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Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Wow charlie is so whipped by all the women in his life. I'm glad Edward didn't get off that easy for getting attached with Bella. cant wait to see what happens between Leah and Bella
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
I think Leah should be tough but not totally bitchy towards Bella.
~ B
Reviewer: bella_look_alike (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
leah can
t be totally canon...she doesn't have any reason to hate bella...ednerd's [sorry...i just had to] isn't a vamp...so that means sam can't imprint and has freedom to choose / emily may not give him that strong a reaction.leah should be sassy, but a bit bitchy from hanging out with the pack too much :)
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
cat fight!!! haha
idk...i think leah would be a good way to get jacob off bella's ass but im not sure about her as a canon...
this was cute... aw papa charlie!!! haha i missed ellie and alice in this chapter though :(
cant wait for more!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Yay! I've missed you so much!! I love it when any of your hundred stories get updated :) Oh yeah! Totally canon Leah! That oughta be a major catfight! I'm so sorry you've been having so many health issues :( Just know that there's lots of us out here sending our love your way and hoping for a full recovery! You will recover, right? I don't know any specifics, but you're not that bad, are you? *quivering lip, misting eyes*
So are you going to just work on this story for a while? Or are you working on any others too?
Reviewer: disuez (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Good chapter. I think Leah should be different. I get sick of her being a Bella hating bitch lol
Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
I cant tell you how happy i get when a new chapter comes up and cant wait for the next one. As for Leah I love the bitchy Leah but with something different, either way i cant wait for Leah.
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Wet
holy cow that was hot. But it's a shame these two don't know each other. It seemed cheap, shallow, like a porn-plot. They were kinda acting like they did know each other, which they didn't, which kept pulling me out of it. I dunno. It's very shallow and meaningless when there's no real feelings behind it all, you know? I kept trying to get into their heads of why they're acting like that when they've only just met - so sure of themselves (I get the animal attraction thing, but...hmmm). I just thought there'd be more to the characters before they had sex. Fussy thing aren't I? I tell ya, you just can't please everyone...
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Tease
I want more! Love Ellie. Love that B has a daughter. Love that my girly parts are telling me to stop writing and to read the next chapter
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:05 PM · On: The Assessment
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW love love love that you're not pulling this along slllllllloooooooooowly! can't review too much, I've got a kiss to get to!
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:56 PM · On: The Trainer
...and my poor celibate dick hardened. - OMG! lol
Edward is so hardened. Can;t wait for his story
Reviewer: avianne (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
surprise us,.... after all each one of your characters surprised me in the best way possible,..... and your lines with ellie makes me smile and cry,... she's a really really great addition in ur story, thank you very much for sharing the story with us,....
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Great chapter. I love how Charlie is being so fatherly and wanting to kick Edward's ass, but then is fearful of Renee. Hmmm...Leah coming in sounds interesting. I think Leah should be slightly different than canon, but still be agressive.
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Thank you for the update! Love this story!!
I'd like to see Leah be a bit of a bitch, but not mean. I don't think lost would fit into the story, but I trust your judgement!
:)
Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Leah and Jacob! But Bitchy and Aggressive too!
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
OMG!!! I wonder if Leah detest Bella like she does in the book. I can't wait for more. This was an amazing chapter.
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Like Mother, Like Daughter
Ellies the best...smart kid, saw what the grown ups overlooked
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Great chapter. I prefer the non-canon Leahs but it's your story and you need the characters to fit. Can't wait to read more. Looking forward to seeing what's going to happen when Leah arrives.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
EPIC!!!
I can't wait.
I feel like that should be a pay-per-view fight :D
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Poor edward hes nothing like james
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Hey Erica
Thanks for updating, it's like a wish come true LOL! Edward's going all soft and not doing his job, naughty boy. I don't think that Charlie is terribly happy with him.
Not sure about Leah. She's not a very likeable character is she? You are in control so I'm happy to be lead wherever you are taking us.
Thanks again.
Annette
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
OOO this is going to be fun!!!
How about a bit of all, but still a softy at the end. I guess it all comes down to what her relationship with sam is like and how much anger she has pent up.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
I think Leah should be however you want her to be. Possibly a little aggresive and definitely bitchy. But other than that, it's up to you. Loved this chapter! I like that Charlie punched him anyway. Haha
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
great chapter! i cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do
Leah should be a little different than canon. Great chapter.
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