Bella's reaction is great. It's just so Bella. loved this chapter. great work.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate your review! :)

Well I finished reading what was posted now I have to wait for the updates. :0) Great story so far. Can't wait to find out more about Bella, where's her family? I really like this story being in Edwards POV. Great job! you asked if anyone checks out the music... I do. I have found so much great music by checking out songs that authors have listed as insperation. It adds a whole different level of fun to the whole fan fic experience. :0)

Author's Response:

Ah, her family...will go into the more later. As far as music goes, I hope you like Indie rock. :)

Love it! There's still one more chapter already posted so I'm going to go read it now. :0)

Author's Response:

do it, do it. Thanks for coming by the forums! :)

This is so good. I think Edward desperately wants to be happy and I want him to be happy too. :0) Hope he meets Bella in the next chapter. Wonder what he'll think of her?

I really like this so far. I am looking forward to seeing how this develops, and I would so love to hear more of Carlisle's thoughts, haha! Oh, and Alice when Edward gets home. Oh dear, I need to fall in love soon, haha.

pity, such short time ..

how aweful is it that I can't wait till she is on her deathbed?

This is definitely an interesting twist to the whole Edward/Bella romance.  I like that Edward's a doctor and happy that despite her condition, Bella chooses to be happy.  I look forward to how you will develop her staying and being happy and how Edward will control his thrist!  It'll be interesting how their relationship develops and I hope he does change her at the end.  :-)  Everyone loves a happy ending, right?  And please DO NOT portray Jacob as a crappy ex-boyfriend.  I'm so sick of that scenerio where he cheated on her or abused her physically, etc.  If you're going to have in the story, can he just please be a great best friend?  Thanks!

Author's Response:

No, no Jacob at all, actually. Don't worry that is not going to happen.

is this going to be a long story? we just dont seem to be getting anywhere fast. i like it a lot, i was just wondering.

Author's Response:

Umm...about 20 to 25 chapters. Not super long, no. :)

gee they've only got two months to get Edward to stop seeing himself as a monster long enough to "help" Bella... that might not be enough time ;)

It was great the way both their emotions were running all over the map there - I can imagine Carlisle is confused as hell right now.

this is definitely the best chapter yet.  Need next chapter soon!

I am wondering if Edward or Carlisle will change Bella...but I guess you will let us know if that's going to happen at some point....

Author's Response:

All will be revealed. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Well, I have to say that you write quite well. Your style certainly has the readers feeling very, very sympathetic for the characters.

Interesting idea, this. Edward meeting Bella while she's dying... I wonder where you will go with this. I'm hoping that the ending has a Vamp Bella rather than a dead Bella, though. ;)

As for this chapter, hmm. My favorite part was this:

"Her reactions and emotions have been all over the place, evading me, destroying my preconceived notion of the teenage human girl. She laughed, cried and then accepted her sentence in under an hour."

You can really tell that Edward is confused and bewildered just from those two lines.

I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your well thought out review! :) I liked that line as well. Edward, especially working in the hospital, has gotten quite bitter to humans and their thoughts and feelings. Bella is throwing him for a loop. I'm glad you like it, and I hope you will keep reading.