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Reviewer: GaylenEagle (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
awesome AU storyline!
Reviewer: Kiwi-as-bro (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
I like it :D
Your point of view is intresting... in a good way. I like the way The change in the points of view flows... if you know what i mean.
I also like the way you portrayed Mike. Its not often hes written as a good guy and not just an annoyingly persistant guy who can't take a hint.
Also you have a good balance between Bella still being in love with Edward and Bella being able to possibly move on... If that makes sense :D
Can't wait for the next one :D :D
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great start to your story. I hope you keep it up and update. Thanks for sharing with us despite your busy schedule.
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