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Reviews For Lucky

Reviewer: Smishli (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Lucky

I love this story. It somehow makes all the ridiculousness that is Breaking Dawn acceptable, no easy feat. Plus, you do it with such beautiful prose! (And your A/N? SO TRUE.)

My favorite line: "That is incorrect. This is our first house to destroy." Brilliant!

Thanks for a great read!

Reviewer: MsKathy (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Lucky

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Lucky

This is the first fic that has any demon spawn (as a main character) that I've ever read the full story. I'm just confused by the ending. Was the epilogue a dream? Or was the full story a dream? *confused face* oh well. Thank smellyia's twitter for this review!

Reviewer: bluegrassmoonbeams (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Lucky

LMAO. I LOVE that Epilogue. So Sarcastically true!!! Breaking Dawn didn't make much sense to me either! LOL

Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Lucky

Impressive prose. The best parts (the ones that made me burst out laughing so loud that I nearly had people check in on me) had to be, in no particular order:

-"romantic in a Lestat kind of way"

-E&R and their 15 houses "literally crumbled to the ground" and "crawling out of the rubble"

-the diamonds and child prostitute bit. That was hi-lar-i-ous.

Love the epilogue that really hacks at the 4th wall.

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:20 PM · On: Lucky

OMG!!! I was merely enjoying this little venture until I got to the epilogue - now I am clutching my sides trying to breathe!! LOVED IT!!

Reviewer: PeaceLoveTwilight (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 02:28 PM · On: Lucky

Hey! I have a banner for you at peacelovetwilightblog.blogspot.com. And btw, i was the one who nominated you in the twilight awards ;]
heres your banner.
the perm link is http://fotos.fotoflexer.com/35fe6a22d8c8d0ab28f5704562d87256.gif.
enjoy!

Author's Response: You are intensely amazing. Thank you so much for promoting this story and for the banner. Love on you!!

Reviewer: effection (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Lucky

Congratulations! This story has been nominated in "The Breaking Dawn Round" of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:

Best Post-BD
http://twilightawards.this-paradise.com

Reviewer: PeaceLoveTwilight (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 04:12 PM · On: Lucky

Hey, Max!
Um, so if you havent checked out peacelovetwilightblog.blogspot.com for the winner of the contest, you deff should. You're in for a surprise=]
AND leave commentsss pleaseee!
You can, y'know. Not just members of blogspot. FYI.
;]
Ttyl babe!
Anna.

Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 01:46 PM · On: Lucky

Ok.
That was fantastic. It was beautiful, it was missing from the original text. I think I'll burn the original text and just print out the vignettes and put them in its place.
I loved the end too. You're preaching to the choir, lady.

Thank you for redeeming something so heartbreakingly ridiculous.

Author's Response: What a compliment! Thank you!! If I ever decide to read "BD" again, I'm definitely going to keep these in mind to keep me going. I appreciate you hard.

Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 07:24 PM · On: Lucky

HAHAHAHAAAAA. That last part about made my life.
I liked this one, it was really good! You really captured the characters well. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! It was actually difficult keeping everyone in character when they changed so much in "BD" ... :(

Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:31 PM · On: Lucky

W.O.W. Can't believe I put off reading this...it was fantastic! I loved your little vignettes. It added so much depth and emotion to a book that frankly annoyed the hell out of me. Your writing is wonderful - hope to see a lot more from you.
The last bit was hilarious, but I truly loved and was touched by the rest.

Author's Response: It hadrcore annoyed me too. I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: liv-elea (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Lucky

This was different, but very, very good.
Your style of writing is very different from Stephenie Meyer's, so the first few sentences of your fic were strange to read, but you write very well, so I quickly got used to it.
You added a lot of depth to many aspects of BD- the baby issue, the mind reading issue- and it was very nice to see Edward and Nessie have an actual connection. Ohh, and Edward buying Bella a house to destroy- that was just so typically him and so very cute! Great idea!
I'm very much looking forward to reading everything Twilight related you might decide to publish! For me, you seem like a very promising writer.

Author's Response: I was actually worried about posting this because my writing style's so different, but I was hoping it would speak for itself. I'm really glad it ended up working for you and that it helped out round out "BD" - that's what I wanted. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Lucky

My spell check’s first correction option for Reneesme is “rename.” Ha.
hahahahahahaha. that just seriously made my day... I wonder if SM's spell check gave her that... she should have taken the hint... of all the names in the world...
Nice job, well written. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I think Renesme was meant to be funny, but after the first hundred times reading it, the humor was pummeled away, leaving a bloody mess of a name. So sad.

Reviewer: biteme (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 11:10 AM · On: Lucky

LOL i like the epilogue - some things were a leetle crazy - but still the book was AMAZING

Author's Response: Only SM could have made that plot work at all. :):)

Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 11:06 AM · On: Lucky

He he. I love the commentary at the end, with the "I'd never want to read that". I fit perfectly with the way I feel about the book.
Amazing, how you've captured the characters and their hesitation so perfectly. Wonderful, sweet, and funy all in one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Sweet and funny was just what I was going for.

Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Lucky

A wonderful collection of scenes from everyday life. More please! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to make your encouragement inspire me. ;)

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