Hey this is brilliant! Great writing, you really captured how I imagined Edward felt in that scene! Thank you for writing it, I'll look out for any of your other stuff! x

This was so very enjoyable.  You did Edward's POV so beautifully.  I was so moved by his intensity towards her.  His love is all encompassing.  I loved this so very much.  It was winderful.  SImply intoxicating. 

Oh, wow.

 

Seriously! Those two words, echoing in my head over and over. I'm totally blown away by this.

I'd been toying with the idea of writing this EPOV chapter for a while, because I hadn't found one to my liking. You completely took care of that for me. I'm glad it was you. You write the best, truest Edward a girl could ask for.

 

I'm in awe, and completely in love.  Thank you for writing this and for sharing it.

I like the idea that Embry was crushing on Bella. 

"And yes, I did want to do that part...with my teeth...one button at a time..."  Best line - rawr!

It was totally fun to read a happy Edward after all the Dark Side of the Moon angst.  (I'm still behind... I will catch up!!!)

Many thanks to JAustenlover for requesting this fic and for letting you share it.  You write EPOV so brilliantly, I love reading it!

Blondie...you are absolutely incredible! Your stories always give me chills! I really don't know what we did to deserve you, but I am so so grateful! This chapter had me in tears by the end. You captured this scene so perfectly that it didn't even feel like a departure from the actual novel. That was Edward to the T! And I cosign with the reviwer who had a problem with Bella scoffing at his marriage propsal and mocking him for wanting to preserve their virtue. Reading this from Edward's POV furthered my irriration with her and the confusion I had during the whole series....what was it that was so special about Bella?! Nothing about her seemed so remarkable to me, and I kept trying to understand it. Still haven't succeeded at that. Lol.

But thank you again for a wonderful story and for once again stirring my inner romantic. I wish more GUYS would read Twilight and take some damn notes. This is what we want!!! ;)

Catholic School Girl Edward? Yep, that's him. You'd thin after being around humans for so long, he'd figure out the difference between the "I love you" face and the "I want to jump your bones" face.

And the proposal, hands down, is my favorite part of the entire series. I'm such a hopeless romantic and I can't tell you how worn down my Eclipse copy is. It practically lands every time to Chapter 20 I've read it so much. ^^

Beautiful, romantic work as always.

P.S. - Still waiting on Whirlwind. ;)

cuuuuute :D very well written, i really liked it!!

I think you captured this chapter in Eclipse perfectly!  Which means that I both loved and hated this story.  Not because of you, my dear; you gave voice to what I think Edward was really thinking and feeling and I am exremely thankful to have his feelings shared.

This was my least favorite chapter in the whole book (possibly the whole series).  My heart just broke for Edward every single time Bella scoffed at or diminished his reasons for wanting to marry her.  How could she not see that her reactions had hurt him so deeply?  She had reduced him down to making 'deals' just so he could have her as his wife.  Negotiations....how romantic.  She asked for understanding but then provided none in return.  This chapter made me hate Bella because I realized that she was selfish and undeserving.  Through the rest of the series all I heard was her whining and him trying to love her however she would let him.  I still don't think she deserves him....

Sorry...rant over now!  Excellent job and thanks for writing this story!

"And yes, I did want to do that part...with my teeth...one button at a time..."

Hehehe...I loved that line!  Blondie...you are seriously awesome.  I only have 3 favorite authors...and you are one of them.  And when I saw that you were doing this chapter from EPOV...I was thrilled.  This was one of my very favorite moments from the entire series...and to see it thru his eyes was simply wonderful!  I could just smack Bella for being so sulky about the whole marriage thing.  I mean, hello...it's Edward freakin Cullen asking you to marry him?? Who says no to that?

But seriously, I've already told all my Twilight obsessed buddies about DSOM and this story too now.  We all think you are GREAT! :)  Can't wait to read that next chapter of DSOM as well! :o)

Oh my gosh!!  I completely agree about the typo!  I read that and read that over and over in the book and it never made any sense.  Im glad that Im not the only one who thought that it was missed!  (the coveting) 

 

I love the stories you write, I am looking forward to meeting you at Twicon and maybe getting some writing tips for fanfics!

 

Kim

oh, Blondie... Is there any words to describe this? Can't find any right now, except PERFECT...

I promise your Edward is as good or better than SM's and the proposal as I expected brought me to tears. It was wonderful, you are wonderful, and I am so grateful for yet another of your gifts.

Thank you

This was awesome! I loved seeing this scene from Edwards POV. Its one that I've always been interested in reading even before I heard about Midnight Sun or had found this site. Loved it and you did a brilliant job :)