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Reviews For Training the Swan
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Confessions

OH HO HOOOO!!!!

HAHA ALICE IS PIIIIISSED!!!!

yea i cant really blame her either.... OHHHH I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

 

im sure you'll also be putting some alice/jasper stuff in there?!?! I HOPE SOOO!!!!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: Starla ann grace (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Confessions

it's been so long i love this story and i will be as patient as possible waiting for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Confessions

holy crap WOMAN you're writing 22 stories! slooow dooowwn

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Confessions

Well this was a mass of information, wasn't it?! Great way to suck me back in. :)

Thanks for the update - can't wait for more!

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Confessions

God I love this story!!!  It's sooo different from all of the others I've read....  Sorry I couldn't review till now but I just couldn't stop reading till I got caught up.  I especially like this Charlie!!  LOL   I can't wait for updates!!!!

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Confessions

Wow, Alice is one scary 19 year old. I wonder how next chapter's gonna go. This was an amazing chapter and I'm glad they realize how truly greatand strong their love for each other is. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Confessions

hey thhis chap i really good tis good they have finally accepted each other

Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Confessions

yeah, keep it coming baby! (sorry to call you baby it just came out, I am totally into this story)  THANKS!

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Confessions

 WHOA!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Confessions

well once alice knows everything... i have a feeling that she will feel really bad about how she thought of bella... also is alice and jasper going to start something or is she too young for him?

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Confessions

GAH!!  This is one of my favorites!  I'm SO HAPPY you came back to it!  You really do have a lot on your plate!  Maybe you can pick a couple and just focus on them alternately to get them finished, then move on to a couple more.  I think almost all your stories are on my faves :) 

I'm so happy they finally really opened up to each other!  Whatever comes now, they can present a united front and make it through together. 

Hope you update soon!!

Kisses!

Reviewer: GinaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Confessions

♥ ♥ ♥ Love this story and so glad you have updated! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Confessions

Good chapter! Can't wait to see what Alice's reaction is.

Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Confessions

I really love this story already.

I love the way Charlie is portrayed!

Hannah

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Confessions

wow alice is pissed

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Confessions

You're back with this story!! YAY!!!!!!

I loved as per usual. 

Can't wait to read Alice's reaction :D

Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Confessions

Noooooo! It can't be over already! Please hurry and update again! Can't wait for Alices reaction to everything!

Reviewer: wicked (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Confessions

It's understandable have a lot on your plate, but I really do love this story and can't wait to read more.  But like I said, understandable, and I'm attempting to learn patience.

Anyhow, I think when Alice finds out what's been going on, she might regret that slap a little.  Cause yeah, hitting an abused woman after said woman is trying to get away from the abuse, yeah. 

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Confessions

GREAT CHAPTER!!! i cant wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Confessions

The next chapter is gonna be good I can tell.

Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Tease

EEEE! *cheering wildly* I love a dirty talking Edward!

Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:07 AM · On: The Trainer

It's original, I like it.

Reviewer: AuroraJean (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Guests

dammnnnn.... it's getting good:)

one problem though: that ending there requires an update to this story asap:) haha

but all in all, this story is pretty legit. nice job so far.

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Guests

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!! lovve this story!!

Reviewer: 53baby (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Guests

Oh damn, cliffhanger alert!!

I loved that line in one of the previous chapters "It is my god given right to protect my baby."

That's right Bella!!

 

Pleeeeeeease continue!

THis story is seriously amazing!

baby xx

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