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Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Tease
i have no words...the hotness took them all away...
does anyone ever get tired of edward saying "fuck?" i know i don't. :)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Tease
=] Ellie is probably my favorite child character in every fan fic! Any girl who understands about secret identities because of Hannah Montana...is my kind of girl.
Ed-nerd=love.
More of this story=LOVE LOVE LOVE!!
Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Tease
o i do hope that is soon
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Tease
update soon!! Loved it.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Tease
I love this sexy thug shit! It's so Godfather, but with Edward! Of course Bella isn't going to let up. I just hope he survives!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Tease
You end this HERE?!?!?!?
Reviewer: Augustus Snodgrass (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:49 AM · On: The Assessment
I really like this so far! please come back with more soon.
Reviewer: Alissa (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:35 AM · On: The Assessment
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:59 AM · On: The Assessment
LOVE this story! Its so different than anything I've read so far. Can't wait for the training to start!
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:40 AM · On: The Assessment
Yea i was right, it didn't even last a week. Charlie's gonna kill Edward though. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if they'll be any lemons in this story. By the way i love Elizabeth's nick name, it goes with her.
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:41 PM · On: The Assessment
how come you didn't call her renesmee? i like elizabeth but i'm just curious. hopefully charlie will understand. lol
Reviewer: ellie__ox (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:46 PM · On: The Trainer
oohhhh, i loivee this stroy :)
please update soon. x
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:59 PM · On: The Assessment
Go Bella! Haha... that was unexpected, and I'm so glad she took charge, but I know Edward will get into deep shit anyway. Takes two to tango, after all. The UST in this chapter is so thick, you can cut it with a chainsaw. Really, really hot chapter!
I can't wait for the next chappie, it's really good! Please keep going.
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:34 PM · On: The Assessment
WooHoo!!!
Go Bella!
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:10 PM · On: The Assessment
2 chapters in and i already love it, this has great potential. Can't wait to see how Bella reacts after the kiss - i'm sure there will be some bumps in that road!, but hope they get at least a little lovin' in before it all kicks off.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:55 PM · On: The Assessment
This sounds like a very interesting story and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:48 PM · On: The Assessment
I like I like. Bella making the first move...can't blame her one little bit. And Ellie is the perfect nickname. She already has Edward wrapped around her little finger.
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: The Assessment
Shit this is awesome sweet....... sad......... Fucking hot and its going to hotter lol !
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:10 PM · On: The Assessment
Ellie is so beyond adorable...i loved how she grabbed Edward's leg when she first met him and then their little talk when she wanted to know if Edward would keep away the monster from her momma :) awww.
Is she even strong enough to handle it??? LMAO!
Buy HELL i cannot blame her at ALL!
I'm glad that Edward is sympathetic to her though....
LOL @ Edward thinking about getting his will in order for his impending death in less than 3 days and also about him wanting to give a call to Forks cemetary!! hahaha!
I just thought of something though....technically Charlie cannot kill Edward because it was Bella Who Jumped Edward!....That's my logic LOL.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:46 PM · On: The Trainer
It certainly has potential!
I love Edward's personality :D
He's a real hard ass! I like it :D
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:30 PM · On: The Assessment
SHE KISSED HIM???? What the heck? Shouldn't she be like recovering from James's beating her up? Can we get one of her points of view soon? I want to know what she thinks of our boy
Author's Response: I mentioned in the first chapter that she managed on her own to hide with Ellie for about 6 months. So she maybe a little lonely. Also when James caught up to her she was badly hurt as you can read from the extent of her injuries. In a way she maybe trying to erase that. But you'll see in the next chapter what caused her to act.
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Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:55 PM · On: The Assessment
Love the story so far it is cute and I like the fact that Bella has a daughter
and I like the nick name.
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:55 PM · On: The Assessment
you know...that was not a nice place to stop...and i doubt any of us blame her. :)
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:54 PM · On: The Assessment
Love the story so far it is cute and I like the fact that Bella has a daughter
and I like the nick name.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:12 PM · On: The Assessment
Oh shit! You went for it! Holy crap, no build up or anything. You went right for it. Fucking awesome! I love you for that!
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