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Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:05 PM · On: The Trainer
so far i love it hope to hear more of All your storys soon. thanks
Reviewer: Kaiser (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:50 AM · On: The Assessment
Well the hands off didn't last very long. Not that that's a huge surprise. Great story so far, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:20 AM · On: The Assessment
AHHHHH I LOVE ITTTTTTTT
amaaazing. i was not expecting her to crack so quickly though. but, as you said, cant blame her. :) update sooon, so favoriting this
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:14 AM · On: The Assessment
Wow i love this story so far! keep up the awesome job!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:47 AM · On: The Assessment
damn that was hot!!!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:24 AM · On: The Assessment
ha! i so cant blame bella. i wouldve done that waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay before she did.Lol. i loooove it. update soon
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:58 AM · On: The Assessment
NO I DON'T BLAME HER AT ALL.......I WAS WONDERING WHY SHE HAD HIM EXAMINE HER NAKED...............
Author's Response: Um...Edward needed to see the extent of her injuries to come up with a schedule for training. If she was too banged up he'd have to make sure her regime accomadated her. In my thoughts wearing a bra was uncomfortable for her...then again...maybe she was hoping for some action. :)
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Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:55 AM · On: The Assessment
oh, hot damn. I am going to love this.
Reviewer: rere90 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:53 AM · On: The Assessment
Is this like the movie "Enough"? If so I like it.
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:44 AM · On: The Trainer
Great concept, fantastic start.
Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:27 AM · On: The Assessment
update soon cant wait to read more
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:06 AM · On: The Assessment
awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. Bella kicking ass,cool.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:35 AM · On: The Assessment
lol Charlie is gonna kill them both and I love you for it, bravo!!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:19 AM · On: The Assessment
Since the house will be primarily setting for this story, I would like to say that it was very visually realized. I thought Ellie was adorable and has a story to tell her mom. Poor Edward is between a rock and a hard place with his desire for Bella. He has a job to do, but temptation and Bella is going to get the better of him. Can't wait.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:13 AM · On: The Assessment
So..um...where has this story been?
It's amazing =D
And of course it's by you emarroquin. It's fantastic. I think I'm going to have to favorite it AND you. Your'e an amazing author and I have thoroughly enjoyed EVERY story you've written. I'm sincerely hoping that you write more....REALLY REALLY REALLY soon.
...please?
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:13 AM · On: The Assessment
Hey cool chap i wouldnt care if my dad would kill me if edward was there lol =]
Reviewer: goflyakite (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:10 AM · On: The Assessment
OMG. SERIOUSLY?! WTF! UPDATE! and yes, ellie is adorable!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:45 AM · On: The Assessment
Oh boy, Edward's in trouble!
Hope next update will be soon:D
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:31 AM · On: The Assessment
WOW!! Way to go Bella!!!
Reviewer: Hollyhysteria (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:29 AM · On: The Assessment
Like the story
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:27 AM · On: The Assessment
Go Bella I was totaly off wwith my 4 week guess at that rate they will be married by then. I like to see Bella tuffen up.
Reviewer: mcarmen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:19 AM · On: The Assessment
great story ..... bella has balls yay.... elli is so cute..... charlie being a bad ass thats new.... edward -well come on its edward lol....
cool story line reminds me a little of enough - still can't wait what you do with the story its realy good.
wondering how are alice and jasper coming into all of this??? don't leave em out plz :)
update update update pretty plz
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:09 AM · On: The Assessment
cool really good!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:57 AM · On: The Assessment
Yep; totally get Bella's instinct on this one :-) I can't wait for the next installment
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:44 AM · On: The Trainer
I like the start of this story - please, keep going, I want to see where it's headed.
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