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Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
nice story!!
Reviewer: bubble6671 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Please update this story its been like this for months
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: Consequences
Okay, that was well written but I can't continue. I hope you understand. I feel that Twilight is about how love can fix the broken things in our life. I guess I identify too strongly with that message. The story is nice and well done.
Maria
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Stranger
Nicely done! I haven't read a fic with this premise before!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
i love it.
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Wow, this is some emotional stuff. I hope they make it to Jasper in time. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: nena (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Life, After
Well, I am definitely hooked on this story and cant wait for more. Please post a new chapter(s) soon. :) Great writing. On one of the chapters I actually got emotional when Alice and Edward were killed. I like the twist of Jasper and Bella. Again cant wait til the next chapters to see where the story goes.
Brenda
Reviewer: ILuvLaurent224 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
awesome I love it can't wait til the next chapter...
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
i'm liking the story.it makes me cry...update soon and keep up the awesome work
Reviewer: grniys (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Oh wow, this is just simply amazing. So sad and deep.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
i know authors want reviews and i haven't at all yet for this story, but honestly, i just couldn't wait to go to the next chapter. i love this story, please, please post soon.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
=(
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Life, After
*tears x2* poor bella
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Consequences
*tears* boo hoo
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Stranger
“But Alice, Athens has the Acropolis. You used to shop there, didn’t you?” LOL LOL great line
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Oh, Jasper.... Jazzy, jazz, Jasper. Poor guy, all this had to be terrible and then you've got it multiplied becasuse you feel what everyone else feels. This all so sad! It's a great read, just soooooooo upseting! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: seasons54 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Don't stop now....come on........bring us more....please.....
Excellent writing.
Reviewer: eddiesteddy (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
I love Jasper and Bella fics....this one seems great-Bella to the recsue?!Please update soon,as a good Jasper story is hard to find!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
I'm really starting to get into the flow of this story. Jasper has fallen into old hunting habits and has other vamps out for him, not good. I'm so happy the Cullens are going to try to take him home and reason with him. I feel so horrible for Bella and Jasper, I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!!!! I really am starting to like this story.....
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Your writing is excellent, I'll say that first off. However, I can't read stories where Bella and/or Edward are killed. They simply upset me too much. Trust me on this, because I've tried. Not to mention this one also has the death of everyone's favourite pixie. Perhaps they aren't dead after all. Perhaps they are with the Volturi and other bodies were burned in their place as a big, damn ruse, I don't know. All I do know is that I made it (somehow) through the first four chapters and I think I'm done. I'm sitting here now in such grief, there are simply no words. I cannot take stories like this, despite the quality of the writing. I just can't. Sorry.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
OMG, this is going to be an amazing story. This last chapter was very emotional. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Even though I just cried all the way through these 1st four chapters my heart breaking with every word i think it's beautiful. Crying from a story is in my mind a mark of an excellent writer {as is laughing outloud feeling anxiety suspicous etc} anything that causes the reader to uncontrolably physcially express the emotions being played out on the page.
There's no rambling no massive introspection events are occuring at normal speed. I appreciate the decription of Bella on the bookcase was in paragraphs not chapters.
I look forword to reading the rest even if it means I need more tissues.
Thank you
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
this story is tough to read the emotional part i mean
but i check everyday because i am hooked whats gonna happen is edward and alice alive will jasper come home will bella be able to deal
please update soon
AWESOME STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Its so sad!!! I still hope that the volturi ripped apart two of their own and burned them, and secretlly have Edward and Alice all mind warped in Italy working for them.
Reviewer: MaiseCorfu (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Jasper
Ohhhhhhhwwwwwh this is sad. I don't like it. I like Jasper Bella stories but hate them when Edward and Alice die. Why can't they just find each other as soulmates? Maybe Bella and Jasper are meant to be but they just don't know it? Read Naughty Girl. Its Bella/Jasper but in a way thats more exciting than sad, and makes you realise that Stephanie Meyer's characters are perhaps not meant to be and that Jasper and Bella have wanted each other all along. Good effort, but. Naughty Girl is better in my opinion. I've only read your one and Naughty Girl though, and they are both the best fanfics (cos they're Bella/Jasper) so...get some inspiration girl! I've just read this back and its sounds really horrible. What I was trying to get at was that this is just not my type of one, but I'm sure it's other peoples....just not mine I'm afraid. I will probably keep reading cos it IS bella/Jasper and they are the best pair IMO. Keep writing, I don't mean to be a downer. Sorry.
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