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Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

This chapter was so sweet! I expected Bella to say that "Edward" was her favorite word, but I guess she wouldn't say that to him!

Pleae update soon!



Author's Response:

She picked obsidian, which I guess, counteracts the gold, but it is her subconciously noticing that his eyes have been both colors. LOL... if that makes any sense.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13

Very cute chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 13

oh please tell me she will ask him to be her first kiss!! or at least he will offer, i know that he so wont offer, bt i can dream lol. she is more likely to ask tho coz she has nothing to lose =] im so excited =D x



Author's Response:

I am glad you are so excited!! Thanks for reviewing, and stick around to see if that kiss happens. ;)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great stuff! Just the image of Edward doing his daily rounds with that goofy grin on his face is amusement aplenty :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you are enjoying it. ;) I appreciate you taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 13

*squeee happiness is so good! love love love!!!



Author's Response:

Your review made me laugh. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 6

Uh oh I hope he is not in to much trouble.

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow can't wait to see how this affects everything

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

so sweet... at least he is getting to know her.  thats a good place to start... before he realizes that he can't live with out her and has no choice to change her! anyway good job so far!



Author's Response:

A good place to start? LOL... but not enough. haha. Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love it!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 2

Very well written!

Author's Response:

Why thank you! Also, if I had not said it before, I want to give you a BIG thanks for reviewing back chapters!! That means a lot to me. ;)

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm so glad he went back to see Bella, glad he listened to Carlisle.  I loved the questions and answers and can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're glad. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 13

it's so sweet!! I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you are liking it! :)

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

Such a sweet and yet bittersweet story.  Really liking it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you like it. I really enjoy the bittersweet... makes the sweet all the more sweeter. (gah. I am such a dork. My apologies. lol)

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

A very good chapter. I like your Edward, a lot actually, he seems more real than SM's still remaining gorgeous and caring. And a very good insight into Carlisle's soul!

I wonder if  you believe in happy endings. LOL



Author's Response:

I am a huge believer in happy endings! Just sometimes it takes a while to get there. LOL. Thanks for your review! I am so glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 13

Aaah, with the bitter comes the sweet! :)  I love when he dazzles her and she gets all flustered and answers his questions. :)  

I think Renee is a lost cause, but I'm hoping Charlie comes around. I really think he's just...Charlie, and overwhelmed by losing her. (my dad is that way...gets all cranky and obnoxious and withdrawn when someone he loves is sick! poor dude.)  Having Charlie would help her a LOT - and it would help Charlie, too, in the long run. C'mon, Charlie!  Look, Edward is making great strides, you can too! :)

SO....I'm wondering if you're gonna change Bella? and if so, how? I'm thinking...maybe some huge dramatic scene where she's 1 inch from death and Edward screams "Carlisle, SAVE HER!!!"  Somethin' like that??? (clearly, I am not the most patient of readers!! haha)  I just want her to be OK, and for Edward to get to keep her. :)

Thanks for the zippy updates!!! :)



Author's Response:

"Carlisle, SAVE HER!!!" LOL. Sounds good, but you will just have to wait and see! I am going to go into more detail about the parents as the chapters go on, so just stick around.

 

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 13

FAVE LINE: He puts both hands on my shoulders suddenly before pulling me into a tight hug, and I don't hesitate to throw my arms around Carlisle, my father.           Lets see...Imnoassholelikemyfatherlisle. Yep, that covers it.

I can't believe I've read this chapter 4 times and never got the gold/brown thing...he says like your eyes=shit, gold is the color of HIS eyes.  I'm an idiot.

Loved it bb....really yummy!



Author's Response:

You are not an idiot. ;) No idiot could come up with Imnoassholelikemyfatherlisle or kickasper (my favorite)

Love ya!!

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh wow.  I needed the happiness after the angst of last chapter and the beginning of this one.  Now, if only Edward would start voicing those thoughts of his aloud...Bella would be so much happier...I would be so much happier!



Author's Response:

You would be so much happier? LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13

Fantastic!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I like that adjective. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 13

Best chapter yet!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 13

This definitely hits the spot!  They need to do more talking, don't you think??



Author's Response:

Well, as a reader pointed out to me before. In this story all they can rely on is talking to one another. There isn't going to be a van crashing into her or guys trying to hurt her... Edward is not going to save her in some big inhuman way, so they have to depend on the conversations to grow closer.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 12

I make it as far as the stairwell before my body collapses beneath me as the first wave of tearless sobs pulse through my body.

this one kills me every stinking time...  *sigh*



Author's Response:

You know me... I enjoy tugging on those heartstrings. ;)

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Very sweet!

She kinda says his name a little too much though.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks... now, you have totally made me re-read the chapter and I hear it that way too. Let's just say that they are talking to each other, but at the same time, not looking at each other, so it's like.

"SpyderMnky26?"

"Yes"

"Thanks for your review."

"Your welcome, PerfectlyPersuasive."

LOL... sorry that was ridonkulous!

Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

FAVE LINE: Esme walks toward me and engulfs me in her arms, hugging me fiercely. I hold onto her just as tightly.  I know this is hard, but it will be okay, Edward. I love you.   Esme is the bomb.  I so love her....

OK.  Emoward in Scrubs owns me...I jsut want to give him my own mom hug...



Author's Response:

mom hug? Or, cougar hug?

Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 13

I loved that happiness with my angst!  Yay!  Finally!  I feel like I've been waiting for that forever!  I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see the development!



Author's Response:

Waiting for the happiness forever? Oh no, have I been killing y'all with my angsty emoward? LOL. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: bridenbrigray (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, this is sweet! LOVE it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Love is such a fab word!! :)

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