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Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2011 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sexy and cute! Yum..
Reviewer: twilighter023 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow oh wow that was really good!!!
Reviewer: sillyinfatuation (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
YOU. MY. DEAR. ARE. FUCKING. AMAZING. this is brilliant. and, yeah, VERYYYYYY hot. So, one question though, are you ever going to write another story because I read this on fanfiction.com first, then came here and found it again and yeah. You're an amazing author and I pretty much want you to write more....so yeah. haha
GET TO IT. :]
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful comments! Unfortunately, I've never been able to come up with any other plot ideas or subjects to write about. So it doesn't look as though I'll be posting anything else anytime soon.
Reviewer: eddiescherry (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sweet mama jama, Cappy...can you write a lemon or what? Holy Jeebus, that was awesome.
Author's Response: Aww, EC- you're making me blush!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great one-shot - I love it when Bella lets go of her inhibitions. And dirty-talking Edward is totally hot! Thanks for sharing your story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome story! It's fantastic to see Bella so uninhibited, so free and willing. Not to mention that was just plain HOT! I loved Edward remarking to himself that he could never be a girl and have boobs because they would be like built-in toys! Ha! So like a guy to think! I did a breast cancer walk in 2007 and one of the guys walking wore a bra and had water balloons to fill the bra out. He was so funny because every single time we would walk by a window (a shop window, house, car, you name it) he would slow down and check himself out. Sometimes giving a fake boob a squeeze. he was enjoying himself way too much! That's what Edward's line immediately made me think of! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Of course, I could not be a guy because I would play with myself all the time. Isn't a dick pretty much a built-in toy?!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
HOT DAMN! Bella & Edward dir
Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
I feel very dirty after reading that. Haha.
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow!! that was hott.. you did an awesome job..
Reviewer: Shante17 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was really erotic....loved the way Bella teased and commanded Edward...wish I had one to come home to and fulfill my sexual demands and fantasies....damn...I'm saving this story as a playout for when I get my Edward...hell yes you best believe he will be doing those things and my every command!!!
Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW now that was HOT! gotta love the drunk sexin! I think that's why my hubby likes to keep our house stock up with wine...LOL I loved this line - "Careful there, Sexy Eddie. I'm not going for any butt sex tonight!" You need to keep writing - Excellent job!
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think a series is definitely in order!
Reviewer: edwarddazzlesme17 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was HOT.
bella drunk.. hmm.
now THAT is something i wanna see more of. lol
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Damn Cappy! You've been holding out on us! Write another one!! But next time, I think Edward should be giving oral... :D BTW - Totes loved it. You really should keep writing. Maybe a series???
Author's Response: A series may be being considered now that they'll have a bottle ready at the house ;-)
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
Steamy! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was a pleasure to read ;-) Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Umm, yelllooo, why doesn't this happen to ME when I drink Goldshlager, my liquor of choice?! Dammnnn this was good. Favorite line: "God, I could never be a girl. I would do nothing but play with my boobs all day- they were like built-in toys!" HAHAHA. Oh Edward. You saucy dog. I loooved this one!! :) Great job. Off to take a cold shower...
Author's Response: I am immature enough to admit that I could never be a guy, because I would just play with myself all day. Then again, I guess that's normal for dudes. Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: katydid2363 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
so gutterly perfect! so i think i need some Goldschlager for my house! that was hot!
Author's Response: Well my mind rarely leaves the gutter, so...Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
AHHH I LOVES ME SOME SMUTTY GOODNESS YOU DONE GOOD, BB. YA DONE GOOOOOOD.
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful beta job (b-job, hee hee). This was a scary experience for me, and you made it much more comfortable than it might have been ;-)
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: icecoldhamster (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
...I'm lost for words... ...You made me speachless... ...OMFG!!! THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' HOT!!!! You write so well! That was... That was just amazing! I love dialouge in these stories (hehe) and yours was... cold shower worthy!!! Great Job! -Katie
Author's Response: Ha, you're one to talk! I really enjoyed the piece you wrote- that was good stuff! Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
does goldschlager do that to everyone? nicely done! may I suggest you write up GNO's from Alice & Jasper and Emmet & Rosalie as well?
Author's Response: Um, I can speak only for myself on the goldschlager issue. I have a low tolerance for alcohol ;-)
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was great...so were you at my house last week or what?!?!? This sounds all to familiar!!
Author's Response: Thank you...and I hope you had fun last week ;-)
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