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Reviews For Training the Swan
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 04:56 PM · On: Leah

Really great story very sad it wasn't completed

Author's Response:

I'm actually almost finished with it on Fanfiction.net. I am under ericastwilight on that site. The only reason I have not updated on here is due to the long process. I do plan to eventually. Not sure when though. 

 

Erica

Reviewer: bellaswan11 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Leah

True, ellie has a crush! i love this and it is definetly going on my favourties



Author's Response:

I thought I'd let you know, due to the time that its been since I updated, I started to repost with new scenes and details. But on fanfiction. net. Sorry, it just takes too long to do anything productive on Twilighted so I stopped updating here. I'm under ericastwilight on ff.net

 

Thanks 

 

Erica

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 01:04 AM · On: Leah

squeee a date!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 05:28 PM · On: Show Me What She Can Do

I am so looking forward to seeing what Bellas got I hope she can kick butt...For Edward sake and his "training skills" and for her if James ever gets her.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 05:08 PM · On: Like Mother, Like Daughter

What an amazing little girl just wow...I hope nothing bad happens to her it would kill this yourng blossoming family...

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Confessions

Damn shes a lively version of teh Alice we all know and love gee golly!! wow!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 03:30 PM · On: Guests

OH SNAP Bella has more in her closet then even Edward knew thats aweome and yet even more lethal....

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 03:09 PM · On: Sweat, Blood and Tears

Poor Bella this has been one hell of a day for her..The last 24 hours just cruel reminders of why shes doing what she has to do I hope she realizes soon that Edward more then cares for her..

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Temptations

squeeee OMG The pack was epic loved how Sam just waltzed in there!!  Squee push ups and pull ups will never look teh same again hahaha

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Story Time

man I hoe tehy can change Cahrlies mind I mean a toy can only scratch teh itch but it won't alleviate it for long... And poor Edward he might need a toy before he starts getting rug burn on his hand lol

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Wet

omg omg omg this got hot fast!!!  I feel so perverted loving this but what the heck I'll just jump in the pool to cool down

Epic love love love

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Tease

OMG OMG UH OH!!!!  I couldn't blame Bella I mean if shes been in a loveless amrriage for god knows how long obviosly awhile if she has a daughter then seeing eye candy liek Edward would make anyones horones to jumping jacks heheheh

 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 08:03 AM · On: The Assessment

oh snap oh snap oh snap.........squeee

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 07:50 AM · On: The Trainer

Squeee looking forward to this  ride woo hoo!!!

Reviewer: sam681 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 06:20 AM · On: Leah

lol, he is such a guy.

Reviewer: vvmarquez (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 04:03 AM · On: Leah

Hi, I'm loving this story, are you updating soon?

Reviewer: Kanergirl88 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Leah

it is getting so good

can u please add more chapters?

Reviewer: alsouthernbelle03 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Leah

 

Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Babes and Toys

what kind of a 5 year old talks like that!?!?!?!!?

I mean seriously!!?? how can she say that "Jasper is hot"!!!!!!!

nd " go get het" !!! she's only a child for godsake!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bitemeverywhere (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:41 AM · On: Leah

Please update this. Its been far too long

Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:24 PM · On: Leah

I love it!!!

Reviewer: ladymalfoy (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Leah

Wonderful story :) Please, would you finish it as soon as possible??

Reviewer: ladymalfoy (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Babes and Toys

Hahaha, Ellie is a cute kid :)

Reviewer: ladymalfoy (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 04:46 AM · On: The Assessment

I've read this before and I must say, this is one of my favorite stories.  I mean, I hate James, but I like that Bella and Edward get together.  Thanks for writing an awesome story!

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Leah

great part.

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