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Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
i love carlisle!
Reviewer: megipegi (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
really great. especially the whole in-the-head and out loud thoughts
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that came out well.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
i love carlisle, maybe even more than i love edward. you've captured his voice so well. thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
I love this little father and son chat between Carlisle and Edward.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dnhjohnson (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Wonderful. This is so much better than the versions with the lemons!
Author's Response: I've never come across another version, so I can't compare, but I'm glad you think so! :)
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
I thought this conversation was pretty realisitic I liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
love the ending, and love Carlisle ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
That was very sweet and awkward at the same time. Great job! I love father/son interactions between Carlisle and Edward.
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: I love Carlisle & Edward's relationship, too. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
That was a very sweet story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: tscot (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Nice! Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Yay! That was extremely entertaining and I think you should continue it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not sure this conversation goes anywhere else, but I am toying with the idea of writing about Edward's similar talks with Emmett and Jasper.
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
doctor's orders = awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks. That was the original title, but I thought the current one was better. Glad you thought it was a funny line, though. :)
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Very nicely written, and all in canon. I enjoyed it - thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Very nice! I like that Carlisle was so earnest in speaking with Edward when I'm sure he really felt like having a chuckle!
Author's Response: It is a sort of funny situation: talking to your 105-year-old vampire "son" about sexing his woman for the first time. Carlisle was very open when I asked him about this conversation. :)
Reviewer: Bjornsdotter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Nicely done! Poor Edward, I sure he was quite embarrassed while having this discussion. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Ha ha. I feel sorry for him, too. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
That was wonderful. I love that moment between Edward and Carlisle, and you gave Carlisle just the right degree of affection and detachment to get them both through that conversation. Very nice!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Nice. I like this alot. For a one-shot it does leave room open for expansion. Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
This was a nice little fic. I enjoy nervous Edward. He is a teenage virgin vampire after all!
Author's Response: Yes, and the consummate gentleman. I imagine how awkward that must have been for him. :)
Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
I love one-shots in general and yours in particular! Please keep writing them!
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. :)
Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Fatherly Advice--One Shot
Very good job keeping the characters true!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so!
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