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Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

really fun story:)

Reviewer: prattster666 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

All I wanna do by heart..............that is one of my fave alltime songs!!!

Cat x

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow this was amazing loved it
love you as an author and can't wait to read more from you
again loved this one shot
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

=]

Reviewer: RiceReader (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was fun. I would like to know how Bella managed to grin with a straight face though.

Reviewer: Luvrgrl0520 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think you should do one with Miranda Lamberts "White Liar"

Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

you should write a one shot for jason mraz's "butterfly" it would be real good



Author's Response:

I haven't heard that song yet. I'll check it out. Thank you

 

erica

Reviewer: sweetmahogany (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic! Very sensual and hawt. Great job!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was an interesting twist you put on it. It was cute. Good job hon

Reviewer: Sharada (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was brilliant and absolutely hilarious (the beginning).

Have you considered using "That Don't Impress Me Much" by Shania Twain?



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha the moment I read the title I can see the girls all in a booth rating each of the guys.  Then when it comes to Jasper, Emmett and Edward they are stunned speechless.

I'll look into it.

Thanks

e

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

this was a lot of fun!

and as for song suggestions- i cant make you love me (sung by both bonnie raitt and george michael- has such potential!!

Reviewer: Vero (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my I dthink I need a drink after reading this. Wow. Loved it.

Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

before he cheats so it not edward who cheats bella is not a he so it jake basiclly

Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

omg.amazing.it was so damn funny and romantic i love it!!

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think you should turn this into a ful fledged multi-chapter story, and have Bella tell Billy, Charlie and Sam about what Jacob did; not only that but tell Charlie the truth about Lauren and that she (meaning Bella) is back together with Edward and will be staying that way.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think you should turn this into a ful fledged multi-chapter story, and have Bella tell Billy, Charlie and Sam about what Jacob did; not only that but tell Charlie the truth about Lauren and that she (meaning Bella) is back together with Edward and will be staying that way.

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was a really good one-shot. What can Edward do with his tongue???!!!! (lol) Although i'm curious, i bet its something magical. You rocked this one-shot by using Carrie Underwood's song. I can't wait for updates on your other stories.

Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

wait, so he's loved her forever, but doesn't recognize her after a couple of years when seeing her in the parking lot. Over all good story, but the whole love thing felt  a little contrived, lust would be more accurate than "you have my heart" after a quick high school fling.

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

/wolf whistle

Reviewer: TwiDi (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Lovely work, sweets :)

I absolutely loved it ;)

Cheers!

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

this was awesome!!!i absolutley LOVE it!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey total cool chap ive never read a song fic before and this way really good =]

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

that was sooo hott! cant wait for more of these one shots either!!!

dont forget about the others though!! i miss womanizer and hitchhiker!!!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

i wanna find out what he can do with his tongue! i think u should do another story just to continue this =P loved it! love feisty bella x

Reviewer: SaraiR88 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

love it!!

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