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Reviews For Training the Swan
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:31 AM · On: The Trainer

Oh my, this is going to be gooooood. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really liked your other stories, so this should be no different.

Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:06 AM · On: The Trainer

=] great idea.

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 05:44 AM · On: The Trainer

so glad you have a new story it's great so far can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 05:40 AM · On: The Trainer

*sputters* How long do you think he'll be able to hang?!

Well, that's a loaded question if I ever saw one. :D

Damn it, I love it! I'm a sucker for bad boy Edward. Even better, an Edward who can fight. Please do continue!

Reviewer: MrsCullen15 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:41 AM · On: The Trainer

This is really good!

Update soon!

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:41 AM · On: The Trainer

I love this story already! I can't wait to see Edward do the whole mobster/daddy thing. How original!

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:33 AM · On: The Trainer

Yeh another story.  I give them a week. With all the stuff going on, they'll be head over heal for each other within a week. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:33 AM · On: The Trainer

Yeh another story.  I give them a week. With all the stuff going on, they'll be head over heal for each other within a week. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:35 AM · On: The Trainer

This sounds fun!  I liked the first chapter.  looking forward to more.  Adding to my favorite so I can follow.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:12 AM · On: The Trainer

i can tell im going to love this story... brigng in some UST...and update soon please

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:58 AM · On: The Trainer

I really want to see where you take this story.  You always do a good job though, so I am excited.

Reviewer: Team Edward (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:56 AM · On: The Trainer

I likey! More please:)

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:55 AM · On: The Trainer

I like premise and seems interesting to follow.

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:54 AM · On: The Trainer

This was a great first chapter!  I loved it.  Well, the threat of death may hold him off for awhile..couple weeks tops.



Author's Response:

Hehehehe if you only knew.  Bella is not going to make it easy for him, as you will soon see.  Upcoming chapter has been submitted.  Thanks for reviewing.

E

Reviewer: Lesmere09 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:59 AM · On: The Trainer

I think i'm going to enjoy this story !

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:53 AM · On: The Trainer

wow ! cant wait you got me again!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:17 AM · On: The Trainer

can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:05 AM · On: The Trainer

I really interested to see what your going to do with this. I like it, and I don't really read these types of stories, so yeah. Good Luck. lol

Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:51 PM · On: The Trainer

i love tough edward!  can't wait to see where this goes...

Reviewer: ChanelSteph88 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:40 PM · On: The Trainer

wow!!! awesome!!! this story is so interesting, i love everything about it, especially edwards attitude! haha i just wanna keep reading! lol and i like the fact that edward works for charlie.

ohh...im giving edward 2 weeks. tops! haha

anticipating the next chapter! =]

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:40 PM · On: The Trainer

 I like this it is bound to just mess with him I give him 4 weeks before he cracks.

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:05 PM · On: The Trainer

Good beginning, looking forward to see how this will go:)

Reviewer: vampLOVERxo (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:38 PM · On: The Trainer

brilliant.

I'm hooked!

Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:30 PM · On: The Trainer

Oh! I love it!

Please update asap!!!!

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:17 PM · On: The Trainer

Awesome!!

Please update soon!!

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