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Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4: Souls that Balance Joy and Pain
So far I'm really liking your story! I re-read all of it just now, to make sure that I really didn't miss your saying where it takes place. It has me puzzled, but I'm thinking you're purposely keeping it a mystery for now? ("Docklands" threw me for a bit - that's in London, but Edward had just flown out of London so he couldn't be staying in a hotel there - ?!) But I'm not puzzled at all about who Bella and Edward's dream visitors are - mmmm! I like both your Bella POV and your Edward POV. Looking forward to reading more soon!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 4: Souls that Balance Joy and Pain
I'm dying for these two to find each other. It's going to be spectacular, isn't it? WOO-HOO!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Souls that Balance Joy and Pain
Looks like Edward is in for a surprise. When he gets together with Jasper and Alice. His brown eyed seductress is within the inner circle. Looking forward to both of their reactions when they meet face to face recognizing each other as the visitor in their dreams. Should be very entertaining. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Souls that Balance Joy and Pain
Looks like Edward is in for a surprise. When he gets together with Jasper and Alice. His brown eyed seductress is within the inner circle. Looking forward to both of their reactions when they meet face to face recognizing each other as the visitor in their dreams. Should be very entertaining. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Sleep Hath Its Own World
Dreaming of Edward nice perception on her part. Has a gift of foresight. Waiting patiently for the big meeting between Bella and Edward. Also looking forward to Edward's hands meeting Mike's face and other bodily parts. (stomach, kidney punches, etc... normal boxing rules.) Please continue with the story. Anxiously waiting for the continuance of the story.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Sleep Hath Its Own World
its an awefully compeling story
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Prologue - A Road Less Travelled
interesting an at the end... Looking forward to chap 2-4 tonight. I may not be able to review. I need to turn out the light
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Sleep Hath Its Own World
i like it can't wait to meet Jaspers friend from London LOL
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 2: Fate, out of the deep sea
The obvious is Edward from your description. In Ireland.
Enjoyed the chapter. would lke to continue to read this story. Especially after being stalked and frightened.
Update when you can
Reviewer: WouldYouLookAtThat (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Fate, out of the deep sea
Is this like a "Bella and Edward through the ages" type deal? Tristan and Isolde, right? But they weren't Irish, were they? I forget...
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Prologue - A Road Less Travelled
This definitely looks interesting. I'll be watching for new chapters!
Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Prologue - A Road Less Travelled
I'm enjoying this story so far. I'm intrigued ti find out who has been abusing Bella although I gather from your A/N at the end it must be Mike. I'm interested to see how this works out. I think you've drawn a good Alice. She's not as annoying as other Alices and is so caring. Thanks.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Prologue - A Road Less Travelled
Interesting start I'm looking forward to seeing how this story takes shape and who is nit treating her so well. Can't wait for the nest update.
Author's Response: Thank-you so much for the review!
I've just uploaded the next THREE, yes, three! chapters for beta-ing, so fingers crossed they'll be up soon to answer your question ;)
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