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Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

YOUR GREAT ! ITS GREAT !

ps please write tons more on your other work too!!!!!! sorry so greedy but i love your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cindy

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh HOT DAMN =D

That was incredibly sexy.

You have no idea.

I'm jealous.

Love it!!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Rug burn huh?

Maybe they need to make it to the bedroom next time....

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Whew! Very hot!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOVE IT LOVE IT!

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

awesome. I love that song and you did it to a T. I'd like to see more.

Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was hot!

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol, I really liked this a lot. It definitely put a smile on my face. The only part I was a bit hesitant about was how long it took Edward to recognize Bella, especially if it was his first love. I think it would have been great if he had suspected it was her in the bar and then followed her out to confirm it. Does that make sense?

Anyway, great job. As I said, big smile (for both the first part and the last).

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

love love love this song and i am so glad you did a great one shot i have a great recommendation your ex lover is deas by stars and one more night (your ex lover remains dead) by stars or or another great one would be umm taylor swift our song, tim mcgraw, or bless the broken road by rascal flatts i worte a fic on FF inspired by tit but not a songfic i really like this im glad you did this lol im rambling cause im excited you will do more lol

Author's Response:
It's funny you should mention Our Song by Taylor Swift, I want to do a one shot on Love Story all human and a vamp one shot with Fearless. Tim McGraw's Suspicions was another one I was thinking about.

E

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

:):):):):) I LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

That is one hell of an one-shot! Freakin' hot...

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot. Great characters and story. Can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

SO SWEET AND SO HOT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great! I loved Edward telling Lauren off and Bella trashing Jacob's truck.

I'm looking forward to the others!

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