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Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Story Time
Wow, Charlie is... scary. Seriously. One friendly arm slapping and a laugh from Bella and he lunges across the table? Is he demented? *shakes head* Scary indeed.
I'm starting to fall in love with Ellie. I just can't help but want to keep her for myself. :D
Please keep going!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:13 AM · On: The Assessment
And here I thought it would be awhile until Bella realized she liked Edward! This story is moving along nicely.
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Story Time
hmm...i like this charlie too. i'm sure he'll come to his senses when he finally realizes how great bella and edward are together, right? :) also, i'm sure alice and jasper will meet somehow, and i'm patiently waiting to see how that happens. :)
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Story Time
This story's plot is kind of similar to the movie enough, but it much better. I really can't wait to read more and i think i'm gonna check out the forum for teasers.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:44 AM · On: The Trainer
I really like this so far!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Story Time
nice that all i can say verynice...!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Story Time
I love it. and more story line...silly bella taking the money too. Can't wait to hear about Edward defending her sometime. Will they be able to stay away from eachother????? Answers please.
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Wet
I'm just glad they let some of that sexual frustration out, even though it was just fingering. I knew they wouldn't last long.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Wet
=D Yum.
I sort of love this story.
Did I put a sort of? Ignore that. Because I DEFINITELY love this story.
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Wet
Now that is seriously hot. You know how to write smut like nobody's business and Edward's dirty talking affects not just Bella... *cough*
Uh oh... next chapter someone's dropping by? Charlie or Emmett? Christ... and you haven't gotten to the meat and potatoes of this story yet!
Fucking love this story! :D
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Wet
*hums the funeral dirge* love it!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Tease
wow! things are already getting out of control and this is what? their first day together? Edward is as good as dead! :-D
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:59 PM · On: The Assessment
No, I surely cannot blame her! I am very proud of Bella indeed!
And Ellie is adorable! But now let's move on to the good stuff!
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Wet
it is so true that will power is hard to come by even when your life depends on it. oops!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Wet
Loved that.
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:18 PM · On: The Trainer
Please add to your equation fucking rainy Forks! I mean, not much to do outside...
Now, best moment of the chapter:
“Charlie, what the fuck? I don’t do chicks,”
"Yes, we all are still questioning your sexual orientation; but now is not the time."
Charlie 1 - Edward 0
Just precious! LOL
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:47 AM · On: The Trainer
That was HELLA HOT!!!! Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh*
aw man I loved how Edward was so gentle with her and telling her how beautiful she was that shit was beyond hot and steamy!
*scoff* Bella i cannot believe she told Edward he was just "good" huh??
That was so far from just "good" that shit was mind blowing LOL! *huff* well...atleast she made up for it later :P
LOL @ Emmett's Just-been-fucked radar! funny shit!
Also *groan* I so cannot blame Bella when she licked her lips and stared at Edward's WET, SLICK HOT ASS FINE BODY!!! oh man....so damn amazing.
Even better when he chuckled and smirked his smug self at her reaction lol....bitch KNOWS he's the epitome of MAN! lol
GREAT FANTASTICAL CHAP!! Cannot wait for the next one....and our upcoming visitor HAHA! OH OH indeed...esp if it's Mr Radar himself! :D
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Wet
ccccccccccold shower
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Wet
OMG! Your story is so...it makes me...oh hell, I love this shit!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Wet
ha that was great!!!! she's a little vixen but if she is so sexualy strong y would she let james get away with beating her even if it was just the once.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Wet
I totally love them together. Bella knows how to taunt Edward into doing what he knows will get him killed. He can't resist his desire for her. His mental dialogue is priceless. That scene in the exercise room in front of the mirror was really hot. I look forward to this upcoming visit.
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Wet
like the story cant wait till next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Wet
Yeah! I hope they realize that their relationship is so worth the risk!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Wet
This story get hotter by the chapter man I can't wait until she is healed and they really go at it.
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