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Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Babes and Toys
Ellie's quite perceptive, hah! :) I'm so glad those two got to release the pressure, at least for a while.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Guests
bella kicked c's ass to cool
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Guests
Great chapter. Trouble seems to be coming at them from all sides, huh?
Why did Bella kill Bree? What's the story behind that? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Story Time
Oh dear, and they were soooo close, too... Nice going, fun stuff!
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Guests
wait wtf?!
she killed her?!
y?!
omg!
more! more! i want more!
please? ill give you a cookie!
annnnnd alice and renee are in the next chapter?!?!?!?!? omg! *i am a kid in a freaking candy store right now!!!! =^o^=*
ok PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
ill love you forever!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:34 PM · On: The Trainer
A very promising first chapter! I'll definitely keep on reading.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Temptations
Ahhh the pack is back...mmmmm gotta love the pack.
Time with Ellie is just the sweetest thing...and that little girl is definatly one smart cookie...
Wonder if Jasper has got Mr. Jenks to start singing...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Babes and Toys
Well all Ican say is...It's about damn time that Edward gave in...LOL yes the look on Edward's face was priceless to say the least
Pads off to read more....
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Guests
oh,I don't hate Bella...Had it been me I would have done worse.. ;D He had it coming.You know what they say;the most dangerous animal on this planet is a mother protecting her young. ;D
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Story Time
Jesus! Charlie is sucha crime boss...kind of a nice change for his character...LOL
Alice is Bella's half sister huh...should be really interesting when Jasper gets to meet her...
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Guests
Shit I can't hate her for what she did. I'm actually impressed with the way she handled Carlise.
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Guests
This is so good! It would make a great movie!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Wet
Yup those two are dead, dead, DEAD! But what a way to go eh...
Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Guests
Oh Wow!! Bella packs a Punch!! LOL
I wonder what Carlisle wants to be so persistant...LOL obviously not an ass whooping.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Tease
Well well well...our little Bella is quit the tease alright...poor Edward is so screwed...LOL
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Guests
Hmm... I don't think Bella meant for the last sentence to sound like it did. I think she's taking the blame for Bree's death thinking that she'd caused it. Bree got too involved.
Nah... not hatin' on Bella, nor Carlisle either. They were both desperate and desperate people do insane or unspeakable things.
I love the update!! Hope to see you again soon. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:15 PM · On: The Assessment
Nope don't blame the girl one bit...on the contrary I am surprised she lasted that long. That bastard James better not find her if he knows what's good for him...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: The Trainer
Well hot damn .... let the games begin.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Guests
I love how Ellie doesn't like Jake :) Something tells me that someone in the pack will betray Edward and Bella
Reviewer: starfish_fairy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Guests
I don't hate Bella she was reacting like a mother. I probably would have done the same thing. Fucking Carlisle, I'm sure he has his reasons but come on using a mother and child is low.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Guests
Yeah, but I would've gone for his junk...
;)
Awesome chappie!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Guests
Woah, that totally threw me for a loop. She killed her?? And you think I'm worried about her kicking Carlisle's annoying ass?! Damn!
Thanks for coming back to the story. I know RL gets in the way, but it's always nice to return to a favorite story, no matter how long the time has been between updates!
Great chapter; hope there's more soon!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Guests
James is the one who really killed Bree right? Bella just feels responsible. I can't imagine here killing someone. Great job!
Reviewer: aaa (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Guests
That was great!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Guests
she killed her?
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