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Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Wet
Wow, this was one hot chapter! Just damn! Can't wait to read who's coming by next chapter!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Tease
Hell no he doesn't have to know! And if he does, fuck it! Right? Right? Well, hopefully Edward can find somewhere to hide!!!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:07 AM · On: The Assessment
Def can't blame Bella for that one! I mean, Edward touching you? Come on! Even if it was to assess her injuries! Still, hott! Yeah, and Charlie is def going to kill both of them!!!
Oh, and I would have ripped him a new one too, if he'd told my daughter something different! Men!
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:51 AM · On: The Trainer
Oh, I so gonna read this story! This was a great first chapter! Love me some sexual tension!!! Going to read more now!!!
Reviewer: amandalyn (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:05 AM · On: The Trainer
As always, I love this story! I am completely hooked and cant wait for your next chapter. You are a great writer, love your stuff. Thanks for putting it out here!
-amandalyn
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Story Time
Ahh, so close and yet so far! Haha, I wonder how long she'll actually use the toy before they give in to each other. I like the fact that you put in a little star trek in there. Have you seen the movie? It's really good. For somebody who didn't like the tv series, I loved the movie! Plus, the fact that the main guy, Chris pine, is hott, doesn't hurt either!
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Story Time
Damn Charlie and his cockblocking ways! I love Charlie. He's tough and you definately don't want to mess with him. He really does care for Bella though. Will their relationship get better. Bella's story is so sad. She knows where Renee and Alice are, right? They must know everything that happened. How long will Edward be able to resist? Bella definately knows how to mess with him. Especially when telling him she needs a toy.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Wet
Bella definately knows how to play him. She has him wrapped around her finger. This chapter was seriously HOT!!! They haven't even done the deed yet, but so far its just...wow.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Tease
The sexual tension between them is just...wow. I need a cold shower after this chapter. I love Ellie she is just so adorable. I love that Bella is so confident and doesn't take crap from Edward.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:44 PM · On: The Assessment
Edward is so cute with Ellie! I feel so sad for her though. She's seen so much at such a young age. Edward's poem was cute. And I love Bella. I feel so sad about what's happened to her, but she is being one tough chick. And honestly who could resist kissing Edward in that situation. I didn't see it coming, but wow. And it seems Bella got a lecture from Charlie too.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:29 PM · On: The Trainer
This story sounds so good! I love it so far. A badass Edward is just...yum. Elizabeth sounds so cute! How long will Edward be able to resist?
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Story Time
great chapter!! i cant wait for the next update! im excited to see what else has happened between bella and james. update sooon please!! i cant wait!!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Wet
great chapter!!!!!!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Tease
great chapter again! i really like bella and edwards personalities! and ellie is adorable!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:39 PM · On: The Assessment
wow i was not expecting that so soon! great chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:22 PM · On: The Trainer
great chapter!
Reviewer: Princess Le Le (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Story Time
OMG!!!! I love this story, I am adding it to my favs right now.... I love this tough side of Bella and I love how Charlie is.... Great!!!! I can't wait for more!!! :)
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Wet
oh man, it just gets smokier and and smokier in this story. I can't wait to see what the two lust bunnies get up to next, but I have to onder just who is going to drop around. Emmett wpuld be entertaining but I am sure a visit from charlie would make for very interesting reading.
I can't wait, so I am calling it quits on this review and jumping straight into the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Story Time
oh man, great to see the banter and interaction between Charlies "boys" and charlies reaction to Edward and Bellas relationship. It's almost as good as Ellie having all the men wrapped around her little finger. But nothing tops the smoking steamy lust and affection that Edward and Bella share. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially if Bella gets a "toy" Iget the feeling that Edward would be very jelous if she doesn't share.
Can't wait please don't leave us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Wet
oh man, it just gets smokier and and smokier in this story. I can't wait to see what the two lust bunnies get up to next, but I have to onder just who is going to drop around. Emmett wpuld be entertaining but I am sure a visit from charlie would make for very interesting reading.
I can't wait, so I am calling it quits on this review and jumping straight into the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Tease
oh man, so hot and sweet. Smokin sexual tension between our favourite couple who have lusty thoughts and naughty habbits, I can't wait to see what they get up to with the mirrors.
But I also love Ellie, she brings a very sweet touch to the story, and helps to demonstrate and bring out the loving and tender side of Edward and Bellas characters.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:04 PM · On: The Assessment
smokin, glad to see that Edward seems to have a soft spot for Ellie, I am sure it will make for many sweet and touching moments between the two of them, but also between all three of them.
I may think they are rushing it a bit, but I still can't blame Bella for kissing him, I am sure that I would have jumped him by now as well.
Can't wait to see what happens next, so once again a short review and straight on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:53 PM · On: The Trainer
love it love it love it, so much potential, and oh so very entertaining. I just love Edwards opinion on Mike, and his sarcastic wit when talking to and thinking about Charlie. But I especially liked his reaction to seeing Bella for the first time, and Charlie's response to Edward saying he doesn't do chicks. Had me crying tears of laughter.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so it's on to the next chapter, which I hope is just as entertaining as this one.
Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Story Time
Update I wana here more of Ednerd =p
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Story Time
You are a awesome but of couse you must know that by your reviews i do like charlie waiting to see where this goin I LOVE BELLA !!!!!!!! mommy and BIG bicth now ! and who would't love EDWARD (thugward yummy)
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