yeah, Bella is totally a slut. But I love her and Jasper...
Reviewer: carebear309 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Is it wrong of me to want Bella and Jasper to stay together? They are just too hot together.
I am usually a fan of the normal pairings but I just love this Bella and Jasper. However, where would that leave Alice and Edward then?
I can't believe Alice is OK with his crap. He really doesn't deserve her. How can he tell her he loves her and then go screw other women?
Looking forward to the next update :)
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Bella and Jasper are lots of fun!
I am a little worried for her feelings about Jasper. I think she is more involved than she claims to be.
I hope she starts hanging out with Edward soon. She might be able to see that she can find someone that won't use her and bruise her feelings.
Lovin the story. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
*dances around happily*
An update in my FAVE story! woo hoo! i sense a little romance in the works. Text sex is fun, hope some of that shows up hehehe. This story is the single reason that I love Jasper and Bella more than J/A and B/E now!
Please update soon. I love this so so so so much!
*dances some more*
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Nice chapter. I guess you're forgiven for not posting for a while ;)
Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
I think deep down Jasper is digging Bella. They have better chemistry then he does with Alice. Also for someone who is a manwhore, he is mainly only poking Bella and not anyone else. That must explain something. Excellent chapter.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Loved it, as usual! I find myself firmly on Team Jasper for this story, which means I say down with Alice and Edward. I really want them to develop a relationship from this arrangement. Whatever happens, I will definitely enjoy the ride!
Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
that should have said I heart BxJ :) I guess though if I close my eyes and really concentrate I could hear them too.... ha ha
Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Loved it! I love the late night texts :) I really wanted to tie up Alice and hide her away..:) I hear JxB 2gether :)
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Good cover up Rose.
I like where this is going. It's a lil more original.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Ride (vjgm)
Oh man, this is going to get messy! Bring it on.....
Reviewer: melissapdo (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
I'm loving this story. Jasper and Bella together is HOT!! I'm ready for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you!! And it is on the way, you should see it up very soon. I'm very sorry about the delay. Real life and writers block have conspired against me, but I finally came out victorious! lol
Reviewer: carebear309 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
Hot! Is it wrong that I want them to stay together and I don't want Jasper to end up with Alice?
Author's Response: Not wrong at all! I kind of like them, too. But I assure you, Edward will be worth the wait!
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Bet
cry! CRY! boo hoo boo hoo
update please update....you havent forgotten us have you? :(
Author's Response: I'M SORRY!! I have not forgotten! I've been travelling the Eastern US and throwing way-too-expensive 1st Birthday parties and this and that and writers block on top of it!! The next chapter has been submitted. You should see it very soon!
Reviewer: veronicamodd (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
This story is amazing I can't wait for more! Don't get me wrong I am team Edward all the way but I crave Jasper and Bella pairings!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! And you and me, both. I'm all about Edward, but I like a little Jasper on the side.
Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
LOVE IT!! I am so loving Jasper & Bella and their naughty moments!!
Author's Response: Oh, I certainly am, too! Thank you!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
Amazingly hot!!! I'm loving the passion they have together. I definitely hope it continues and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's fun to write a hate-filled rather than love-fueled passion. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
Whew... that was HOT!!! I need to take a cold shower!
Jazz is really holding his own sex godness in this story.
They are both right though, the situation is all kinds of fucked up.
Poor Alice and her intuitions! (I am not sure if she can foretell the future in this one). It takes a confident, forgiving, understanding, loving, and really patient person to put up with Jazz's fucktardedness!
I hope Edward didn't hear them... cuz of course I want them to be together at the end of this!
Author's Response: Ha! Glad you liked it! She more gets impressions, than visions. She is sort of all-knowing when it comes to Jasper. And yeah, she might even be borderline pathetic in her patience with him, but all will work out in the end. And I have to make the sex with Bella & Edward even better than Bella and Jasper... so just you wait... lol!
Reviewer: bbygoose (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Agreement
I <3 jasper/bella smut.
Author's Response: You've picked a good place to be, then! :)
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